Talk:French battleship Carnot/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 22:53, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

• " the secondary turrets had 101 mm thick sides" -- needs a convert template.
  • The same measurement is converted in the previous sentence, and general practice is to convert only once.
• "Carnot was laid down in Toulon in July 1891 and launched three years later in July 1894. She was completed another three years after that" -- So...was she sailing around for three years half-finished? Clarify what was still being constructed after launch.
  • Have a look now, it should be more clear.
• Dup link tool returns one result: French battleship Brennus
  • Fixed, thanks for catching that.
• Refs check out, all footnotes check out. ISBNs for older periodicals don't exist of course.

Well...that's about it. Because of the article's small size there isn't a lot to say, though I think given the subject matter it is ample enough for GA. Just holding for minor points and a clarification. —Ed!^(talk) 23:15, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, these late-19th century ships don't have much written on them, especially if they didn't see action in World War I. Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 23:37, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Passing GA. great work. —Ed!^(talk) 00:00, 10 July 2012 (UTC)