User contributions for Gwanwata
A user with 522 edits. Account created on 1 February 2024.
9 April 2024
- 14:1014:10, 9 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Show Lo Provide a smoother transition between ideas. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3808:38, 9 April 2024 diff hist −11 Edelweiss Cheung →Biography: Improved for clarity and grammatical accuracy. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3508:35, 9 April 2024 diff hist −112 Carat Cheung →Pageant career current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:3408:34, 9 April 2024 diff hist +91 m Carat Cheung Simplifying the sentence structure and directly states the outcome of the pageant, making it more straightforward and concise. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:2708:27, 9 April 2024 diff hist −67 Calvin Lo Revised the statement to be more neutral and succinct, removing charged language to present the facts in a less biased manner. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:0708:07, 9 April 2024 diff hist +250 m Gloria Tang Pui-yee The edit streamlines the sentence structure. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2204:22, 9 April 2024 diff hist +21 Hu Shuli Broke the long sentence into two shorter ones for improved readability and clarified that the EMBA was earned through a joint program between two institutions. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1804:18, 9 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Guo Wengui To convey a stronger sense of Guo’s stance. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1404:14, 9 April 2024 diff hist −19 Guo Wengui To enhance the readability and flow of the sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:0404:04, 9 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Xu Rongmao Improved sentence structure by replacing “pushed” with “expanded”. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 April 2024
- 14:5814:58, 8 April 2024 diff hist −9 m Xu Rongmao Removed the redundant mention of “decade” after “2000s,” as it is implied. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:4609:46, 8 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Sheren Tang to avoid repetition and clarify the sentence current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:4309:43, 8 April 2024 diff hist +1 Sheren Tang To separate the two independent clauses. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 09:4009:40, 8 April 2024 diff hist +414 m Bernice Liu Expanded the article to include additional details, supported by a new citation for verification. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:2208:22, 8 April 2024 diff hist +11 m Lo Ying-shek “Helping the family accumulate” was changed to “which contributed to the family amassing” to clarify the cause-effect relationship. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1808:18, 8 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Lo Ying-shek "Became listed” was changed to “was listed” for grammatical improvement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1608:16, 8 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Vincent Lo “Has enabled” was changed to “has allowed” to improve readability. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1508:15, 8 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Vincent Lo “Bought” was changed to “acquired” to provide a more formal tone. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1308:13, 8 April 2024 diff hist −14 m Vincent Lo Geographical Designation: The descriptor “Shanghainese” was deemed redundant and removed, as “Shanghai” sufficiently indicates the location. This edit adheres to Wikipedia’s guidelines for conciseness and precision. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1008:10, 8 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Vincent Lo The term “constructed” was chosen over “built” to align with formal usage in the context of hotel development. This change reflects a preference for specificity in descriptive language. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:0008:00, 8 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Lo Ying-shek Broke up the last sentence for better flow and to avoid the repetition of ‘and’. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5807:58, 8 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Lo Ying-shek Added a comma after “China” for proper punctuation. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 April 2024
- 09:5509:55, 6 April 2024 diff hist +1 Komal Rizvi →Early life current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 09:5409:54, 6 April 2024 diff hist −4 Komal Rizvi →Early life Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
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- 09:4409:44, 6 April 2024 diff hist −12 Hawain →Synopsis current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
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- 09:3809:38, 6 April 2024 diff hist +1 Abdullah Kadwani →Career current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
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