User contributions for Roundelmike
A user with 38 edits. Account created on 8 July 2007.
1 May 2024
- 01:2101:21, 1 May 2024 diff hist −1 Protection racket Unnecessary comma current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 April 2024
- 19:1919:19, 6 April 2024 diff hist 0 Separate Reality (climb) Grammar, fixed tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 March 2022
- 22:1822:18, 12 March 2022 diff hist −19 United States →Cinema: I removed a reference to James Cameron, who is Canadian. He seemed out of place in an a section about American filmmaking, within an article about the United States generally. One could argue that while Cameron isn’t American, he made films that were commercially successful in America. But by that standard, why stop with him? Many, many other foreign directors would also qualify. Better, I think, to leave him out. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 May 2017
- 06:3506:35, 2 May 2017 diff hist +2 Rear-engine design Clarification: changed "past the rear axle" to "behind the rear axle" to avoid confusion; "past" could be either direction whereas "behind" is specific. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 February 2017
- 18:4818:48, 14 February 2017 diff hist −1 Porsche 911 (997) →Turbo/Turbo Cabriolet (2010-2013): Unnecessary comma removed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 February 2017
- 17:5517:55, 10 February 2017 diff hist −1 Authoritarianism →Authoritarianism and democracy: Minor grammatical edit for readability; replaced "much fewer" with "far fewer." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 February 2017
- 08:3308:33, 3 February 2017 diff hist −20 Jaguar XJ (XJ40) →Development: Sand I've now made "during development" redundant. I've removed it. I'm done now. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3208:32, 3 February 2017 diff hist +12 Jaguar XJ (XJ40) →Development: Again minor; the car itself didn't pioneer innovations, the designs for it did. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3008:30, 3 February 2017 diff hist +1 Jaguar XJ (XJ40) →Development: Edited one sentence for readability (minor edit) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 January 2017
- 18:0218:02, 31 January 2017 diff hist 0 Premier Cruise Lines →Company history: Fixed typo, single apostrophe Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 January 2017
- 08:5508:55, 13 January 2017 diff hist +1 Flathead Lake →Geology: Added comma; it needed one of offset a clause. Minor edit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 August 2016
- 15:5215:52, 21 August 2016 diff hist −3 Danny Ongais →CART career: "Heavily" improved for a health condition is awkward. Reworded and edited for grammar. (Singular possessive proper nouns ending in "s", like Ongais, still get a 's at the end.) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 January 2015
- 07:5407:54, 11 January 2015 diff hist −6 Vaccine →Effectiveness: Minor change for readability. The sentence was awkward. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 December 2014
- 23:0523:05, 23 December 2014 diff hist +2 Utah Population update for 2014, changed from 2013 data. I updated the article text, info box text, and citation.
25 July 2013
- 02:2702:27, 25 July 2013 diff hist −10 Great Salt Lake Desert Lake Bonneville salt deposits are definitely not white sand. Removed this reference. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2202:22, 25 July 2013 diff hist −11 m Great Basin Fairly minor grammatical changes. I tried hard not to change any actual information, but simply make the page easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0702:07, 25 July 2013 diff hist −273 m Mercedes-Benz Sprinter Lots and lots and lots of grammatical changes. I tried hard not to change anything of substance. It's easier to read now, but it's still imperfect. It definitely still needs work. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4401:44, 25 July 2013 diff hist −20 m Mercedes-Benz Sprinter Grammar. Still not perfect but it's a lot better. Tag: Visual edit
22 December 2010
- 16:4016:40, 22 December 2010 diff hist −38 Great Basin Removed "Pacific Ocean" as a geologic feature near the Great Basin. The Great Basin is not oceanic in nature, and the whole sentence probably should be removed anyway.
26 October 2010
- 23:1123:11, 26 October 2010 diff hist +1,417 Trout Creek, Utah No edit summary
- 22:3722:37, 26 October 2010 diff hist +219 m Deep Creek Mountains Added location map for the Deep Creek Range
- 21:5021:50, 26 October 2010 diff hist −4 m Deep Creek Mountains Changed "mountains" to "range," to comply with the article's statement that Deep Creek Range is the proper name.
- 21:4621:46, 26 October 2010 diff hist +112 Deep Creek Mountains Noted Ibapah Peak's ultra prominence and edited for grammar.
- 21:3121:31, 26 October 2010 diff hist +92 Skull Valley Indian Reservation Added internal Wikipedia link to Dugway sheep incident, and noted that Dugway Proving Ground is a US Army installation.
- 21:1621:16, 26 October 2010 diff hist −321 Antelope Island Removed facts about the Great Salt Lake, which is off topic for this article. Also removed county location from the lead paragraph.
22 October 2010
- 23:1223:12, 22 October 2010 diff hist +866 Talk:Great Basin →Confusion regarding great basin boundaries - What to include, and what to exclude: new section
- 22:5322:53, 22 October 2010 diff hist −26 Great Basin Moved the "Political Geography" contents to the "Geography" section. The section contents didn't really deal with political geography at all.
- 22:4922:49, 22 October 2010 diff hist +5 m Great Basin →Political geography
- 22:4922:49, 22 October 2010 diff hist +239 Great Basin Included links to some small cities within the Great Basin.
- 22:3622:36, 22 October 2010 diff hist +295 Great Basin Edited roadways through the Great Basin. Removed I-70 because it's hardly in the basin and added two US Routes.
- 22:0622:06, 22 October 2010 diff hist +67 Great Basin Displaying Reno as largest city and Salt Lake City as largest metro is awkward. I also dropped the population numbers as the referenced articled contain these details.
- 21:3821:38, 22 October 2010 diff hist +21 Great Basin I don't think that directions/locations of the deserts are necessary, but I've changed the parenthesized directions so that they're consistent.
- 21:3221:32, 22 October 2010 diff hist 0 m Great Basin Very minor grammatical edit. "in" sounds better than "of" in this instance.
29 March 2010
- 18:3318:33, 29 March 2010 diff hist −6 m Draper, Utah Grammatical change: removed the word "first" which looked like a mistake and didn't need to be in the sentence.
21 January 2010
- 17:1417:14, 21 January 2010 diff hist −30 Common cold →Symptoms: Removed "Lacie and olivia are ballers(:" although I'm sure that they are fine ballers, they should not be described as such here.
11 January 2009
- 23:1123:11, 11 January 2009 diff hist −7 m Sturgis Motorcycle Rally Quick grammar correction
2 September 2007
- 19:2419:24, 2 September 2007 diff hist 0 m Draper, Utah Grammar
