User contributions for Ahpook
A user with 2,976 edits. Account created on 5 July 2005.
2 October 2022
- 15:0515:05, 2 October 2022 diff hist −1 Henry VIII "Fruits" is incorrect in this context as fruit is a mass noun and is not plural. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
1 October 2022
- 16:4116:41, 1 October 2022 diff hist −32 Asteroid impact avoidance Removed mention of 'keyhole - without explanation it seems confusing. The section makes sense without it. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 16:3716:37, 1 October 2022 diff hist −8 Asteroid impact avoidance Removed 'thermal' from 'thermal heat'. Tautology. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
13 August 2022
- 07:2107:21, 13 August 2022 diff hist +1 Enter Sandman Replaced 'producing team' with 'production team' - correct grammar. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
9 August 2022
- 17:4317:43, 9 August 2022 diff hist −1 Stealth (film) Slight changes to grammar and sentence length. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 17:3917:39, 9 August 2022 diff hist +22 Stealth (film) Included in-text explanation of acronym and adjusted wiki link to match. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 17:2417:24, 9 August 2022 diff hist +3 Ezra Miller Replaced 'alcohol bottles' with 'bottles of alcohol' - more descriptive and also the phrase used in the referenced article. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
7 August 2022
- 20:2120:21, 7 August 2022 diff hist −1 Antimatter Replaced 'impacting' with 'striking' - to remove impacting/affecting ambiguity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 20:0520:05, 7 August 2022 diff hist −1 Cosmic ray Corrected spelling - 'loosing' to 'losing'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
3 August 2022
- 19:0019:00, 3 August 2022 diff hist −4 Octopus Replaced 'multiple times' with 'repeatedly'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
4 March 2022
- 21:4221:42, 4 March 2022 diff hist +2 Concert etiquette Replaced 'her' with 'their' in line with Wikipedia's gendered language guidelines https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Gender-neutral_language Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
3 March 2022
- 19:3119:31, 3 March 2022 diff hist −7 Returnal "traversing across" is a tautology as traversing implies movement. Replaced with 'traversing' Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
16 February 2022
- 20:5720:57, 16 February 2022 diff hist −3 Webdriver Torso It's more usual to say the interval 'was', more than 'lasted'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
25 January 2022
- 06:1906:19, 25 January 2022 diff hist −11 The Next Civil War →Context: Rephrased for better grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
19 January 2022
- 00:3800:38, 19 January 2022 diff hist −11 Volcanic tsunami Rephrased as 'impact on' could be misconstrued as the effects caused by the flows and lahars when the strike the water physically, rather than the totality of their effects. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
25 December 2021
- 19:4219:42, 25 December 2021 diff hist 0 Melun Diptych Replaced 'His' with 'his' as per Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Capital_letters Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18 December 2021
- 19:4219:42, 18 December 2021 diff hist +61 Blackberri Asked to clarify what Breeze is Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
17 December 2021
- 16:0016:00, 17 December 2021 diff hist +125 Hunky Dory Added request for clarification of 'contractual challenges'. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
2 December 2021
- 16:0616:06, 2 December 2021 diff hist −37 The Dice Man Removed apparent vadalism and removed italics. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
17 September 2021
- 14:4514:45, 17 September 2021 diff hist +14 1984–1985 United Kingdom miners' strike Added 'perjoritively' to the note about strikebreakers being called scabs - context for the term Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
31 August 2021
- 20:1120:11, 31 August 2021 diff hist −16 The Stranglers Removed 'deployed' from comment about which synths were used. Odd turn of phrase. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
21 August 2021
- 13:2013:20, 21 August 2021 diff hist +3 Caul It is usual to say 'impending disaster', not 'pending disaster'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
16 August 2021
- 17:1017:10, 16 August 2021 diff hist +2 Paul Blart: Mall Cop Changed 'void' to 'devoid'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
8 August 2021
- 19:2419:24, 8 August 2021 diff hist −4 The Girl on the Train (2016 film) Replaced 'multiple times' with 'repeatedly'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 17:2117:21, 8 August 2021 diff hist +9 Moonlighting (TV series) Replaced 'vested' with 'fully committed'. 'Vested' in incorrect in this context. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
22 July 2021
- 13:3213:32, 22 July 2021 diff hist +2 Inferiority complex Removed gendered language Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 13:0713:07, 22 July 2021 diff hist −9 Battle of Annual Removed 'Multiple' as blockhouses is already a plural. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18 July 2021
- 16:5416:54, 18 July 2021 diff hist −70 Othello error →History: Simplified language in this section.
