Talk:Darker than Black: Gemini of the Meteor/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 21:08, 30 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Links[edit]

Prose[edit]

Lede[edit]

Hei; Hei - can we reword? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.
Is "collected" the right word? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done.
Have we got a link for OVA? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Added.
Presumably it was also aired/released in Japan? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Clarified.
the audience does not know what changed his - according to whom? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Revised
storyline received a mixed response - by whom? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Revised.

@Lee Vilenski: Thanks for the review. Feel free to ping me if I failed to address any issue.Tintor2 (talk) 21:22, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General[edit]

Do we need to specify it was an excel spreadsheet? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Trimmed to just the hint.

shojo is accented. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You mean the macron right?

Léon (Jean Reno) and Mathilda Lando (Natalie Portman) - this all seems like too much info/tangeant. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Trimmed

An Anime UK News reviwer - spelling, also if we don't know who, is this sentence even worth saying? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:53, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Revised.

@Lee Vilenski: Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 12:18, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments[edit]

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:08, 30 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]