User contributions for Mason.Jones
A user with 4,589 edits. Account created on 22 April 2005.
24 April 2024
- 22:4722:47, 24 April 2024 diff hist −15 United States →Mass media: More direct syntax. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2418:24, 24 April 2024 diff hist −107 Savannah, Georgia Undid revision 1220583442 by Mason.Jones (talk) RV (cannot insert estimated population field with current infobox perimeters) Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:1918:19, 24 April 2024 diff hist +107 Savannah, Georgia No edit summary Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 April 2024
- 21:3021:30, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 Savannah metropolitan area Follow U.S. Census Bureau's official non-capitalization of these terms. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 April 2024
- 17:5717:57, 21 April 2024 diff hist +11 Alex Martin (actress) →Personal life: More encyclopedic wording; content unchanged. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5017:50, 21 April 2024 diff hist 0 Tony Gonzalez →Personal life: Hyphenate current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4917:49, 21 April 2024 diff hist +2 Tony Gonzalez →Personal life: No ampersand in WP text (except for official names of products, media, book or song titles. Etc.) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:2617:26, 21 April 2024 diff hist +1 Tom Brady →Diet and lifestyle: Required comma (before and after) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 April 2024
- 21:2721:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist +7 Harrison Ford →Personal life: Syntax fix; avoid repetition. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:1117:11, 20 April 2024 diff hist −168 List of metropolitan areas in Georgia (U.S. state) Updated lede and source. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5616:56, 20 April 2024 diff hist +6 List of metropolitan areas in Georgia (U.S. state) Both headings should say "estimates." Only the old 2020 figures are the formal census. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4515:45, 20 April 2024 diff hist +24 United States The common term is better (piped for WP article). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 April 2024
- 20:3620:36, 17 April 2024 diff hist +42 El Paso, Texas Mention largest Hispanic city, San Antonio, as El Paso is ranked 2nd. Hyphenate temporary compound before noun per WP style. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:5015:50, 17 April 2024 diff hist −9 Languages of the United States Undid revision 1219277818 by OutofaNutshell (talk) --Revert. Must match article United States. Needs RfC discussion there to revise. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 April 2024
- 23:3223:32, 15 April 2024 diff hist −2 United States Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2523:25, 15 April 2024 diff hist +1 United States One period, not two (my typo) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2223:22, 15 April 2024 diff hist +3 United States Restore. These two "See..." tips are commands, which are complete sentences in English. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:2319:23, 15 April 2024 diff hist −1 Languages of the United States →English (245 million speakers): Replace misleading word "monolingual" with "English-speaking households". Use ACS terms for ACS data: these are not monolingual people but households where all members speak only English at home. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5917:59, 15 April 2024 diff hist −5 Languages of the United States →English (245 million speakers): "Monolingual" is fale. The ACS figure "245 million only" is total number of all-English-speaking households (i.e., every member of the householf speaks English together). It still includes many people who can speak other languages, even including their native language. Deleted. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:4914:49, 15 April 2024 diff hist −8 Mac Davis →Personal life and death: Delete unencyclopedic wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 April 2024
- 17:0917:09, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3 Aretha Franklin →Early life: Usage Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0417:04, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 John Travolta →Family: As below, they lived in Anthony, Florida, outside (not in) Ocala. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5716:57, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 John Travolta →Early life: US spelling Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5516:55, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3 John Travolta →Early life: Required commas Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1816:18, 14 April 2024 diff hist −1 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1616:16, 14 April 2024 diff hist +14 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: "Monolingual" is misused here; 239 million U.S. residents speak only English at home, but they can't be labeled as "monolingual". Ex.: Sonia Sotomayor's bilingual family required English in the home (and would be counted as "English (only)" in the ACS survey). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:5815:58, 14 April 2024 diff hist −48 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: Awkward and repetitive. Also, the ACS is a survey of all U.S. residents; "the people of the United States" is inaccurate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 April 2024
- 15:3215:32, 13 April 2024 diff hist −7 United States →Population: Dateline "as of 2020" is no longer relevant. Next sentence better as a complete sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 April 2024
- 15:3315:33, 12 April 2024 diff hist −40 Osteopathy →Regulation and legal status: Syntax fix; acronym better on first mention ( in previous paragraph): dropped here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2415:24, 12 April 2024 diff hist −2 Osteopathy →Regulation and legal status: Syntax fix, replace weak verbs ("there is," "has"). Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2024
- 22:2522:25, 10 April 2024 diff hist +14 Laurence Harvey →South Africa: "USA" not used in WP except in official names of organizations (Team USA, USA Today). Further syntax fix. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3315:33, 10 April 2024 diff hist +21 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: Moved sentence after general discussion of languages. Content unchanged. Hyphenate fractions per WP style. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2215:22, 10 April 2024 diff hist −311 Languages of the United States Delete. Contradicts next paragraph by rewinding it. And it infers that the US is a bilingual nation, with equal status fir two languages. Thus is misleading. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 April 2024
- 15:2815:28, 9 April 2024 diff hist −6 Nick Adams (commentator) →Rhetorical style: Grammar: recast to avoid dangling participle. En dash with "branded." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1515:15, 9 April 2024 diff hist 0 Nick Adams (commentator) →Political activism: Usage: in Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 April 2024
- 23:1623:16, 8 April 2024 diff hist +46 Conscription →Table: Per source. Conscription was not reinstated in 1994; draftees could not be inducted from 1994 onward. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:4422:44, 8 April 2024 diff hist 0 Belgian Armed Forces →Post-1945: Hyphenate. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1719:17, 8 April 2024 diff hist +86 United States Undid revision 1217918873 by Interstellarity (talk) -- RV -- why remove year spans, which are longstanding and (to many readers) helpful signposts for complex eras in American history? Just asking. Tags: Undo Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0415:04, 8 April 2024 diff hist −16 Peter Jöback →2000–2005: Syntax fix. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 April 2024
- 22:5522:55, 7 April 2024 diff hist +23 Roger Miller →Personal life and death: Syntax fix. Content unchanged. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:4422:44, 7 April 2024 diff hist −3 Peter Jöback →1995–2000: Recast. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:3922:39, 7 April 2024 diff hist +1 Peter Jöback →Personal life: Required comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:3822:38, 7 April 2024 diff hist −45 Peter Jöback More encyclopedic wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 April 2024
- 21:4921:49, 5 April 2024 diff hist +12 Nicolas Sarkozy →Marie-Dominique Culioli: Related info should appear together (moved); punctuation fixes. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4120:41, 5 April 2024 diff hist 0 United States →Population: Separate sentences for Asians and Native Americans, clarify "recognized". No sentence should begin with a figure. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 April 2024
- 22:0022:00, 4 April 2024 diff hist +32 Exclusive economic zone →Italy: Delete trivial 48th ranking. Syntax, description fixed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:4721:47, 4 April 2024 diff hist −6 Exclusive economic zone →Germany: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:4521:45, 4 April 2024 diff hist 0 Exclusive economic zone →Germany: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:2500:25, 4 April 2024 diff hist +15 Exclusive economic zone →Germany: Syntax fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:1400:14, 4 April 2024 diff hist −1 Exclusive economic zone →By country: WP style: consistent wording, capitalization, and hyphenation before a noun. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit