User contributions for Ariadne000
A user with 880 edits. Account created on 18 November 2012.
18 May 2024
- 17:2217:22, 18 May 2024 diff hist +204 Pride and Prejudice (1980 TV series) →Episodes: Added important detail to episode one that overhearing Mr. Darcy refer to her as "not handsome enough to dance with" inspires Elizabeth's antipathy. Added detail to episode 2 that Elizabeth's prejudice is enhanced by Wickham's grievances. Corrected the final sentence in episode 5 to more accurately state that at the end, three Bennet daughters are married or engaged, since only Lydia is actually married as the story ends. current
- 00:2100:21, 18 May 2024 diff hist +2 m A Face in the Crowd (film) →Plot: fixed punctuation current
- 00:1900:19, 18 May 2024 diff hist −1 A Face in the Crowd (film) →Plot: fixed typo
- 00:1100:11, 18 May 2024 diff hist +354 A Face in the Crowd (film) The summary was excellent, but left out the important role Mel has in encouraging Marcia to see Rhodes for the malevolent force he was and in giving the epithet at the end that our strength is in eventually getting wise to false leaders. Especially prescient and relevant to today's political climate. Additions adhered to the 700-word limit guideline.
13 May 2024
- 17:2717:27, 13 May 2024 diff hist +1 Cosi (film) →Plot: changed first link to Wikipedia page on "Ride of the Valkyries" and second link to YouTube orchestral rendition of "Ride of the Valkyries." current
12 May 2024
- 04:1904:19, 12 May 2024 diff hist −139 The Making of a Lady Changed the intro with quoted text from the cited source. current
- 04:1404:14, 12 May 2024 diff hist −13 m The Making of a Lady No edit summary
- 04:1304:13, 12 May 2024 diff hist +372 The Making of a Lady Enhanced the introduction and deleted the cast members, who are listed under the Cast section, from the introduction.
- 03:4803:48, 12 May 2024 diff hist −23 The Making of a Lady →Plot Summary: Refinements, especially in the first paragraph.
- 00:5800:58, 12 May 2024 diff hist +32 m The Making of a Lady →Plot Summary: additional small embellishment
- 00:4800:48, 12 May 2024 diff hist +1 m The Making of a Lady →Plot Summary: fixed sentence structure and a typo
- 00:4100:41, 12 May 2024 diff hist +14 m The Making of a Lady →Plot Summary: a small embellishment
- 00:3200:32, 12 May 2024 diff hist +88 The Making of a Lady →Cast: added coding for line breaks
- 00:2900:29, 12 May 2024 diff hist +5,011 The Making of a Lady →References: Added a Plot Summary and Cast to a stub article
10 May 2024
- 07:4607:46, 10 May 2024 diff hist +7 The Best Years of Our Lives →Plot: The last round of corrections was gratuitous, merely changing words with very similar words in a summary that already adhered to the 700 word limit. "Nevertheless" the unnecessary change in the final sentence completely fell flat, weakening the impact.
5 May 2024
- 23:4823:48, 5 May 2024 diff hist +493 Impact (1949 film) →Plot: Fixed inaccurate statement that Irene claimed Torrence was her "nephew." She told Williams that Torrence was her cousin, her beloved aunt's favorite nephew, and that she had promised her aunt that Williams would pick up Torrence on his road trip. (It would be highly unlikely that young Irene would have a nephew her own age.) Also added important details to explain why the DA believed Irene's story over Williams's.
- 21:3321:33, 5 May 2024 diff hist +203 Silver Linings Playbook Added an explanation of Patrizio's irrational belief that Pat's attention to the Eagles games affects the outcome of the games, which Pat points out is manifestation of OCD. Without this explanation, Patrizio's insistence that his son ruined the outcome of the Eagles game--and Pat's and Tiffany's humoring him--makes no sense. This is a pivotal detail of the plot. Made a few other minor edits for clarification.
- 20:2820:28, 5 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Love with the Proper Stranger →Plot: Added a qualifier, since Angie doesn't expect Rocky to fully fund the abortion. The rest of this summary is spot on. current
- 20:1420:14, 5 May 2024 diff hist +15 m One, Two, Three →Plot: fixed punctuation and added "disappointed" to reflect that Otto got the promotion Mac was scheming to get. current
- 02:3502:35, 5 May 2024 diff hist +230 One, Two, Three →Plot: added important detail of Mac inadvertently making Scarlett pregnant and unmarried by stealing her East German marriage certificate--the crucial situation that he must now fix.
