Talk:Marvin Harrison Jr./GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Lead

• The lead should be expanded to include his high school career.
  • I expanded it but it was reverted due to perceived bloat, I'm going to leave it as is, rather than start an edit conflict.
    • And I reverted the change. MOS:LEAD is pretty clear that the the lead should summarize the entire article. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:52, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

  @Gonzo fan2007 Is there anything else that needs be fixed? Newtothisedit (talk) 17:49, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

  • Newtothisedit, nope, I'll pass it shortly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:56, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

• Coming out of high school Harrison was a four star prospect ranked the nations 14th best receiver recruit., add "as" after "ranked"
  • Done
• as well as the schools atmosphere, "schools" should be "school's"
  • Done

College career

• In the Buckeyes season opener against Notre Dame, "Buckeyes" should be "Buckeyes'"
  • Done
• In his first game as the teams #1 receiver Harrison caught, add comma after "receiver"
  • Done
• The following week he had his second consecutive 100-yard game with 102 yards on 6 catches and two touchdowns in a blowout win over Toledo., should reference 29 be attributed to this sentence?
  • Done

Images

• Both images look good, freely licensed.

References

• Be consistent with the website field. Either choose the .com or the name (i.e. Yahoo vs Yahoo.com)
  • Changed to publication title for all sources except for sources from Cleveland.com. Cleveland.com is the name of the publication, hence why it was not changed.
• Be consistent with the date fields (2023-01-16 vs January 16, 2023)
  • Done
• Be consistent with linking sources (Ref 5 has The Patriot-News linked, while other papers aren't linked).
  • Done
• Refs 17, 18 and 19 need access-date
• Done
• Spot checks look good.

Overall looks really good. Gonna put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

@Gonzo fan2007 I believe that I have addressed everything. Newtothisedit (talk) 16:27, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

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