Talk:1: Nenokkadine/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:56, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have this done today or tomorrow JAGUAR 14:56, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments[edit]

The lead is perfect. I couldn't find any issues here
A couple of paragraphs in the Plot section could easily be merged in order to improve prose flow. I think the last five paragraphs are fairly short and some of them could be merged
Belfast is linked twice in the Plot section
"According to his doctor, if Gautham can hallucinate a person other than the three men he can be treated" - comma needed in between "men" and "he"
"Antonio Rosarios, a Goa-based crime boss who wants to kill her because she tried to expose the presence of hydrogen cyanide in seeds sold by AG1 (his company)" - who's company? Rosarios?
"Gautham learns that the aged taxi driver he met previously is really a businessman" - remove 'really', sounds a tad informal
"Rathnavelu shifted from chrome to black-and-white to full colour in sync with the story's mood" - synchronisation
"The next schedule, which began on 18 June, filmed in London and Belfast for 60 days" - delink London and Belfast here, both are already linked previously in the article
"Rathnavelu called the action scene in a London 'parking lot" - car park
"1: Nenokkadine received generally-negative reviews from critics" - why is there a hyphen here? I use "generally negative/positive" without the hyphen, it should be fine to lose it
No dead links

On hold[edit]

Is this a one I should watch? I remember watching the trailer and I can understand why some of the reviews are negative. The article is great, it is well written, well sourced and I couldn't find one issue with any of the sources. Once all of the minor points above are addressed, I'll be happy to promote this! JAGUAR 21:17, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar: 1: Nenokkadine is a case of wasted opportunities. Except for some four or five sequences, nothing actually impress us and it is its inherent issue. But what i loved was its intermission sequence and the fight in the car park. Anyways, thanks for reviewing the article, Jaguar. I've addressed the issues and i hope it is good to go now. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 02:16, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing them, Pavan! Without further ado I'll pass this. Another excellent article. I really enjoy Telugu films, and I've started to watch them more than American films in recent months. It's a long story, but I'm slowly ignoring all of the recent commercial films. I'll take your advice and won't watch this film, though it's a shame that they wasted such good opportunities such as great shooting locations such as London.

JAGUAR 22:43, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]