User contributions for Jonathanlynn
A user with 527 edits. Account created on 13 March 2017.
20 May 2024
- 13:2213:22, 20 May 2024 diff hist +49 Water scarcity Simplified sentence structure and wording in the lead to make it more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:4612:46, 20 May 2024 diff hist +41 Water scarcity Simplified sentence structure and wording throughout article to make it more readable, targeting text that showed up red (lowest score) with the readability tool. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:1612:16, 20 May 2024 diff hist −157 Water scarcity Simplified sentence structure and wording in Regional examples and Society and culture sections to make them more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:0212:02, 20 May 2024 diff hist −42 Water scarcity in Africa Simplified sentence structure and wording of first two paragraphs (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
17 May 2024
- 15:3115:31, 17 May 2024 diff hist −47 Water scarcity Simplified sentence structure and wording of section "Options for improvements" (as well as leads of several other articles excerpted in the article) to make it more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2915:29, 17 May 2024 diff hist −54 Virtual water Simplified sentence structure and wording of first two paragraphs (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2115:21, 17 May 2024 diff hist −8 Desalination Simplified sentence structure and wording of first paragraph (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make it more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1415:14, 17 May 2024 diff hist +76 Wastewater treatment Simplified sentence structure and wording in first two paragraphs (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0215:02, 17 May 2024 diff hist +29 Reclaimed water Simplified sentence structure and wording of first paragraph (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make it more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:5014:50, 17 May 2024 diff hist +30 Water resources →Artificial sources of usable water: Simplified sentence structure and wording of first paragraph (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make it more readable. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4514:45, 17 May 2024 diff hist +60 Water conservation Simplified sentence structure and wording of first two paragraphs (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
15 May 2024
- 16:4516:45, 15 May 2024 diff hist −189 Water scarcity Simplified sentence structure and wording of Causes and contributing factors sub-section to make it more readable. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 16:1116:11, 15 May 2024 diff hist +31 Water pollution Simplified sentence structure and wording of first two paragraphs (excerpted in article on Water scarcity) to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
4 May 2024
- 15:5715:57, 4 May 2024 diff hist −390 Water scarcity Simplified sentences and wording, and removed unnecessary links and added some links, to make text more readable in the "Available water", "Scale" and "Impacts" sections. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4614:46, 4 May 2024 diff hist −48 Water scarcity Further changes to sentence structure and wording to make the "More sophisticated indictors" sub-section more readable. Tag: Visual edit
1 May 2024
- 13:4913:49, 1 May 2024 diff hist −339 Water scarcity Simplified sentences, sought simpler words, and removed unnecessary links to make the text more readable in the Definitions, Types and Assessments and indicators sections. Tag: Visual edit
30 April 2024
- 11:2411:24, 30 April 2024 diff hist −12 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change Further simplifications of sentences in the lead to make them more readable. current Tag: Visual edit
- 11:1911:19, 30 April 2024 diff hist +89 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change Simplified sentences in the lead to make them easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
7 March 2024
- 16:1716:17, 7 March 2024 diff hist +235 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change →Engagement of civil society: added detail of civil society activity at the COPs. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1316:13, 7 March 2024 diff hist +199 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change →Conferences of the Parties (CoP): Updated and added detail to COP28 showing it had now taken place. Dropped reference to COP26. Added reference to forthcoming COP29. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:0416:04, 7 March 2024 diff hist +877 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change Reworded lead (intro) to emphasize that the UNFCCC is an organization and process not just a treaty, to give the Paris Agreement more prominence than the Kyoto Protocol and to spell out the main Paris Agreement goals. Also added a line on consensus-based decision-making (with citation). Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3615:36, 7 March 2024 diff hist +335 m United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change →Criticism of processes: Added additional citation to discussion of consensus-based decision-making Tag: Visual edit
6 March 2024