15 July 2021
- 14:4914:49, 15 July 2021 diff hist −7 Tinderbox (Siouxsie and the Banshees album) →Background and release: Removed reference to 'abroad', seems a little irrelevant.
- 13:2013:20, 15 July 2021 diff hist +41 Minority Report (film) →Plot: Reworded a few confusing lines, replaced pronouns with names to aid clarity and replaced 'precognition' with 'precognitive' were appropriate.
7 July 2021
- 10:1710:17, 7 July 2021 diff hist −9 Storytelling →Emancipation of the story: Replaced 'push back' with 'superseded'. 'Push back' implies a conscious replacement, not a gradual change.
26 June 2021
- 15:0815:08, 26 June 2021 diff hist −7 Sledgehammer Removed 'iconic' from description of the use of sledgehammers for driving railway spikes. There is nothing iconic in this commonplace useage. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
24 June 2021
- 21:2721:27, 24 June 2021 diff hist −9 John McGeoch I wouls say that neither Ed O'Brien nor John Frusciante are peers of John McGeoch due to their age differences. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
22 June 2021
- 21:1921:19, 22 June 2021 diff hist −15 Siouxsie Sioux →Legacy: Removed description of 'Tatto' as 'proto hip-hop'. It's an opinion and so not really suitable for an encyclopedia article.
8 June 2021
- 13:1113:11, 8 June 2021 diff hist −13 Home Plate (Mars) No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 13:1013:10, 8 June 2021 diff hist +94 Home Plate (Mars) 'Bomb Sag' is not explained Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
11 May 2021
- 14:5314:53, 11 May 2021 diff hist +4 Echo & the Bunnymen (album) →Background: Corrected typ - 'relation' to 'relationship'
10 May 2021
- 09:0509:05, 10 May 2021 diff hist −9 Echo & the Bunnymen 'Multiple' is redundant as 'concerts' is a plural. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
28 April 2021
- 13:0813:08, 28 April 2021 diff hist −9 FIM-92 Stinger →Description: I have removed 'outward' from 'outward targeting range' as I can find no definition of the phrase so I have replaced it with the easier to understand 'targeting range'.
27 April 2021
- 17:5217:52, 27 April 2021 diff hist −9 Echo & the Bunnymen →Porcupine and mainstream success: Amended own edit.
21 April 2021
- 17:0917:09, 21 April 2021 diff hist +21 Operation Black Buck →Black Buck One: Added 'Definition needed' to 'offset markers
19 April 2021
- 23:2623:26, 19 April 2021 diff hist 0 Carrington Event 'Affecting' works better here I think, given the context. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
17 April 2021
- 15:1315:13, 17 April 2021 diff hist −10 Just Another Diamond Day →Background: Replaced 'multiple influences' with 'influence' - less verbose
16 March 2021
- 09:0109:01, 16 March 2021 diff hist −2 Wild Weasel Changed 'sanitizing' to 'clearing'. The is an encyclopedia article, there is no need for military euphemisms. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
11 March 2021
- 14:0614:06, 11 March 2021 diff hist −7 Ram (album) Removed 'verbal' from "perceived verbal slights in the lyrics" - it's redundant in this context as the lyrics are being discussed.
10 March 2021
- 00:3800:38, 10 March 2021 diff hist +56 Nick Mason Asked for explanation of wet-plug Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
9 March 2021
- 09:0209:02, 9 March 2021 diff hist −5 Cigar box guitar Replaced 'socializations' with 'social events'. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
5 March 2021
- 09:0809:08, 5 March 2021 diff hist −1 Ringo Starr 'Hospitalisation' rather than its plural is better grammar in this context. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
4 March 2021
- 18:3618:36, 4 March 2021 diff hist +3 Fungibility →United States: Removed gendered language
- 18:3518:35, 4 March 2021 diff hist +4 Fungibility →In tasks: Removed gendered language
