Talk:Neenach, California

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Resources[edit]

The following was originally part of the Resources section of the articles:

"Submitted by Lisa Wright 2005 with references from the Antelope Valley, Ridge Route, and Santa Clarita community historical societies – as well as information provided by private citizens of the area." —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.125.21.36 (talk • contribs) .

Wikipedia editors don't take ownership or credit for various Wikipedia articles, but I still thought that Lisa Wright should get some acknowledgment here on the Talk page. BlankVerse ∅ 05:45, 19 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I quite concur with my fellow editor above. Your work is very much appreciated, Lisa! --avnative 06:46, 19 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Population[edit]

Where did that 850 figure come from? Questioningly, GeorgeLouis (talk) 04:37, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestions[edit]

Hey, GeorgeLouis. I apologize for not getting to the article in due time; it's looking pretty good thus far.

Here's what I have to suggest:

Well, there is definitely enough material to formulate a good lead. Per the lead guideline, you could expand the lead to briefly touch on every part of the article in maybe two paragraphs.

Is Neenach connected to neighboring communities in any way, shape or form? If so, a Transportation section is in order.

Could the "Centennial Project" section be incorporated into the History section?

That's all I got for now; I need to go right now, but will get back as soon as I can.

Best, --Starstriker7(^{Dime algo}_{or see my works}) 19:48, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm back. I just got one more thing.

I know that you dislike putting infoboxes into articles, but an infobox is more of a place to put ZIP Code info than in a seperate communications section. I'd suggest that Neenach have one too, although it really is entirely up to you.

That's all for now. --Starstriker7(^{Dime algo}_{or see my works}) 20:17, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking. The Centennial project is more in the future and is not part of the history (yet), so I have adjusted the headers accordingly. There is dial-a-ride bus service, and I will add that. I will add an infobox, too. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 20:30, 1 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]