- 18:2418:24, 6 March 2024 diff hist +7 Sea level rise Replaced formulations with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive constructions with more formal and impersonal formulations. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1118:11, 6 March 2024 diff hist +26 Net zero emissions Replaced formulations with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive constructions with more formal and impersonal formulations. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0118:01, 6 March 2024 diff hist +2 Ocean temperature Replaced formulation with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive construction with more formal and impersonal formulation. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5717:57, 6 March 2024 diff hist −5 Effects of climate change Replaced formulation with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive construction with more formal and impersonal formulation. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5117:51, 6 March 2024 diff hist −5 Heat wave Replaced formulation with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive construction with a more formal and impersonal formulations. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:2517:25, 6 March 2024 diff hist +23 Water security Replaced formulations with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive constructions with more formal and impersonal formulations. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1317:13, 6 March 2024 diff hist +93 Sustainability Replaced formulations with "we" that had been introduced to avoid passive constructions with more formal and impersonal formulations. Tag: Visual edit
29 February 2024
- 18:0218:02, 29 February 2024 diff hist +10 Rostock →15th to 18th centuries: Corrects translation of Latin inscription on the Stein gate Tag: Visual edit
6 February 2024
- 14:4714:47, 6 February 2024 diff hist −25 Sea level rise In the lead simplified and shortened sentences and wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
5 February 2024
- 15:5515:55, 5 February 2024 diff hist −34 Sea level rise →Adaptation: Shortened and simplified sentences and wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3715:37, 5 February 2024 diff hist −729 Sea level rise →Regional impacts: Simplified and shortened sentences and text and removed excessive links to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
2 February 2024
- 15:2015:20, 2 February 2024 diff hist +248 Talk:Sea level rise →Readability edits and taking out older content?: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:1715:17, 2 February 2024 diff hist +500 Talk:Sea level rise →Readability edits and taking out older content?: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:1315:13, 2 February 2024 diff hist +29 Sea level rise →Impacts: (intro and ecosystems subsections) shortened and simplified sentences and wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
23 January 2024
- 12:0112:01, 23 January 2024 diff hist +27 Sea level rise →Greenland ice sheet loss: →Mountain glacier loss: →Changes to land water storage: Shortened and simplified sentences and wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:3811:38, 23 January 2024 diff hist −10 Sea level rise Shortened and simplified sentences and wording in Antarctic ice loss sub section to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
14 January 2024
- 19:0619:06, 14 January 2024 diff hist +171 Kevelaer added reference to Heine poem. current Tag: Visual edit
12 January 2024
- 12:4712:47, 12 January 2024 diff hist −121 Sea level rise →Causes: (Up to Antarctic ice loss sub-section) Shortened and simplified sentences and simplified wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:4111:41, 12 January 2024 diff hist −144 Sea level rise →Measurements: Shortened and simplified sentences and simplified wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
10 January 2024
- 13:3813:38, 10 January 2024 diff hist +895 Talk:Sea level rise →What to remove, and what to add: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:3513:35, 10 January 2024 diff hist −3,373 Sea level rise →Projections: Shortened and simplified sentences and simplified wording to make it easier to read. Removed some number-heavy material about research already several years old from before IPCC AR6. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:3411:34, 10 January 2024 diff hist −71 Sea level rise →Observations: Simplified and shortened sentences and simplified vocabulary to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:0211:02, 10 January 2024 diff hist +849 Talk:Sea level rise →What to remove, and what to add: Reply Tag: Reply
- 10:1410:14, 10 January 2024 diff hist +911 Talk:Climate change mitigation →Usage of the term "we"?: Reply Tag: Reply
7 January 2024
- 15:1915:19, 7 January 2024 diff hist +162 User:ArbieP No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 12:1812:18, 7 January 2024 diff hist +58 Rostock →The Arts: added painter Bruno Gimpel to list of Rostockers under Arts Tag: Visual edit
28 November 2023
- 15:5415:54, 28 November 2023 diff hist −3 Carbon offsets and credits Shortened and simplified sentences in the introduction (lead), simplified wording, and removed unnecessary links to make the text easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
27 November 2023
- 16:2416:24, 27 November 2023 diff hist −33 Carbon offsets and credits →Effectiveness: →Limitations: shortened and simplified sentences and wording to make it easier to read. Tag: Visual edit