User contributions for Shipsmasthub
A user with 1,474 edits. Account created on 6 October 2021.
21 May 2024
- 17:3417:34, 21 May 2024 diff hist −15 m Brooklyn Immersionists Broke up run-on sentence. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 May 2024
- 04:5004:50, 18 May 2024 diff hist +97 Queer ecology Added Organism's elvin napping system and made some clarifications. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5901:59, 18 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Queer ecology Paragraph break Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5401:54, 18 May 2024 diff hist +185 Queer ecology Included two other important Immersionist experiments in queer ecology. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1901:19, 18 May 2024 diff hist +63 Queer ecology Edited for clarity and flow. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 May 2024
- 21:1021:10, 17 May 2024 diff hist +19 Brooklyn Immersionists Cited the Immersionists' early explorations of queer ecology at end of second paragraph (along with other innovations) Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0421:04, 17 May 2024 diff hist −17 Queer ecology Simplified a sentence for better flow. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0121:01, 17 May 2024 diff hist +1,649 Queer ecology Two early ecosexual events cited which were significant in the arts for helping to catalyze a renaissance in Brooklyn in the 1990s. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 May 2024
- 19:0919:09, 7 May 2024 diff hist −82 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited for flow and clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2118:21, 7 May 2024 diff hist −372 Brooklyn Immersionists Addressed grammar, flow and clarity. Quote shortened, but content largely unchanged. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 May 2024
- 15:5915:59, 4 May 2024 diff hist +97 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited to provide a better transition between Domus and Bradley's book Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4415:44, 4 May 2024 diff hist +1 Brooklyn Immersionists "Actually" is more accurate and is substantiated by New York Press citation that follows. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3915:39, 4 May 2024 diff hist −8 Brooklyn Immersionists "Ardent", while beautiful, is leaning towards the lyrical. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:5314:53, 4 May 2024 diff hist +8 Brooklyn Immersionists Moved "innovating" up from a later part of paragraph to underscore the deliberate nature of the community's efforts. Other edits for clarity and flow. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1701:17, 4 May 2024 diff hist −5 Brooklyn Immersionists Clarification reflecting the fact that existentialism excluded nature AND other humans Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1001:10, 4 May 2024 diff hist −39 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited for clarity and flow. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2024
- 02:4502:45, 3 May 2024 diff hist +14 Brooklyn Immersionists Using an alternative to "exploring" which underscores the historical value of the movement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:2502:25, 3 May 2024 diff hist +10 Brooklyn Immersionists Included Brooklyn in short description Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 April 2024
- 23:2623:26, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Brooklyn Immersionists Placed development links early in list to help substantiate corporate welfare issues Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:1723:17, 30 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Ebon Fisher Link removed to article in early editing stage current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1821:18, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Ebon Fisher Shifted the name of the school to follow "Quaker farm school" to help audience understand what it was first Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1521:15, 30 April 2024 diff hist −11 Ebon Fisher Reversed a sequence of phrases for easier comprehension Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1705:17, 30 April 2024 diff hist −21 Brooklyn Immersionists →Beyond postmodern alienation: Simplified Organism planning circle text. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3204:32, 30 April 2024 diff hist +21 Brooklyn Immersionists Changed tense from “innovation” to the more dynamic “innovated” and cited Fineberg on the shift away from matters of language/interpretation. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2504:25, 30 April 2024 diff hist +228 Brooklyn Immersionists Title included with Web Jam image Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0604:06, 30 April 2024 diff hist −80 Brooklyn Immersionists Fineberg quote had been duplicated and the second instance removed. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0304:03, 30 April 2024 diff hist +191 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited for flow and clarity. Content largely unchanged. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3803:38, 30 April 2024 diff hist +51 Brooklyn Immersionists linking the Brooklyn Immersionists with Immersionism. A disambiguation page helps to clarify that the term Immersionism has many parallel uses. Tags: Visual edit Disambiguation links added
- 03:3403:34, 30 April 2024 diff hist −16 Brooklyn Immersionists Connected two sentences for better flow and removed a "double arrow” paragraph separator. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2303:23, 30 April 2024 diff hist +345 N Talk:Immersionism →Immersionism in history: new section current Tag: New topic
- 03:2003:20, 30 April 2024 diff hist −8 Immersionism Setting up disambiguation page Tags: Removed redirect Visual edit
- 03:1403:14, 30 April 2024 diff hist +58 Immersionism Included Brooklyn Immersionists. Alphabetical order used. The page needs to be set as a disambiguation page. Tags: Redirect target changed Visual edit
- 02:5102:51, 30 April 2024 diff hist −247 Talk:Brooklyn Immersionists →dubious: No discussion accompanies this title. Also written in Feb. 2024 with no follow up. current Tag: Manual revert
28 April 2024
- 00:4900:49, 28 April 2024 diff hist +58 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited for flow and clarity. Open Window Theater moved further down where it fit in better Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 April 2024
- 21:1721:17, 26 April 2024 diff hist +83 Brooklyn Immersionists Citation for networked culture (Blake, Worm Magazine) Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1221:12, 26 April 2024 diff hist −8 Brooklyn Immersionists Simpler, clearer language Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 April 2024
- 20:5620:56, 24 April 2024 diff hist −39 Brooklyn Immersionists Clarification of Wines/Domus first use of "immersive" — and when. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4920:49, 24 April 2024 diff hist −31 Brooklyn Immersionists Clearer wording, same essential content. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:4700:47, 24 April 2024 diff hist −7 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited to include "nurture the world around them" which deepens the concept of immersion. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:4300:43, 24 April 2024 diff hist +37 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited to clarify how the culture attracted new creative talents to the struggling district Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 April 2024
- 22:1022:10, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Brooklyn Immersionists Moved date to less awkward spot in sentence Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:0822:08, 22 April 2024 diff hist +349 Brooklyn Immersionists Citation provided for Cobain reference Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:3821:38, 22 April 2024 diff hist +61 Brooklyn Immersionists Various refinements. Kurt Cobain's death mentioned to underscore the hazards of corporate co-optation of culture. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:2121:21, 22 April 2024 diff hist −39 Brooklyn Immersionists Further refinements. Conjoined art and music into "arts".... Content essentially the same. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0821:08, 22 April 2024 diff hist −214 Brooklyn Immersionists Flow and clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:3719:37, 22 April 2024 diff hist +109 Brooklyn Immersionists Edited for clarity and flow. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5418:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist +73 Brooklyn Immersionists Rearranged order of ideas for greater clarity and flow. Content the same. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 April 2024
- 18:3318:33, 19 April 2024 diff hist +774 Brooklyn Immersionists Brought a summary from a later discussion about labels into the intro for emphasis. This was deemed necessary after recent misleading and pejorative labels in the New York Times. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5217:52, 19 April 2024 diff hist +5 Brooklyn Immersionists Changed “fixation” to the more encyclopedic “preoccupation” and simplified for flow. “Both” added for clarification . Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4616:46, 19 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Brooklyn Immersionists Since “began to explore” had already been used in first sentence, “began to search for” was used as a synonym. Tag: Visual edit
