User contributions for 85.193.242.185

16 March 2020

• 16:4716:47, 16 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ Talk:COVID-19 pandemic ‎ →‎Illogical sentence.: answered=no

15 March 2020

• 18:5318:53, 15 March 2020 diff hist +255‎ Talk:COVID-19 pandemic ‎ →‎Illogical sentence.: Thanks for {{edit semi-protected|2019–20 coronavirus pandemic|answered=no}}
• 18:2718:27, 15 March 2020 diff hist +827‎ Talk:COVID-19 pandemic ‎ →‎Illogical sentence.: new section
• 13:4613:46, 15 March 2020 diff hist −4‎ Survivalism ‎ →‎2010 to present: How about "after"?
• 13:3413:34, 15 March 2020 diff hist +15‎ Everyday carry ‎ bad grammar - "everyday carry" is singular
• 13:1913:19, 15 March 2020 diff hist +35‎ List of acronyms: E ‎ →‎ED: added EDC - (a) Everyday carry

14 March 2020

• 12:2812:28, 14 March 2020 diff hist −39‎ Lockdown ‎ Not a synonym. A clampdown is a ''sudden firm action that is taken to reduce CRIME''. See https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/clampdown or https://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/clampdown
• 11:0111:01, 14 March 2020 diff hist −222‎ Dog walking ‎ The source reads: "Here are ten health benefits you can provide to your pet by walking it regularly." Unfortunately, you will not find any further information. So I deleted the source. Tag: references removed

13 March 2020

• 22:0122:01, 13 March 2020 diff hist −25‎ Muteness ‎ →‎Variations: more concise
• 14:3114:31, 13 March 2020 diff hist +107‎ Bottleneck ‎ →‎Other: + Bottleneck (engineering)

12 March 2020

• 19:3319:33, 12 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ Defining vocabulary ‎ "I can ONLY SPEAK Chinese" means that I can't write in Chinese. "I can SPEAK ONLY Chinese" means that Chinese is the only language I know.
• 16:4316:43, 12 March 2020 diff hist +10‎ Graded reader ‎ An obvious nonsense in the SOURCE. A reader (graded or not) is NOT A BOOK! So, please, change the title of the article to "Graded reader book".
• 01:0201:02, 12 March 2020 diff hist +25‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?: copy edit

9 March 2020

• 19:2819:28, 9 March 2020 diff hist +20‎ Talk:Cougar ‎ →‎Ungrammatical sentence: Oops, pretty grammatical but illogical in the current context
• 18:4918:49, 9 March 2020 diff hist +294‎ Talk:Cougar ‎ →‎Ungrammatical sentence: new section

7 March 2020

• 18:0918:09, 7 March 2020 diff hist +31‎ Bus stop ‎ →‎Fakes: according to the source that "backwards time travel" makes sense - it gives the oldies a sense of familiarity.
• 17:4117:41, 7 March 2020 diff hist −13‎ Bus stop ‎ →‎Fakes: more concise wording
• 16:5716:57, 7 March 2020 diff hist +404‎ Talk:Ozzy Osbourne ‎ →‎Redundant words: "he has": new section
• 11:0811:08, 7 March 2020 diff hist +255‎ Talk:Black Sabbath ‎ →‎Black Sabbath were an English rock band (...) ?: new section

6 March 2020

• 19:2519:25, 6 March 2020 diff hist +133‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?
• 17:3417:34, 6 March 2020 diff hist +798‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?
• 15:4915:49, 6 March 2020 diff hist +43‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?
• 15:4615:46, 6 March 2020 diff hist +933‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?: The sentence can be understood in three different ways.
• 13:3613:36, 6 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ Refugee crisis ‎ bad grammar - "influx" is a countable noun
• 10:2110:21, 6 March 2020 diff hist −45‎ Reputation management ‎ clarity + readability

5 March 2020

• 23:4523:45, 5 March 2020 diff hist +330‎ Talk:List of YouTubers ‎ →‎"YouTuber who most commonly does real or fake videos"?: new section

4 March 2020

• 22:3422:34, 4 March 2020 diff hist −3‎ Crystal oven ‎ The "performance" here is called "accuracy". So let's be more precise.
• 21:3121:31, 4 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ User talk:Indrian ‎ →‎Atari: typo
• 21:2321:23, 4 March 2020 diff hist −6‎ Mechanical watch ‎ "put a stop to"? How about "stopped"?

3 March 2020

• 16:3316:33, 3 March 2020 diff hist +393‎ User talk:Indrian ‎ →‎Atari: new section
• 15:5015:50, 3 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ Atari ‎ a better word
• 14:3114:31, 3 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ Work of art ‎ "apart from" is ambiguous, and can mean either "except for" or "in addition to"

2 March 2020

• 22:1322:13, 2 March 2020 diff hist +362‎ Talk:Late-onset hypogonadism ‎ →‎"aging" (used 9 times), or "ageing" (used 4 times)?: I am aware of the underlying grammar

1 March 2020

• 16:4516:45, 1 March 2020 diff hist −2‎ Midlife crisis ‎ readability
• 16:4216:42, 1 March 2020 diff hist +15‎ Midlife crisis ‎ grammar
• 16:1616:16, 1 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ Midlife crisis ‎ readability
• 16:0616:06, 1 March 2020 diff hist −8‎ Midlife crisis ‎ a better word
• 13:0013:00, 1 March 2020 diff hist +219‎ Talk:Late-onset hypogonadism ‎ →‎"aging" (used 9 times), or "ageing" (used 4 times)?: new section

28 February 2020

• 18:5018:50, 28 February 2020 diff hist +3‎ Angioplasty ‎ a better word
• 17:1917:19, 28 February 2020 diff hist −10‎ Coaching ‎ life coaching redirects here

26 February 2020

• 19:0319:03, 26 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ Daguerreotype ‎ readability

25 February 2020

• 19:4219:42, 25 February 2020 diff hist +26‎ Exploration of Mars ‎ →‎Launch windows: in millions of kilometers; "Gm" was a mystery to me
• 19:1119:11, 25 February 2020 diff hist −26‎ Hospital ‎ nonsense removed, though that dam looked impressive...
• 15:0015:00, 25 February 2020 diff hist +138‎ Talk:Serfdom ‎ →‎Serfdom is...

18 February 2020

• 18:5618:56, 18 February 2020 diff hist +248‎ Talk:Herbert Fingarette ‎ →‎What I found.: new section
• 13:3013:30, 18 February 2020 diff hist +19‎ Rape during the Bosnian War ‎ updated link
• 12:4812:48, 18 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ Rape during the Bosnian War ‎ readability
• 11:5311:53, 18 February 2020 diff hist +9‎ Street children ‎ readability: "rapidly increasing"
• 11:3711:37, 18 February 2020 diff hist +2‎ Sex trafficking ‎ grammar
• 10:5710:57, 18 February 2020 diff hist +273‎ Talk:Serfdom ‎ →‎Serfdom is...: new section