Talk:Jack Peñate

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Would suggest that entire article is flagged for clean-up as it's VERY poorly written. For example, the section describing his schooling reads as though he left prep school at 18; for those unfamiliar with the British independent/public school system, prep school is junior school in the state system (elementary school in the US and Canada) and is from between 7 and 11 years of age. Prior to that, kids attend pre-prep from the age of 3 or 4. Upper - or senior - school is from 11-18, though some will attend a separate school/college for 6th Form (16-18) to do A-Levels.

I'd also suggest the entire article be totally rewritten, as the language is well below par for a Wikipedia article, leading me to believe the author's first language isn't English (punctuation appears to have been thrown in as an afterthought, making it awkward to read. Full-stops have been inserted where a semicolon would be more appropriate, as the new 'sentence' isn't a sentence at all, but a secondary clause. I'd also suggest any mentions of people or places which are known to have their own entries should be linked (that doesn't read very well, but I'm INCREDIBLY tired, and I find it impossible to compose coherent sentences when I'm tired (I have fibromyalgia)).

I'd do it myself, but I don't know sufficient about its subject to do it justice.

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this article doesnt explain what TYPE of music he plays, I read it all and Im no more enlightened than i was beforehand. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.153.87.23 (talk) 09:01, 22 December 2009 (UTC)

Fingers

There was an odd bit of information claiming that Jack had an extra finger, thus increasing his guitar-playing prowess. Having found NO supporting information for this claim, I deleted it. Snorgle (talk) 13:51, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Indeed, the photo currently in the article clearly shows enough of his left hand that you can see that it's false. --64.231.233.49 (talk) 08:44, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

See also

In the "See also" section is no explanation why the link to Bastille(band) exists. If there is a association, please explain, otherwise delete. Mmiikkee (talk) 19:58, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

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