Talk:Gau (Final Fantasy)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 03:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Will take this on in the coming days Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 03:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Apologies for taking so long, here we go.

Six GA Criteria

1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.

2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.

3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.

4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.

5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.

6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale, and uses one music file with proper rationale.

Lead

-Looks good

Conception and design

-Looks good

Appearances

-"something that Gau takes to heart and is happy just to see his father is alive as the group departs" I'd reword this due to the weird wording on this.

• Reworded

-"Rage allows him to select from a list an enemy's attack pattern to mimic, otherwise known as rages." Again, a reword since this is pretty confusing.

• Tried to reword this bits. Let me know if it's clearer.

Critical Reception

-"is to stop the person that destroyed the world" Who?

• Fixed

-"to expressing his caring for his friends at the finale" I'd choose a different word than caring since that doesn't really seem to be grammatically correct

• Fixed

-"As the them progresses" Reword since I'm not sure what your intent was here.

• Fixed

Overall

-Look good overall, just make some minor touch-ups and we'll be good to go here. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 03:54, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

• All fixed! Let me know if anything else needs tweaking!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 13:49, 5 May 2024 (UTC)