User contributions for MacMog
A user with 897 edits. Account created on 22 July 2005.
2 March 2024
- 06:5906:59, 2 March 2024 diff hist −12 m Shop right →top: copyedits: broke up extra-long sentence; changed Hired-to-Invent Doctrine to match spellings used in the rest of the document current
21 November 2023
- 14:1014:10, 21 November 2023 diff hist −4 m Michelle Goldberg →Opinions and controversies: copyedit: book titles should only have one form of decoration. Normally use oblique text, but the cited article uses double-quotes "", so removing the oblique.
- 14:0114:01, 21 November 2023 diff hist −9 m Michelle Goldberg →Early life and education: copyedit: quotes don’t go in ''obliques''; remove incorrect comma
6 November 2023
- 14:3314:33, 6 November 2023 diff hist +1 m Hotel Transylvania (film) →Plot: copyedit punct
4 November 2023
- 12:3412:34, 4 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Jonathan Van Ness →Bibliography: copyedit: title case
2 November 2023
- 01:1301:13, 2 November 2023 diff hist +117 Pool Party! →Overview: fix mangled reference
26 October 2023
- 07:3607:36, 26 October 2023 diff hist +3 m Where's Waldo? (2019 TV series) →Season 1 (2019): copyedit: punct
7 October 2022
- 04:0404:04, 7 October 2022 diff hist +6 m Punnet →Present-day forms: added text for wikilink to <chemical name of PET plastic>
10 November 2021
- 01:4301:43, 10 November 2021 diff hist −1 m Joystick →Industrial applications: copyedit: semicolon doesn’t belong here, and typically one doesn’t even use a colon after “such as”
13 April 2016
- 03:5903:59, 13 April 2016 diff hist −8 m The Hills (song) →Critical reception: fixed nested quotation marks (if using double quotes " for outer, need to use single ' for inner)
14 November 2015
- 23:1823:18, 14 November 2015 diff hist +183 m TLC (group) →1991–94: Ooooooohhh... On the TLC Tip: removed vandalism; copyedit: lowercase vocal ranges; added cite-needed tag for vocal ranges
- 23:0323:03, 14 November 2015 diff hist −1 m Enemy of the State (film) →Plot: copyedit: deleted unbalanced comma setting off unnecessary subordinate clause
- 20:1120:11, 14 November 2015 diff hist 0 m TLC (group) →2015: Final album, Main Event Tour and Kickstarter campaign: copyedit: title cased New Kids on the Block
10 November 2015
- 05:0905:09, 10 November 2015 diff hist +34 m James Urbaniak →Filmography: wikilinked The Magic Circle
25 October 2015
- 06:1606:16, 25 October 2015 diff hist −28 m The Care Bears Movie removed redundant sentence
- 05:5305:53, 25 October 2015 diff hist +223 Olivia Wilde →Career: misc. copyedits; italicized a number of movie titles; added wikilinks to appropriate topics
- 04:2004:20, 25 October 2015 diff hist −74 m The Lazarus Effect (2015 film) misc. copyedits and minor rewrites for grammar/flow
- 04:0104:01, 25 October 2015 diff hist 0 m The Lazarus Effect (2015 film) Undid revision 687352795 by 2602:306:B8DE:46D0:4821:3945:D5B6:491D (talk) - vandalism
- 04:0004:00, 25 October 2015 diff hist +3 m The Lazarus Effect (2015 film) Undid revision 687352738 by 2602:306:B8DE:46D0:4821:3945:D5B6:491D (talk) - vandalism
5 October 2015
- 07:1007:10, 5 October 2015 diff hist −20 m Pickleball →Terminology: misc. copyedits
- 05:5405:54, 5 October 2015 diff hist +52 m Warren Buffett de-italicized company names; added dead link tag to ref about cartoon; case fix on "efficient-market hypothesis"
- 05:5205:52, 5 October 2015 diff hist +152 The Superinvestors of Graham-and-Doddsville added reference to "The $700 Used Book" article; misc. copyedits
- 04:5504:55, 5 October 2015 diff hist 0 Christening updated wikilink to "Ceremonial ship launching"
- 04:4404:44, 5 October 2015 diff hist +8 m Ceremonial ship launching →Stern-first launching: copyedit: fixed comma-splice