- 01:4601:46, 5 May 2024 diff hist +42 One, Two, Three →Plot: additional fixes for clarity.
- 01:3801:38, 5 May 2024 diff hist +28 One, Two, Three →Plot: added links and a few fixes for clarity
- 01:3001:30, 5 May 2024 diff hist +130 One, Two, Three →Plot: Primarily fixed the misquote of Scarlett Hazeltine. Verified that Scarlett did not use "ain't" in declaring ""It's not anti-American, it's anti-Yankee. Where I come from, everybody's against the Yankees." Also changed "stern" to "exasperated" because Phyllis disapproves of Mac's manipulations and acts ethically to counter Mac's lack of ethics. Added a few details of the framing of Otto Piffl with capitalist paraphernalia.
4 May 2024
- 06:2506:25, 4 May 2024 diff hist +74 Two Mules for Sister Sara →Plot: added links an minor refinements current
- 06:1306:13, 4 May 2024 diff hist +1,238 Two Mules for Sister Sara Added relevant details to too brief summary (at 368 words) to give a fuller sense of the characters and explanation of the plot. At 580 words, it is still well within the 700 word guideline.
2 May 2024
- 21:2121:21, 2 May 2024 diff hist −5 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: fix coding?
- 21:1721:17, 2 May 2024 diff hist −62 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: fixing coding error?
- 21:1621:16, 2 May 2024 diff hist −79 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado [https://prensahistorica.mcu.es/es/catalogo_imagenes/grupo.do?path=1002524807 ]: fixed additional citation
- 21:0821:08, 2 May 2024 diff hist +344 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado [https://prensahistorica.mcu.es/es/catalogo_imagenes/grupo.do?path=1002524807 ]
30 April 2024
- 00:4200:42, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado ]: fixed typo in link
- 00:4100:41, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado]
- 00:4000:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist −75 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado]: fixed link
- 00:1900:19, 30 April 2024 diff hist +18 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: fixed broken link
29 April 2024
- 23:0723:07, 29 April 2024 diff hist +13 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: added José Ibarrola's first name to the citation, added smuggling operations to duties
- 22:5822:58, 29 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Demographics: fixed typo
- 22:0022:00, 29 April 2024 diff hist 0 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: fixed typo
- 21:5821:58, 29 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: corrected typo
- 21:5721:57, 29 April 2024 diff hist +347 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: added additional citation
- 21:1221:12, 29 April 2024 diff hist +246 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: added citation for the parole date in the Boletin Oficial del Estado (official publication)
- 21:0321:03, 29 April 2024 diff hist +4 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: changed "mayor" to "officials" since they included a judge, mayor, and later the civil guard.
- 21:0121:01, 29 April 2024 diff hist +222 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: added link to journal citation
- 20:4620:46, 29 April 2024 diff hist −47 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: Fixed citations to 1917 articles in the official newspaper of the province of Caceres, Spain reporting on the sensational 1916 murder while on duty of Joaquin Franco Congregado by Cipriano Sanchez del Monte, both ATF-like agents policing illegal tobacco plantations and smuggling.
- 20:3720:37, 29 April 2024 diff hist +490 Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: added two newspaper articles from the official provincial newspaper describing the sensational murder in 2016 of Joaquin Franco Congregado and 2017 trial and conviction of Cipriano Sanchez del Monte, both ATF-type enforcement agents.
- 20:1820:18, 29 April 2024 diff hist +63 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado
- 20:1320:13, 29 April 2024 diff hist −5 m Navalvillar de Ibor →Murder of Joaquin Franco Congregado: fixed link to town website and fixed typos.
- 19:5919:59, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1,348 Navalvillar de Ibor →History: Added the account of an infamous 1916 murder that happened at this small town, resulting in a book, numerous articles, and a video account.
- 19:3619:36, 29 April 2024 diff hist +4 Navalvillar de Ibor →History: Fixed verb tense and pronoun translation errors in the existing text. (For example, past tense "became" was incorrectly translated as present tense "becomes". Also looks like Google Translate incorrectly translated the pronoun referring to the town as "he" rather than "it". This is a common mistake that was not caught by the previous translator.
- 19:2519:25, 29 April 2024 diff hist −165 Navalvillar de Ibor →Demographics: increased the size of the graphic to make it legible.
- 19:2419:24, 29 April 2024 diff hist +159 Navalvillar de Ibor →Demographics
- 19:2319:23, 29 April 2024 diff hist +262 Navalvillar de Ibor →Demographics: added text and links referring to graphic and explaining terms.
