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3 September 2014

• 14:4814:48, 3 September 2014 diff hist −4‎ Yes Minister ‎ →‎Politics: typo
• 14:4514:45, 3 September 2014 diff hist +2‎ Yes Minister ‎ →‎Video games: grammar
• 13:1613:16, 3 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Electrolux Trilobite ‎ comma not semicolon
• 11:4211:42, 3 September 2014 diff hist −10‎ Korg Trinity ‎ →‎Variations: grammar
• 11:2211:22, 3 September 2014 diff hist −26‎ Amarna Period ‎ avoid two different spellings of "worship(p)ed" in adjacent sentences, and fix run-on sentence with "however"
• 11:2011:20, 3 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Amarna letters ‎ →‎The quotes and phrases: "Quotations" better, more formal style
• 11:1911:19, 3 September 2014 diff hist +4‎ Amarna letters ‎ grammar, comma
• 11:1811:18, 3 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Superlative ‎ →‎Akkadian: bad commas
• 10:3610:36, 3 September 2014 diff hist +1‎ Microsoft Flight Simulator X ‎ comma reqd
• 10:2110:21, 3 September 2014 diff hist −12‎ Shine–Dalgarno sequence ‎ too much bolding

2 September 2014

• 11:2311:23, 2 September 2014 diff hist −2‎ Third Eye Blind ‎ →‎Fifth album (2011—present): change informal "off of" to more formal "from"
• 10:5810:58, 2 September 2014 diff hist +3‎ The Importance of Being Earnest ‎ →‎Suggested homosexual subtext: separate lines of a poem "like / this" not "like/ this"
• 10:5710:57, 2 September 2014 diff hist +1‎ The Importance of Being Earnest ‎ comma reqd
• 09:4709:47, 2 September 2014 diff hist +1‎ Oleum ‎ my typo
• 09:4709:47, 2 September 2014 diff hist −7‎ Oleum ‎ term/referent confusion, + comma
• 09:3909:39, 2 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Imhotep ‎ →‎Medicine: colon not semicolon
• 08:5308:53, 2 September 2014 diff hist +385‎ Talk:Burning Love (TV series) ‎ →‎Colours in table are WAY too similar -- all shades of pink: new section
• 08:3908:39, 2 September 2014 diff hist −90‎ Semantic URL ‎ →‎Structure: "foo" is a programmer's slang metasyntactic variable. it is not helpful in trying to give an illustrative address example
• 08:2208:22, 2 September 2014 diff hist −3‎ Soul food ‎ more mumbo-jumbo. it's a word, not a "definer"
• 08:2108:21, 2 September 2014 diff hist −19‎ Soul food ‎ the what?!
• 04:3004:30, 2 September 2014 diff hist +3‎ ReDoS ‎ →‎Attacks: as before: "malicious" -- and fix bad caps
• 04:2904:29, 2 September 2014 diff hist +12‎ ReDoS ‎ →‎Evil regexes: fix bad comma, and use the formal word "malicious" instead of hacker slang "evil"
• 04:0604:06, 2 September 2014 diff hist +63‎ Band camp ‎ →‎External links: ==In popular culture== * American Pie Presents: Band Camp
• 03:2903:29, 2 September 2014 diff hist −191‎ These Dreams ‎ →‎Storyline: if "it is uncertain whether..." then we ought not to speculate here
• 02:3902:39, 2 September 2014 diff hist +2‎ List of tallest buildings in the United Kingdom ‎ style (spell out small numbers) -- also, don't say "both" here, as it sounds like one building is in both cities!

1 September 2014

• 23:2323:23, 1 September 2014 diff hist −1‎ Family of Saddam Hussein ‎ →‎Saddam's Family: grammar: "origin is" but "origins are"
• 23:2323:23, 1 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Family of Saddam Hussein ‎ →‎Origin: caps
• 23:1923:19, 1 September 2014 diff hist +149‎ The Addams Family (1991 film) ‎ ==Video game== A game based on the film was released for various handheld and home computer platforms.
• 23:1423:14, 1 September 2014 diff hist 0‎ Wednesday Addams ‎ →‎Appearance and personality: caps
• 13:5813:58, 1 September 2014 diff hist +209‎ Talk:Shooting Stars (1993 TV series) ‎ →‎Clean-up needed: Apparently it's back, and still a horrible mess, with bad style and shaky grammar.
• 12:4312:43, 1 September 2014 diff hist +204‎ Talk:Gender identity ‎ →‎Criticisms: Sex and gender distinction has a criticism section. We could link there.
• 12:4212:42, 1 September 2014 diff hist +244‎ Talk:Gender identity ‎ →‎"Xanith": If you search published books (in Google Books search engine) you'll see that the X-form is commoner in English texts.
• 11:0911:09, 1 September 2014 diff hist +2‎ Dr Zeus ‎ comma

31 August 2014

• 22:5722:57, 31 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Dread Pirate Roberts ‎ →‎Role in The Princess Bride: grammar
• 22:5722:57, 31 August 2014 diff hist +3‎ The Princess Bride (novel) ‎ →‎Games: "Princeless Bride" is a parody, not direct reuse of the title
• 22:1922:19, 31 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Kylie (album) ‎ →‎Background and recording: past tense "cast" not "casted"
• 21:2121:21, 31 August 2014 diff hist +18‎ En gång till (song) ‎ it means "one more time"
• 21:0921:09, 31 August 2014 diff hist −3‎ Georgian scripts ‎ →‎Mkhedruli: comma
• 08:5808:58, 31 August 2014 diff hist 0‎ Kebab ‎ bad hyphen
• 08:1608:16, 31 August 2014 diff hist +16‎ Mario Kart Wii ‎ →‎Development: dangling participle
• 08:1308:13, 31 August 2014 diff hist −3‎ Lego Creator (video game) ‎ →‎Features: "such" is wrong here
• 05:1305:13, 31 August 2014 diff hist 0‎ Menstrual synchrony ‎ Undid good-faith reversion by "I am One of Many". if we don't use "but" then we MUST use a semicolon and not a comma, at least -- look up "run-on sentences" in a grammar book
• 05:1105:11, 31 August 2014 diff hist +20‎ Ham and cheese sandwich ‎ →‎Origins: it's the sandwich, not the pickle, that is known as a pickle sandwich!
• 05:1005:10, 31 August 2014 diff hist −9‎ Ham and cheese sandwich ‎ →‎Origins: typos
• 04:5204:52, 31 August 2014 diff hist −1‎ South Sydney Rabbitohs ‎ →‎Emblem: bad comma
• 00:3300:33, 31 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Glossary of botanical terms ‎ →‎V: misspellings -- see Vesicle

30 August 2014

• 22:1922:19, 30 August 2014 diff hist −85‎ Muster drill ‎ →‎Alarm Signal: redundant diagram
• 21:3521:35, 30 August 2014 diff hist +4‎ Menstrual synchrony ‎ →‎Terminology: run-on sentence
• 09:0809:08, 30 August 2014 diff hist −1‎ Advertising Standards Authority (United Kingdom) ‎ →‎Apple Inc.: grammar
• 08:5208:52, 30 August 2014 diff hist +4‎ Fruit by the Foot ‎ typo