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17:5517:55, 29 May 2010 diff hist −8‎ Draft (sports) ‎ →‎NBA Draft: removed redundant "as well" after "also"
17:4417:44, 29 May 2010 diff hist 0‎ Basketball moves ‎ →‎Drop step: Standard editing: put comma inside quote
17:4317:43, 29 May 2010 diff hist +2‎ Basketball moves ‎ →‎Fadeaway: added missing article "a"

23:4123:41, 26 May 2010 diff hist +13‎ Basketball court ‎ →‎Three-point line: Changed figure 3 to the word in "three-point." Improved grammar.
23:3423:34, 26 May 2010 diff hist +10‎ Basketball court ‎ →‎Key: Changed semicolons to periods for clarity, esp. where sentence subjects change.
23:2923:29, 26 May 2010 diff hist +16‎ Glossary of basketball terms ‎ →‎T: Clarified definition.
23:2623:26, 26 May 2010 diff hist +1‎ Glossary of basketball terms ‎ →‎T: Corrected to make "five positions" plural.
23:0223:02, 26 May 2010 diff hist −65‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Social forms of basketball: Minor punctuation; also cut disparaging ref to women's basketball as a subset of "show basketball."
22:4922:49, 26 May 2010 diff hist −1‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Blocking: Removed incorrect comma.
22:4222:42, 26 May 2010 diff hist −4‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Shooting: Removed superfluous and incorrect commas.
22:3722:37, 26 May 2010 diff hist 0‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Shooting: (Punctuation) Colon must not introduce multiple sentences.
22:3022:30, 26 May 2010 diff hist −2‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Fouls: As previous: "among" correctly implies more than two leagues.
22:2422:24, 26 May 2010 diff hist −2‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Fouls: Better grammar: "between" implies two, "among" implies more than two
22:1022:10, 26 May 2010 diff hist −6‎ Basketball ‎ →‎Rules and regulations: Improved spelling and grammar to be consistent with prior sentences.