Talk:Khawaja Muhammad Zaman of Luari

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Source material of References[edit]

Original text of references with English translation (One reference is based on a website which is in English):

Reference no. 2: میان محمد زمان: یے مشھور مرشد میان ابوالقاسم نقشبندی اور میان محمد نقشبندی ٹھٹوی کے مرید تھے۔ بڑے باھدایت اور سلسلہ نقشبندی کے مرشد اور بزرگ تھے۔ بدین کے قریب لواری مین سکونت پذیر رھے اور ایک دنیا کو اپنے فیض سے سیراب کرتے رھے۔ لا تعداد لوگون کا خیال ھے کے وہ اپنے زمانے مین بینظیر تھے۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔۱۱۸۸ھ مین رحلت پائ۔ (https://archive.org/stream/Tuhfat-ul-kiramurduTranslation/00444_Tuhfat-ul-Kiram-ur#page/n593/mode/2up) English translation: Mr Muahammd Zaman: This famous mentor and spiritual guide was disciple of Mr Abul Qasim Naqshbandi and Mr Muhammad Naqshbandi Thattwi. He was an enlightened mentor and guide of Naqshabandi sect of sufism. He lived in Luwari near Badin Sindh. Benefited masses of people through his knowledge and wisdom. Many people think that he was very distinguished and unmatched in his time. He died in 1188 H.

Reference no. 3: هڪ مشهور روايت موجب هڪ دفعي شاه عبدالطيف ڀٽائ لواري آيو، جتي خواجا محمد زمان سان ملاقات ڪيائين۔ https://archive.org/details/SharahAbyatSindhi English translation: According to a famous legend Shah Abdul Latif Bhittai once came to Luwari and met with Khawaja Muhammad Zaman. --Ubed junejo (talk) 20:50, 7 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Reference no. 1 {on Poetry section: Talpur, Abdul Karim (1972). "Maqoolat-e-Tassawuf". archives.org. Retrieved May 9, 2014.Page no. 16}: بيت:پاڻ ڪيترايُ بيت چيا اٿن جن جو تعداد ٨٤ آھي۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ ۔ بيشڪ معني جا موتي آھن۔ ھر ھڪ بيت مِ تصوف جا باريڪ نڪتا سمايل آھن۔

English Translation: He has said many poems which are about 84........ Verily these poems are pearls in their own right. Each and every poem contains deep mysteries of sufism in it.--Ubed junejo (talk) 15:10, 11 May 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ubed junejo (talk • contribs) 15:00, 11 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, @Ubed junejo: as the main contributor may I ask you to spread the references around the claims in the article's context so that the majority of the material is sourced. This would help the article very much, in style and verifiability, and we can finally remove the maintenance tag from it. Hope you'll do your best, sincerely - Phill24th (talk) 18:03, 4 June 2014 (UTC).[reply]

Ya sure dear Phill24th , I will do it and will notify you when I am finished with it.

Kind regards--Ubed junejo (talk) 21:52, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Too many sections[edit]

There are too many unneeded sections, I think that we should merge Early life and education, Meeting with Shah Abdul Latif Bhittai, and Death into one section seeming how short they are; and furthermore, try to expand the one on his poetry. Phill24th (talk) 17:56, 9 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Phill24th: Yes please, you can merge them. You are right that these sections are short. And for the section of poetry though I have lot of material but I fear that I will be unable to translate abstract sufi terminology and his mystic message into English properly. I will try my best but it may take time. Kind regards--Ubed junejo (talk) 22:50, 9 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Dates[edit]

It would be good if more of the events can be dated. Of course if reliable dates can't be found it's better to leave them as they are. All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 22:03, 10 May 2014 (UTC).