User contributions for Spinner145
A user with 560 edits. Account created on 17 March 2008.
27 June 2017
- 16:0916:09, 27 June 2017 diff hist −4 m Killing of Joseph Smith →Incidents leading to the event: word choice
26 November 2016
- 16:3416:34, 26 November 2016 diff hist −1 m Kars4Kids delete extra comma
- 16:3416:34, 26 November 2016 diff hist +346 Kars4Kids provide context to "gold medal rating"; restore mention of disclosure concerns to lead paragraph and delete other information that had been deleted
10 April 2016
- 20:4620:46, 10 April 2016 diff hist +7 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Legal proceedings: add missed word
- 20:4520:45, 10 April 2016 diff hist +614 Killing of Akai Gurley →Legal proceedings: add information regarding reasons for conviction
- 20:2720:27, 10 April 2016 diff hist −25 Killing of Akai Gurley →Akai Gurley: Irrelevant and prejudicial
11 March 2016
- 23:5423:54, 11 March 2016 diff hist −133 Killing of Akai Gurley undo good faith edits - the meaning of ricochet is well-understood and it's not necessary to add this level of explanation
26 February 2016
- 04:2704:27, 26 February 2016 diff hist +320 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley →Unauthorized patrols?
- 04:2504:25, 26 February 2016 diff hist −6 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: brevity
- 04:2304:23, 26 February 2016 diff hist +19 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: clarify re: the "spike"
- 04:2104:21, 26 February 2016 diff hist 0 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: grammar
- 04:2004:20, 26 February 2016 diff hist −21 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: try to streamline this, add another source for relevance
- 01:5901:59, 26 February 2016 diff hist −512 Killing of Akai Gurley →{{anchor|Peter Liang}}Officer Peter Liang: rework; also info on his parents' employment, brother's education is irrelevant
- 01:5401:54, 26 February 2016 diff hist +3 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Chinese-Americans: grammar
- 01:5301:53, 26 February 2016 diff hist −162 Killing of Akai Gurley →Chinese-Americans: delete info not found in cited source
24 February 2016
- 13:3213:32, 24 February 2016 diff hist −129 Killing of Akai Gurley →Backgrounds: Until somebody can actually justify the discussion of his arrest record it should not be included
- 13:2913:29, 24 February 2016 diff hist +270 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley →Removal of irrelevant material.
- 05:1505:15, 24 February 2016 diff hist +1 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley →Unauthorized patrols?
- 05:1505:15, 24 February 2016 diff hist +375 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley →Unauthorized patrols?
- 05:1305:13, 24 February 2016 diff hist +27 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: clarify that that Lynch is source for all of this
- 05:0905:09, 24 February 2016 diff hist +34 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: this is more informative than just saying "projects"
- 05:0805:08, 24 February 2016 diff hist −8 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: the two sources are poorly integrated - trying to accurately include both info from both sources
- 04:4504:45, 24 February 2016 diff hist 0 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Aftermath: grammar
- 04:3904:39, 24 February 2016 diff hist +381 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley →Unauthorized patrols?
- 04:3504:35, 24 February 2016 diff hist −521 Killing of Akai Gurley →Aftermath: rework this to account for earlier movement of previous lead sentence
- 04:3104:31, 24 February 2016 diff hist +502 Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: this belongs in the 'shooting' rather than the 'aftermath' section
- 03:0203:02, 24 February 2016 diff hist −8 Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: neither sourced article calls these patrols 'routine' - this is an editorialization from a wikiepedia editor
- 02:5702:57, 24 February 2016 diff hist +18 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: further clarify per NYP article
- 02:5602:56, 24 February 2016 diff hist −52 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: conform this to what the sourced article actually says
- 02:5002:50, 24 February 2016 diff hist −4 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: grammar
- 02:5002:50, 24 February 2016 diff hist +79 Killing of Akai Gurley →Location: better than referring to as 'the projects'
- 02:4002:40, 24 February 2016 diff hist −171 Killing of Akai Gurley Neither Hurley's arrest record nor Liang's black friends are relevant to this article
23 February 2016
- 13:3313:33, 23 February 2016 diff hist −104 Killing of Akai Gurley →Officer Peter Liang: deletion of material that is unsourced and irrelevant
- 03:0103:01, 23 February 2016 diff hist +1,186 Talk:Killing of Akai Gurley No edit summary
- 02:2302:23, 23 February 2016 diff hist +400 Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: re-inserting relevant information taken nearly verbatim from referenced article
22 February 2016
- 19:5519:55, 22 February 2016 diff hist +7 Killing of Akai Gurley →Chinese-Americans: the number is not 50,000, it's 'nearly 15,000'
- 16:0916:09, 22 February 2016 diff hist +8 User talk:Spinner145 No edit summary
- 15:3115:31, 22 February 2016 diff hist +67 User talk:Spinner145 No edit summary
21 February 2016
- 22:1322:13, 21 February 2016 diff hist −49 Killing of Akai Gurley →NYPD: revise paragraph, which was poorly written and presented certain opinions as being representative of the entire Asian community
- 21:5821:58, 21 February 2016 diff hist +1 m Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: punctuation
- 21:5821:58, 21 February 2016 diff hist +402 Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: further relevant information NYPD gun policies
- 17:4417:44, 21 February 2016 diff hist +297 Killing of Akai Gurley →Shooting: clarify, deleted material already stated elsewhere in the article
- 17:2017:20, 21 February 2016 diff hist −269 Killing of Akai Gurley →Chinese-Americans: not correct
7 February 2016
- 20:5620:56, 7 February 2016 diff hist −11 Aircraft of the Battle of Britain →Main types: Hurricane, Spitfire and Bf 109: dead link replaced with active one
5 February 2016
- 22:1322:13, 5 February 2016 diff hist −2 Martin Shkreli →Early life and education: extended quote was confusing in context
4 February 2016
- 21:3721:37, 4 February 2016 diff hist +8 Vyera Pharmaceuticals →Daraprim
- 21:0821:08, 4 February 2016 diff hist +494 Vyera Pharmaceuticals →Daraprim
2 February 2016
- 20:1820:18, 2 February 2016 diff hist +938 Vyera Pharmaceuticals Add more info about Daraprim price increases
25 January 2016
- 20:0020:00, 25 January 2016 diff hist −37 Book of Mormon →Origin: delete "citation needed" as hadn't reviewed footnoted reference
- 19:5519:55, 25 January 2016 diff hist +39 Book of Mormon →Origin: not accurate describe as "members" as there are many disparate organizations withing the LDS movement; references needed to show this as actual belief