4 October 2015
- 12:2112:21, 4 October 2015 diff hist 0 m Suffragette →Early 20th century in the UK: case fix: standardized on uppercase D when referring to First/Second/Third Division
- 01:2901:29, 4 October 2015 diff hist 0 m Tom Hanks →Other activities: copyedit: case fix on Wernher von Braun
3 October 2015
- 03:0403:04, 3 October 2015 diff hist −4 m Group identifier →top: copyedits: case fix; removed wikilink for second instance of superuser
30 September 2015
- 06:3806:38, 30 September 2015 diff hist +2 m G.I. Joe →Cartoon: copyedit: added missing word "a"
24 September 2015
- 09:1809:18, 24 September 2015 diff hist +315 Troublemaker (Weezer song) →top: marked dead link (looks like it has disappeared off the Weezer site), added live link to site that "archived" the original post
- 09:1209:12, 24 September 2015 diff hist +28 m Troublemaker (Weezer song) misc. copyedits and cleanup
20 September 2015
- 06:2506:25, 20 September 2015 diff hist 0 m Bhopal disaster →The leakage and its subsequent effects: copyedits: added missing '$', deleted space between period and reference
16 September 2015
- 03:2303:23, 16 September 2015 diff hist +17 m Breaking Bad →Scientific accuracy: misc. copyedits
- 03:2103:21, 16 September 2015 diff hist +5 m Potential well →Quantum confinement: misc. copyedits
- 03:1803:18, 16 September 2015 diff hist −4 m Potential well →Overview: removed unnecessary italics
14 September 2015
- 01:5301:53, 14 September 2015 diff hist +695 Steven Page →Barenaked Ladies: added note about the Big Bang Theory theme lawsuit
- 01:4801:48, 14 September 2015 diff hist +22 m The Big Bang Theory →Theme song: added section anchor
- 01:4401:44, 14 September 2015 diff hist +526 The Big Bang Theory →Theme song: added note about the Barenaked Ladies royalties lawsuit
- 01:2501:25, 14 September 2015 diff hist +618 Hits from Yesterday & the Day Before →Album contents: added note about Steven Page lawsuit over "The Big Bang Theory theme"
13 September 2015
- 04:4604:46, 13 September 2015 diff hist −3 m Guilty Gear →Reception and legacy: misc. copyedits
- 04:3904:39, 13 September 2015 diff hist −251 Guilty Gear →Music: removed more subjective description of hidden track; added citation needed tag and rearranged to the format common to other articles
- 03:5103:51, 13 September 2015 diff hist +25 Bridget (Guilty Gear) clarified backstory in summary
- 01:2801:28, 13 September 2015 diff hist +1 m Harold Pinter →Career: copyedits: title case, punct. fixes
- 00:5300:53, 13 September 2015 diff hist −29 m Edward Albee →Plays: copyedits: title cased titles, which also fixed indirect wikilinks
- 00:4600:46, 13 September 2015 diff hist 0 m Me, Myself and I (play) →Synopsis: copyedit: fixed sentence fragment
12 September 2015
- 10:2910:29, 12 September 2015 diff hist +12 m Jaimie Alexander →Early life: minor rewrite for grammar/flow
11 September 2015
- 03:1803:18, 11 September 2015 diff hist −11 m Sirpa Lane copyedits; minor rewrites for grammar
10 September 2015
- 03:3403:34, 10 September 2015 diff hist +21 m Tappi Iwase →top: copyedits: title case; deleted extraneous "music"; clarified that MGS2 and 3 used arrangements of the original theme
- 00:5000:50, 10 September 2015 diff hist 0 m Helicobacter pylori →Microbiology: copyedit: fixed block formatting of body text; applied heading format to pseudo-heading
- 00:4300:43, 10 September 2015 diff hist −3 m Toccata →Baroque: copyedit: fixed formatting/redirection for Bach's Toccata and Fugue
9 September 2015
- 06:4606:46, 9 September 2015 diff hist +2 m Jon Stewart copyedit: added single (nested) quotation marks to set off an internal phrase; changed nested double quotes to single
