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17 October 2020

17 September 2019

15 September 2019

  • 08:3708:37, 15 September 2019 diff hist −1 m Aphagia→‎Treatment and compensatory techniques: The original text: "A speech-lanuguage pathologist" looked like a typographical error. I replaced it with: "A speech-language pathologist."
  • 08:3208:32, 15 September 2019 diff hist −17 m Aphagia→‎Causes: The original text was: "It is important to note that all this causes (except due to the damage of the lateral hypothalamus) are indirect causes of aphagia." I assumed "this" was a typographical error or a grammatical error by a non-native speaker of English. The last three words seemed to be redundant & unnecessary. I replaced the sentence.
  • 08:2808:28, 15 September 2019 diff hist −14 m Aphagia→‎Causes: The original text: "The most common things that can lead to aphagia are" seemed to be awkward. I replaced it with: "The most common causes of aphagia are"
  • 07:4007:40, 15 September 2019 diff hist +22 m Aphasia→‎Causes: The original text referred to an illustration as "the figure below" but the illustration is shown on the Web page to the right of the text, not below, so I replaced the single word "below" with "which is shown at the right."

18 March 2015

17 March 2015

21 September 2014