Talk:Brand X (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:39, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Review

Lead

• "critcs" >> "critics"
• "the witness dies mysteriously who was due to testify against the Morley cigarette company" >> "the witness who was due to testify against the Morley cigarette company dies mysteriously"
• "soon discover is that a new brand" >> "soon discover that a new brand"
• "The scenes featuring the insects took up to a full day to film." >> "Those scenes took up to a full day to film."

Plot

• "the life of one Dr. James Scobie" >> "the life of Dr. James Scobie"
• "floor, his face ripped" >> "floor, with his face ripped"
• delinked "thoracic surgery".
• delinked "nicotine"

Writing

• Reduced the image to 190px.
• Okay

Filming

• Okay

Broadcast and reception >> Reception

• 11th Hour Magazine >> 11th Hour Magazine
• "the episode's loss in direction" >> "the its loss in direction"

References

• Okay

Well, i finished my review and made some minor changes. Since nothing is left to be done, i'm passing the article. —Hahc21 00:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc21 00:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)