Talk:Muhanna ibn Isa

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Review: June 27, 2016. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Muhanna ibn Isa appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 23 December 2015 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the lord of Palmyra, Muhanna ibn Isa, twice defected to the Ilkhanate, but was forgiven by Sultan al-Nasir and returned to Mamluk authority?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Muhanna ibn Isa/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No copyvio or dablinks detected. External links work well. Fairly well-written and concise, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:27, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

He was described by historian Amalia Levanoni as "the eldest and most senior amir" of the Al Fadl during his era Appears only in the lead. It should also occur in the main article. The citation may be kept in the lead as this looks like a controversial claim.

Ancestry

Two of 'Isa's sons, Muhanna II...Al Fadl branches, respectively. Source?

Sources

What source is note 1 based on?
Can a few translated titles be added?

Thanks for taking all of these reviews Sainsf. I addressed everything above except those under the "Sources" section b/c I'm pretty much illiterate in Arabic. @Attar-Aram syria: could you help with this? --Al Ameer (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Transtitles are just a suggestion, but the source for the note is necessary. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:45, 24 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Al Ameer son The only concern before I can promote this is the source for the note. Translation is not mandatory. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:02, 26 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I added the source for the note.--Attar-Aram syria (talk) 06:59, 27 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I can promote this now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:27, 27 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]