User contributions for Pluma
A user with 8,256 edits. Account created on 9 March 2011.
3 April 2024
- 06:5906:59, 3 April 2024 diff hist −11 Southern Athabaskan languages →Family division: intext citation was not needed, and "recent years" is no longer a particularly accurate (or precise) description for the time period between 1968 and 1998. Also edited a bit for clarity and neutrality. current
27 March 2024
- 22:4622:46, 27 March 2024 diff hist −4 m John William Smith (politician) →top: the Edward Dwyer linked was born in 1895 and appears to have never left Europe, and so I'm pretty sure he isn't the Edward Dwyer this is meant to link to
11 March 2024
- 02:0702:07, 11 March 2024 diff hist −63 Christopher Nolan updating Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
6 March 2024
- 23:5323:53, 6 March 2024 diff hist −10 Nikki Haley saying “in US history” is redundant since it’s clear what country a US Republican Party primary would take place in Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
25 January 2024
- 06:1406:14, 25 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Killing of David Henry Breaux →top: forgot a comma
- 06:1406:14, 25 January 2024 diff hist +499 Killing of David Henry Breaux →top: "unhoused man" doesn't describe the most notable thing about him or his primary identity
22 January 2024
- 05:3905:39, 22 January 2024 diff hist +132 First Mexican Republic →Bustamante Administration: improving cohesion, and changing date format to Mexican format
21 January 2024
- 21:5421:54, 21 January 2024 diff hist +425 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ryan Binkley (3rd nomination) →Ryan Binkley: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
- 21:5021:50, 21 January 2024 diff hist +535 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ryan Binkley (3rd nomination) →Ryan Binkley: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply
- 21:4821:48, 21 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Over the Hedge (film) I think I left this typo here yesterday when I edited this section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
20 January 2024
- 22:2022:20, 20 January 2024 diff hist +89 Alexander the Great →Death and succession: "recent" is very ambiguous and inherently liable to fall out of date. I used the dates in the sources to specify just how recent these suggestions were made. Also, I'm not sure if it's best to cite the peer review of the 1969 article instead of Schefold's original work but I don't want to replace the citation just in case this choice was made for a good reason.
- 21:5921:59, 20 January 2024 diff hist +18 Over the Hedge (film) →Plot: It looks like this detail was removed during an earlier (and necessary) trimming of the plot summary by User:LancedSoul. I replaced the detail in an earlier edit since it is crucial to the plot, but my replacement was not completely accurate, so I restored the original sentence here. I also slightly condensed it.
- 21:4821:48, 20 January 2024 diff hist +1,108 User talk:Barry Wom →Regarding edit to Over The Hedge plot summary: new section Tag: New topic
- 21:4821:48, 20 January 2024 diff hist −404 Over the Hedge (film) Undid revision 1197416001 by Barry Wom (talk) The part I added was necessary as it introduced the main conflict of the plot. I have also pared down the plot summary a bit to address your concern about length.
19 January 2024
- 23:1923:19, 19 January 2024 diff hist +173 Over the Hedge (film) fixed some inconsistencies in the plot summary, as well as a key detail regarding Vincent’s threat. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
15 January 2024
- 20:0320:03, 15 January 2024 diff hist −6 List of countries by GDP (nominal) Removing "flag" since ASEAN and Mercosur also have flags (in addition to several other international blocs), and flags aren't particularly unique to nations. Also, some of the other qualities mentioned as setting the EU apart are shared by the other blocs mentioned, especially ASEAN, which makes me wonder if ASEAN should also receive a place in the table sans a ranking similar to the EU. Tag: Reverted
13 January 2024
- 01:0501:05, 13 January 2024 diff hist +32 Tragedy by the Sea Moved some content from the Description section that better fits in the Background section. Added subject's and boy's names to lead section since on first read, I initially got the impression that their identities were unknown. Also, lightly edited for cohesion throughout.
4 January 2024
- 23:2923:29, 4 January 2024 diff hist −150 China's final warning while I see the parallels, in order for this phenomenon to be considered relevant for this page, there should be a source cited drawing parallels between the eponymous saying and Russia’s warnings regarding Ukraine Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
31 December 2023
- 19:1119:11, 31 December 2023 diff hist +4 m La Signora →top
23 December 2023
- 06:3306:33, 23 December 2023 diff hist 0 m List of countries by Human Development Index →List: looks like I missed correcting this part Tag: Manual revert
- 06:2706:27, 23 December 2023 diff hist −1 List of countries by Human Development Index →List: correcting data to match source Tag: Reverted
21 December 2023
- 19:4619:46, 21 December 2023 diff hist +122 Flags of the Confederate States of America clarifying that while Georgia no longer has the battle flag on their flag, their flag still references a confederate flag, as mentioned in the article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
- 04:3304:33, 21 December 2023 diff hist +4 m Wool No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit Disambiguation links added
19 December 2023
- 04:2904:29, 19 December 2023 diff hist +73 Mockingjay clarifying that Katniss was supposed to kill Snow. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
15 December 2023
- 21:3621:36, 15 December 2023 diff hist −13 m Three Arrows neither of the other two “isms” mentioned include a descriptor, so this is cleaner. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
6 December 2023
- 23:4223:42, 6 December 2023 diff hist +138 Semi-presidential republic →Premier-presidential systems
- 19:3919:39, 6 December 2023 diff hist +94 m Kevin McCarthy →top
- 18:5218:52, 6 December 2023 diff hist +14 Mediterranean Dialogue →Members: "Libya" isn't a great name for a subsection under "members" since Libya isn't a member.
