Talk:HMS Jupiter (1895)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 14:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
- "Namesake" in the infobox needs a cite. Otherwise include it in the prose and cite it.
- I can't find a citation for it, so I've removed it.
- " all future British battleship classes had circular barbettes." -- what were the advantages of circular barbettes?
- Conway's doesn't say, but I'd guess it's mostly a savings in weight to allow for more armor elsewhere.
- "In 1908 and rendered obsolete by the emergence of the dreadnought class of battleships, " -- in the lead but not in the text. Needs to be cited.
- Added a line on the advent of dreadnoughts in the body.
- Also, which classes of battleship rendered this one obsolete? And what advances on their technology?
- See above.
- "After that she became an accommodation ship." -- what is an accommodation ship? Please clarify.
- Linked to barracks ship.
- Dup link tool returns two results: flagship and Devonport.
- Fixed.