Talk:Cameron Winslow

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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-class status:
Referencing and citation: criterion not met Coverage and accuracy: criterion not met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion met Supporting materials: criterion met

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Assessment comment[edit]

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ARTICLE STRENGTHS:

It's a very good start to the article, and features some pertinant information. As mentioned on the mil-hist assessment, it's got some supporting materials, such as an infobox.

ARTICLE WEAKNESSESS

There's a big problem with the references. It cites only one source, and it isn't one that we can easily check.
It has no defined structure, as there only seems to be a conglomerate of information

SUGGESTIONS

Flesh out the infobox, a picture would be nice.
find some more references and sources.

Cam 03:27, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Last edited at 03:27, 31 May 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 10:46, 29 April 2016 (UTC)