User contributions for 86.188.36.150

25 December 2021

• 16:3216:32, 25 December 2021 diff hist −8‎ Bull ‎ Undid revision 1061776187 by Mike Mounier (talk) Parenthesised text was a complete sentence in its own right. Tag: Undo
• 16:3116:31, 25 December 2021 diff hist +1‎ Codex Gigas ‎ Undid revision 1062003039 by Mike Mounier (talk) Parenthesised part was a complete sentence in its own right though the full stop was in the wrong place.
• 16:2816:28, 25 December 2021 diff hist +63‎ Raising of Jairus' daughter ‎ Undid revision 1062001813 by Mike Mounier (talk) Was challenge4d therefore reference required or claim should be deleted. Tag: Undo
• 16:2616:26, 25 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Jesus of Nazareth (TV series) ‎ More singular possessives as only one Jairus. This wasn't even consistent throughout the article.
• 16:2416:24, 25 December 2021 diff hist +7‎ Jesus of Nazareth (TV series) ‎ WP:ENGVAR British TV series, therefore British English. Only one Jesus so singular possessive.
• 16:1516:15, 25 December 2021 diff hist +14‎ Yusof Ishak ‎ For clarity. Tag: Reverted
• 16:1316:13, 25 December 2021 diff hist +58‎ Yusof Ishak ‎ This image is OK because it is of a wax work and free of copyright under Singaporean law. Tag: Reverted

21 December 2021

• 18:0218:02, 21 December 2021 diff hist −57‎ Gas lighting ‎ →‎Widespread use: Not rare at all. There is no shortage of examples in London including one or more permanently lit on gas from London's sewer system.
• 17:5617:56, 21 December 2021 diff hist +437‎ User talk:Balaji2291 ‎ →‎Sock Puppetry: new section
• 17:5317:53, 21 December 2021 diff hist +424‎ N User talk:110.225.252.146 ‎ →‎Sock puppetry: new section current
• 17:5017:50, 21 December 2021 diff hist −2‎ Headlamp ‎ →‎Acetylene gas flame headlamp: Still grammatically incorrect. Since we are discussing lamps (plural), they must be fitted with multiple lenses as owners would be pissed off at having to share one lens between them. And the article lens still doesn't tell the reader anything about carbide lamps.
• 13:5313:53, 21 December 2021 diff hist −24‎ Headlamp ‎ Grammatically incorrect and WP:OVERLINKed. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 13:4813:48, 21 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Uremic frost ‎ Undid revision 1061390688 by Mike Mounier (talk) Perfectly correct as written. Tag: Undo
• 13:4613:46, 21 December 2021 diff hist −12‎ Towers Financial Corporation ‎ Better to rearrange sentence. Per WP:OVERLINK, we do not link every word that has a corresponding article especially if that article tells you nothing about the subject.
• 13:4013:40, 21 December 2021 diff hist −5‎ Eli M. Black ‎ →‎Business career: 'thus' is frowned upon for encyclopaedic prose.
• 13:3613:36, 21 December 2021 diff hist −1‎ Corporate raid ‎ Undid revision 1061384091 by Mike Mounier (talk) Only one type therefore singular, Tag: Undo
• 13:3213:32, 21 December 2021 diff hist −68‎ Ghost town ‎ Per WP:OVERLINK: do not link every word that has an article particularly if the target tells you nothing about the article subject. Per the same policy, do not link geographical features such as countries with which most people are likely to be familiar. The towns are questionable, but many readers may be unfamiliar with them.

20 December 2021

• 18:0818:08, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1‎ Tibok-tibok ‎ Undid revision 1059236300 by Dalmationrotary (talk) No comma before 'and' Tag: Non-autoconfirmed user rapidly reverting edits
• 18:0618:06, 20 December 2021 diff hist −3‎ Ghost town ‎ Undid revision 1059241416 by Dalmationrotary (talk) No comma before 'and'. Tag: Undo
• 18:0518:05, 20 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Jeni's Splendid Ice Creams ‎ Undid revision 1059252879 by Dalmationrotary (talk) Unreferenced change. You Tube not acceptable as a source as it is unreliable. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 18:0318:03, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1‎ Tavukgöğsü ‎ Undid revision 1059232927 by Dalmationrotary (talk)No comma before 'and'. Tag: Undo
• 14:2014:20, 20 December 2021 diff hist +104‎ Pinhole camera ‎ Undid revision 1061238089 by 86.188.36.150 (talk) Self revert. Tag: Undo
• 14:1814:18, 20 December 2021 diff hist −104‎ Pinhole camera ‎ Undid revision 1061167250 by Mike Mounier (talk) Redundant. Already explained in image caption. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 14:1414:14, 20 December 2021 diff hist −430‎ Pinhole camera ‎ →‎Construction {{anchor|Construction}}: Adds nothing to article unless you plan to list every item that has been turned into a camera.
• 14:1114:11, 20 December 2021 diff hist −53‎ Pinhole camera ‎ Undid revision 1061143102 by Mike Mounier (talk) Again: wordy. Simpler as was and just as accurate. Not convinced the point adds anything. Tag: Undo
• 14:0914:09, 20 December 2021 diff hist −43‎ Pinhole camera ‎ Undid revision 1061141794 by Mike Mounier (talk) Wordy. Simpler as was and just as accurate. Tag: Undo
• 14:0514:05, 20 December 2021 diff hist +1‎ Nabila Khashoggi ‎ 'This' was the correct word here.

