Talk:Kellee Santiago

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:46, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:46, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "and intended to pursue it after beginning a a master's degree" change beginning to earning and remove the second a
• "which she describes as "simple, but so effective and so evocative" in instilling emotion in the player" since there's a quote, sentence should have a cite.
• "where she played video games from a young age and was encouraged by her software engineer to experiment with computers" note that her father is a software engineer. it makes sense in the body, but in the lead it just sounds like she was randomly living with a software engineer at some point.
• "In addition to her role as president of he company," the company

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:22, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

All fixed. Perhaps that "father" morphed into an "a" and wandered over several sentences? --PresN 04:59, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Somethin must be in the water, every article i'm reviewing tonight is getting fixed nearly instantly. :) Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:27, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Kellee Santiago has left thatgamecompany in March 2012

news source: EuroGamer

Her CV on her website lists 2006-2012 as her period at thatgamecompany

Someone needs to update this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.154.166.28 (talk) 00:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

The article was updated in March, but the first sentence suggests she's still president. I'll fix that. Reach Out to the Truth 15:50, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

The segment that says she's now working at Ouya should not be under "thatgamecompany." There should be a "Post thatgamecompany" section or the naming system has to be changed. 180.42.119.26 (talk) 16:46, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

Fast Company mention

I'm always nervous about messing up good articles :) It might be nice to mention someplace that she was listed as one of the top 100 most influential women in technology in 2011. SarahStierch (talk) 23:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Added! Feel free to mess up good articles- by definition they can always be improved! --PresN 03:41, 26 October 2012 (UTC)