- 18:4918:49, 6 December 2023 diff hist +50 m Mediterranean Dialogue →Members: distinguishing more clearly the initial vs subsequent members because the text above it mentions the distinction
5 December 2023
- 21:0321:03, 5 December 2023 diff hist −1 m Patrick Stewart →Awards and honours: removing extra carriage return. Weirdly, it was showing up in the preview from the last edit but not in the code. Now it's in the code, so sorry about that.
- 21:0221:02, 5 December 2023 diff hist −161 m Patrick Stewart →Awards and honours: reordering to be a bit more chronological, while keeping the somewhat categorical division of the paragraphs. Also removed the first sentence since it didn't have to do with his awards and honours, and belonged in the biography section
4 December 2023
- 22:1122:11, 4 December 2023 diff hist +71 Henry Kissinger →Domestic reactions: clarifying what the title of the article referenced. No new citation needed due to the new information being contained in the original source.
- 20:1220:12, 4 December 2023 diff hist +771 In Ekker series, French nuclear tests article previously incorrectly depicted all of the tests as having taken place in French Algeria. However, Algeria had achieved independence for the majority of the time period. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
3 December 2023
- 23:1023:10, 3 December 2023 diff hist +9 m Russian invasion of Ukraine →top: the condemnation was in reaction to the invasion, not the other way around, so this phrasing is technically more correct
26 November 2023
- 23:4923:49, 26 November 2023 diff hist +51 m Mona Williams (writer, born 1943) →top: should distinguish between the two authors since they have the same name and profession
- 23:4923:49, 26 November 2023 diff hist +50 m Mona Williams (writer, born 1905) →top
22 November 2023
- 03:3203:32, 22 November 2023 diff hist +345 Viceroyalty of Peru →End of the Viceroyalty (1806–24)
- 03:0703:07, 22 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Viceroyalty of Peru →Exploration and settlement (1542–1643): grammar
21 November 2023
- 22:4522:45, 21 November 2023 diff hist +1 m Victoria Villarruel →top: since the election is over, they are now elected instead of just running, and are thus longer running-mates.
- 22:4222:42, 21 November 2023 diff hist +39 m Javier Milei →top: sentence wasn't finished. Also, some citations for these specific stances would be ideal
7 November 2023
- 01:3401:34, 7 November 2023 diff hist +158 Marriage age in the United States →In the 50 states: the previous phrasing concentrated the citations confusingly on the last year the laws amongst the bunch were changed. This format more clearly shows the specific states the citations for when their laws were changed.
4 November 2023
- 06:4806:48, 4 November 2023 diff hist +1 m Caifanes →National success: correcting translation
3 November 2023
- 02:1902:19, 3 November 2023 diff hist +16 Yugoslav Wars →top: the country that emerged was called Macedonia, so the part in parentheses should be the part that references the new name
31 October 2023
- 05:4905:49, 31 October 2023 diff hist −1 m Thanksgiving →top: phrases within parentheses don't need to be capitalized and punctuated as full sentences
14 October 2023
- 06:2906:29, 14 October 2023 diff hist +45 m Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors →"... that Sheryl Cooper (pictured) and her daughter Calico beheaded Sheryl's husband in front of a live audience?": for some reason it's not signing with my proper signature and instead doxxing my IP address when I edit this on mobile, so here you go with a real signature Tag: Reverted
- 02:5002:50, 14 October 2023 diff hist +779 Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors →Current DYK Tag: Reverted
13 October 2023
10 October 2023
- 21:2421:24, 10 October 2023 diff hist +108 2026 California gubernatorial election Kounalakis is no longer the only major candidate
9 October 2023
- 17:3117:31, 9 October 2023 diff hist +3 2024 Democratic Party presidential primaries →Timeline: since Kennedy withdrew (source should be by his section in the article)
- 05:0405:04, 9 October 2023 diff hist +2 m California Republic →top: the words "Bear Flag" in this context are referring to the flag of the California Republic, not to the flag of the US state, and so the link should be on the words "flag of california"
