User contributions for Peter Entwisle
A user with 3,184 edits. Account created on 5 June 2006.
11 March 2014
- 10:3510:35, 11 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Strath Taieri →History: Changed 'strath' to 'valley'. 'Strath' isn't idiomatic English.
- 10:2510:25, 11 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Strath Taieri →History: Replaced 'the strath' with 'valley'. 'Strath' is archaic.
- 10:1610:16, 11 March 2014 diff hist 0 Strath Taieri Changed 'strath
- 09:3409:34, 11 March 2014 diff hist +2 William Tucker (settler) Further clarification.
- 09:2809:28, 11 March 2014 diff hist −163 William Tucker (settler) Accuracy. Tucker traded in human head first and nephrite/jade second.
19 February 2014
- 09:3309:33, 19 February 2014 diff hist −1 m Otago Harbour →The Victoria Channel: changed 'essential' to desirable and spelling 'Ramsey' to Ramsay'.
21 August 2013
- 22:5622:56, 21 August 2013 diff hist +226 m User:Grimsworth I inserted a message for Grimsworth. current Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5103:51, 21 August 2013 diff hist +1 m Otago Harbour →History: Cross reference to William Tucker (settler).
- 03:3903:39, 21 August 2013 diff hist +28 m Otago Harbour Cross reference to Wiiiiam Tucker (settler) →History
24 July 2013
- 10:3210:32, 24 July 2013 diff hist −1 m Ernest George I replaced 'for' with 'in' in the section relating to George's New Zealand work. He didn't do this for the country but for a client. Tag: Visual edit
2 April 2013
- 08:5208:52, 2 April 2013 diff hist −5 m Colleges of the University of Otago →Toroa College: Style: changed 'international to 'overseas'. We're all international.
- 08:4808:48, 2 April 2013 diff hist +2 m Colleges of the University of Otago →Descriptions of the Colleges: changed 'ethos' to 'ethoses' the plural required here.
- 08:4308:43, 2 April 2013 diff hist −5 m Colleges of the University of Otago →Descriptions of the Colleges: Fact and grammar: replaced 'have been' with 'were'.
- 08:4008:40, 2 April 2013 diff hist −6 m Colleges of the University of Otago →City College: Style: removed 'style'.
- 08:3708:37, 2 April 2013 diff hist −2 m Colleges of the University of Otago →Toroa College: Style: changed 'proactive' to 'an active'.
7 March 2013
- 08:3908:39, 7 March 2013 diff hist +89 User talk:Peter Entwisle →Disambiguation link notification for March 6
- 06:1706:17, 7 March 2013 diff hist +195 User talk:Peter Entwisle →Disambiguation link notification for March 6
6 March 2013
- 06:4506:45, 6 March 2013 diff hist −3 Ralph Hotere →Otago Daily Times Obituary
- 06:3906:39, 6 March 2013 diff hist +7 Ralph Hotere →Otago Daily Times Obituary
- 06:3406:34, 6 March 2013 diff hist +7,206 Ralph Hotere →Hotere Garden Oputae
- 06:0306:03, 6 March 2013 diff hist +7,174 Ralph Hotere →Hotere Garden Oputae
- 03:1303:13, 6 March 2013 diff hist +1 m Ralph Hotere →Early history: Punctuation: added a missing full stop.
- 03:1203:12, 6 March 2013 diff hist −41 Ralph Hotere →Early history: Factual corrections.
1 August 2012
- 09:0209:02, 1 August 2012 diff hist +45 m Invercargill →History: Precision - it wasn't the Southland province which was abolished in 1876.
- 05:0605:06, 1 August 2012 diff hist +1,829 User talk:Peter Entwisle →First settlement of New Zealand
30 July 2012
- 09:1009:10, 30 July 2012 diff hist +331 User talk:Peter Entwisle →First settlement of New Zealand
28 July 2012
- 07:4707:47, 28 July 2012 diff hist 0 Palmerston, New Zealand →History and legend: Fact: first human settlement was about 1150 AD, not 1300.
4 May 2012
- 09:0809:08, 4 May 2012 diff hist 0 m Otago Harbour →History: Changed it back again. The original was better.
- 09:0109:01, 4 May 2012 diff hist +6 m Otago Harbour →History: Changed ' much discussed' to 'much disputed'.
- 08:4908:49, 4 May 2012 diff hist +1 m Otago Harbour →History: Added a comma, after 'Brothers'.
- 08:4408:44, 4 May 2012 diff hist +1 m Otago Harbour →History: Added a comma after 'Campbell'.
2 May 2012
- 09:4109:41, 2 May 2012 diff hist −3 Dunedin →Post War developments: Fact: the city's population reduced by about 5,000 between the 1976 and 1981 censuses. It has grown since but...
20 April 2012
- 08:3008:30, 20 April 2012 diff hist +2 m Christchurch →Overview: Punctuation: added 2 commas.
17 April 2012
- 09:5709:57, 17 April 2012 diff hist +18 Olveston (house) Added information to make sense of the opening paragraph.
- 09:4809:48, 17 April 2012 diff hist −132 History of the Dunedin urban area →Historical notes: We should stick to the facts.
13 April 2012
- 10:0710:07, 13 April 2012 diff hist +7 m Taieri Mouth →History: Precision: revising own text.
- 09:1109:11, 13 April 2012 diff hist −47 m Dunedin →Gold rush era
- 09:0609:06, 13 April 2012 diff hist +46 Dunedin →Gold rush era: Second picture of the Railway Station.
- 08:5908:59, 13 April 2012 diff hist −12 m Dunedin →Gold rush era: Style: removed a redundant phrase.
- 08:4708:47, 13 April 2012 diff hist −4 m Dunedin →Gold rush era: Style: 'people' for 'population'.
- 08:3008:30, 13 April 2012 diff hist −1 Waikouaiti →History: Fact: Changed 'was' to 'is'. The church is still there.
11 April 2012
- 12:1612:16, 11 April 2012 diff hist −2 m Dunedin →Gold rush era: Spelling.
- 12:1412:14, 11 April 2012 diff hist +6 m Dunedin →Gold rush era: Style: changed 'founded' to 'established' to avoid repetition.
- 12:1212:12, 11 April 2012 diff hist −11 m Dunedin →Gold rush era: Style: removed a redundancy.
10 April 2012
- 08:1408:14, 10 April 2012 diff hist 0 m History of Cape Town →The 1800 and 1900s: Spelling.
- 08:0908:09, 10 April 2012 diff hist 0 m History of Cape Town →The 1700s: Spelling: changed 'munity' to 'mutiny'.
- 07:4607:46, 10 April 2012 diff hist +1 m History of Cape Town →1652: The arrival of the Dutch: 'Subside' means sink. 'Subsist' means live.
- 06:1306:13, 10 April 2012 diff hist 0 m History of Zimbabwe →Pre-Colonial era (1000–1887): Spelling.
- 06:0106:01, 10 April 2012 diff hist −21 User talk:Peter Entwisle →Spelling Corrections
- 05:5605:56, 10 April 2012 diff hist −17 m User talk:Peter Entwisle →Spelling Corrections: Removed a repetition of my name.