19 December 2021

• 13:0213:02, 19 December 2021 diff hist +33‎ Mickey Munday ‎ Undid revision 1061065191 by Mike Mounier (talk) Exactly the same as previous edit. Tag: Undo
• 13:0213:02, 19 December 2021 diff hist +33‎ Mickey Munday ‎ Undid revision 1061065055 by Mike Mounier (talk) "Well known" is not good enough. It has been challenged so needs a reference in support. Either that or it should be removed. Tag: Undo

18 December 2021

• 13:2913:29, 18 December 2021 diff hist −2‎ Plasma protein binding ‎ Undid revision 1060900453 by Mike Mounier (talk) No comma before 'and'. Also no comma between a noun and its associated adjective. You clearly do not understand English correctly and per WP:CIR should not be editing the English Wikipedia. Tag: Undo
• 13:2313:23, 18 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Scott Bolzan ‎ →‎Entrepreneurship: Was correct as written.
• 13:2113:21, 18 December 2021 diff hist +39‎ Henry Molaison ‎ Undid revision 1060882502 by Mike Mounier (talk) Challenged claim must be either referenced or removed. Tag: Undo
• 13:2013:20, 18 December 2021 diff hist +3‎ Kent Cochrane ‎ Undid revision 1060805303 by Mike Mounier (talk) Wrong. Either is grammatically correct. Tag: Undo

17 December 2021

• 17:4717:47, 17 December 2021 diff hist −30‎ British Valve Association ‎ If we knew by whom, it wouldn't be supposedly.
• 17:4617:46, 17 December 2021 diff hist −24‎ British Valve Association ‎ In the 20th century as stated.
• 14:4914:49, 17 December 2021 diff hist −12‎ Election ink ‎ →‎Composition: Out of place here. It is impossible.
• 14:4214:42, 17 December 2021 diff hist +1‎ Silver nitrate ‎ Undid revision 1060736833 by Mike Mounier (talk) Parenthesised is a sentence in its own right following a full stop. Tag: Undo
• 14:4014:40, 17 December 2021 diff hist +78‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:3914:39, 17 December 2021 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:3814:38, 17 December 2021 diff hist +48‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:3714:37, 17 December 2021 diff hist +140‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:3414:34, 17 December 2021 diff hist +189‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:3314:33, 17 December 2021 diff hist +239‎ User talk:86.188.36.150 ‎No edit summary current
• 14:3114:31, 17 December 2021 diff hist −78‎ Making off without payment ‎ Not a good example, See talk with relevant legislation.
• 14:2814:28, 17 December 2021 diff hist +79‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.
• 14:2314:23, 17 December 2021 diff hist +1,739‎ Talk:Making off without payment ‎ →‎Restaurants are not a good example.: new section
• 13:5713:57, 17 December 2021 diff hist +252‎ User talk:86.188.36.150 ‎No edit summary
• 13:5313:53, 17 December 2021 diff hist −78‎ Making off without payment ‎ Not a good example as before. Tag: Reverted
• 13:5213:52, 17 December 2021 diff hist −208‎ Making off without payment ‎ Restaurant not a good example, because the law on eating out is a somewhat more complex. A person eating in a restaurant is not obliged to pay the bill if the food or service is not considered be of a standard commensurate with the price. As a result, precedent holds that no offence can be committed if the decision not to pay occurs after the food is ordered (in other words, the offence only occurs if the food was ordered with intent not to pay). The restaurateur's only recourse is to sue. Tags: Reverted references removed
• 13:4213:42, 17 December 2021 diff hist +24‎ Gasoline theft ‎ →‎From filling stations: WP:BOLDTITLE. No bold here as not incoming redirects. Also add UK term.