Talk:Elis Paprika

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Revising the article and citations[edit]

I'm dropping some of what I wrote in the AfD here as a starting point for improving the article. I'm not sure I have the time and energy to overhaul the article myself but I will list more specific concerns there. Here are a few to start. Promotional material without verifiable and reliable sources needs to be rewritten. If you have a conflict of interest (e.g., if you are part of the band or management) you should confine your input to the talk page. Overall, the article lacks an impartial tone and a neutral point of view. Please read WP:BETTER which outlines some of specifics for writing an article. You can use this Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL), particularly the news link, it will give you possible sources for citations. Cheers, Mark Ironie (talk) 17:43, 21 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Here are general guidelines possible sections and structure for a musician article. WP:WikiProject Musicians/Article guidelines (unsigned comment left by Mark Ironie (talk) shortly after the one immediately above)

Hello. I have made several edits on this article over the week, based on suggestions from Mark Ironie, and after reading guidelines for articles in Wikipedia. I believe I have eliminated any promotional material, and any partial language originally included in it. I am certain that I have also eliminated a couple of contentious statements that were in the article. I did not have a lot of experience editing, and I'm still learning, but I have begun involving myself with other articles (first with ones linked to the Elis Paprika article), in order to learn and not be an SPA. Thank you for the input, and I hope this helps with the AfD this article is in. Cachizalo (talk) 19:25, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I was about to withdraw the AfD nomination but since another editor weighed in, that is no longer an option. I've placed a large number of tags at the top of the article. These are to help other editors focus on those specific issues with the article. As an example, take a look at Annie Lennox. This is a relatively well-sourced article. Any well-known musician article will (or should) have similar sourcing so look up your favs as possible examples. Wikipedia is a collaborative project and other editors can be very helpful in your work here. Some of the editors at WikiProject Musicians might be helpful. Cheers, Mark Ironie (talk) 19:59, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I removed template messages for POV, cleanup rewrite, fanPOV, and original research as these issues have been fixed over the last editions made to the article during the week after the AfD nomination. I have also added new, non external sources, and begun cleanup of unreliable and/or dead source links. Still working on more details overhauling this article. Cachizalo (talk) 19:21, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Unless editors show up !voting to delete the article (unlikely, I think), Elis Paprika will most probably be kept and not deleted. So there's that. Cheers, Mark Ironie (talk) 20:04, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I erased template message for external links as issue was corrected. Erased template message for primary sources as issue was corrected after recent editing. Cachizalo (talk) 21:02, 6 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I removed the template for multiple issues, as these issues have been resolved since they were pointed out over 2 and a half years ago. There are now many more references for the article's sections, and sources have been changed to newspaper, magazine and other formal media. Cachizalo (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 06:10, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]