Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2015/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:14, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

• I've copy-edited the article for some changes I felt were uncontroversial instead of listing them here.
• "the nation had participated in the Eurovision Song Contest eleven times since its first entry in 2004" I'd rewrite this "the nation had participated in every edition of the Eurovision Song Contest since its first entry in 2004."
• ", to this point," Seems unnecessary, should be cut.
• "The first entry was performed by" to "Its 2004 entry was performed by"
• "During its tenure in the contest, Albania failed to qualify for the final four times" to "Albania has previously failed to qualify for the final four times"
• Festivali i Këngës isn't in a lang tag in the Background section.
• "broadcast at 20:45 (CET) on the respective dates" I'd remove "on the respective dates", it's obvious from context.
• "Shllaku disclaimed professional responsibility" Professional responsibility for what?
• Images are properly licensed and used. The references reliable and properly sourced. I spot-checked a couple sources and found nothing off
• Nit required at the GA level, but the Albanian refs should have a translated title in English.
• That's all I got.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

@AryKun: I don't know what's happened to @Iaof2017: but if he doesn't return, I can swoop in and take this over from him. Let me know how many days more you're willing to wait on this one. Grk1011 (talk) 13:31, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Hi @AryKun: I've made most of the requested changes plus some additional copyedits and expansions to make sure this aligns with broadness. Please check it out. I will look at the other articles in this series over the next couple days! Grk1011 (talk) 15:25, 26 March 2024 (UTC)