Talk:Battle of Orbetello/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
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Infobox[edit]
- No issues
Lead[edit]
- The Battle of Orbetello (also known as the Battle of Isola del Giglio)[3] was a major naval engagement of the Franco-Spanish War of 1635, → End the first sentence here to comply with WP:BEGINNING
- ...when another Spanish army led by Marquis of Torrecuso and Duke of Arcos which had come from the Kingdom of Naples across the Papal States, → Add comma between "Arcos" and "which"
Background[edit]
- For this purpose was gathered in Toulon a fleet... → Fix prose of this phrase
Battle[edit]
- Fix the sentences where the sentences start with numbers that are not spelled out
Aftermath[edit]
- Fix the prose of the image description in this section to make it more understandable
Notes[edit]
- No issues
References[edit]
- No issues
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)