Talk:Micah Joseph Lebensohn

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A fact from Micah Joseph Lebensohn appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 12 November 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Micah Joseph Lebensohn (pictured) began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/November. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Micah Joseph Lebensohn.

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 04:56, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Micah Joseph Lebensohn

... that Micah Joseph Lebensohn began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve? Source: [1]

** ALT1:... that Micah Joseph Lebensohn translated works into Hebrew from German, Italian, French, and Polish? Source: [2], [3], [4]

Reviewed: Did you know nominations/Interstate 180 (Nebraska)

5x expanded by Ploni (talk). Self-nominated at 02:04, 14 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

@Ploni: DYK Check shows the article has not 5x expanded yet in the past 10 days. Htanaungg (talk) 11:48, 16 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

More specifically, Ploni, it was 1309 prose characters before your edits, and it's currently 4537, meaning another 2008 would be required for a five times expansion. Can you further expand the article? MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 20:44, 16 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing! I may not have the chance to work on it for the next while, so feel free to reject the nomination if I haven't 5× expanded it within 10 days after the initial expansion. –Ploni (talk) 01:04, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Alternatively, Ploni, you could nominate it for GA. If this passes the GAN, we can approve the nomination. On a quick look, I think the article is fine, and sources look okay for a GA. Can you try that way round? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:58, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Good idea. I'll go ahead and nominate it. –Ploni (talk) 13:49, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Htanaungg – Article is now a GA. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:15, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

New review needed now that article qualifies as a GA; no 5× expansion needed any more. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA on 26 October, long enough 4796 char, cited, neutral, no apparent copyvios (Earwig notes use of titles and quotes), image appears to be freely distributable, QPQ done. Hook 0 is 88 char, is cited in the article and verified in the source above. Hook 1 is 99 char, but is not cited in the article. (This source says he translated from French, German, and Polish, while this one says he translated Vittorio Alfieri's Saul, but it does not specify that it was originally written in Italian. But the languages he translated from are not listed in the article.) Striking hook 1. GTG with 0. SusunW (talk) 14:23, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

To T:DYK/P3

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Micah Joseph Lebensohn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nominator: Ploni (talk · contribs) at 13:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll attempt to review this. Comments soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments[edit]

Mention in the prose the date of his birth and death.
In the biography section, we start by writing about his teenage: As a teenager, Lebensohn, ..., then we move back to age 12,and began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve ..., then back to teenage: At the age of sixteen he.... Make it chronological.
By the late 1840s, Lebensohn discovered the first symptoms of tuberculosis. – Not sure what "first symptom" is. Better to write it as "early symptoms of tuberculosis"
he attended the philosphy lectures of Schelling at the university – Is it a typo, or you intended to write is as "philosphy", not "philosophy". Also, suggesting to rephrase as "he attended the philosphy/philosophy lectures of Schelling at the Humboldt University of Berlin"
'Prayer, Daughter of Hearts.' – full stop outside the single quotation (MOS:QUOTEMARKS) Please correct me if I am wrong
among other works.^[11]^[5] – Ref 5 should be before 11.
on the death of M. A. Günzburg.^[11]^[7] – Same as above. 7 should be before 11.
In the Jewish Encyclopedia (1904), Herman Rosenthal and Peter Wiernik [Wikidata] write that – "[...] wrote that"
File:Micha Josef Lebensohn.jpg – How can we claim that the author died 70 years ago, when we don't know who the author is? When was it first published.
Rest seems fine. Nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:50, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback! I've made the suggested improvements. –Ploni (talk) 15:58, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Happy to pass then. Good work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:08, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.