User contributions for 74.57.112.230

13 February 2019

• 10:4010:40, 13 February 2019 diff hist −9‎ The Launch ‎ →‎Production: More accurate statement

23 January 2019

• 11:3811:38, 23 January 2019 diff hist −1‎ Attention seeking ‎ →‎Planned ignoring
• 11:3611:36, 23 January 2019 diff hist +9‎ Attention seeking ‎ →‎Reasons
• 11:3311:33, 23 January 2019 diff hist −4‎ Attention seeking ‎ Sorry
• 11:3111:31, 23 January 2019 diff hist +105‎ Attention seeking ‎ reference added
• 11:2311:23, 23 January 2019 diff hist +278‎ Attention seeking ‎ clumsy intro
• 10:4510:45, 23 January 2019 diff hist −48‎ Attention seeking ‎ excessive verbiage, colloquialisms.

17 January 2019

• 11:0811:08, 17 January 2019 diff hist −1‎ The Message (Grandmaster Flash and the Furious Five song) ‎ →‎Critical reception: typo

21 December 2018

• 18:1518:15, 21 December 2018 diff hist −28‎ France in the early modern period ‎ →‎France in the 17th and 18th centuries: Edit of harsh and potentially inciting bias

15 December 2018

• 05:3605:36, 15 December 2018 diff hist −9‎ The Princess and the Pea ‎ color commentary

4 October 2018

• 18:0018:00, 4 October 2018 diff hist −171‎ Alexander Wang (designer) ‎ →‎Early life: Irrelevant. Doesn`t speak mandarin?

27 September 2018

• 04:0804:08, 27 September 2018 diff hist +57‎ Deception ‎ more

23 September 2018

• 14:5614:56, 23 September 2018 diff hist −128‎ Ararat ‎ →‎Places: Belongs in history. I guess it was already referenced...
• 14:5514:55, 23 September 2018 diff hist +144‎ Ararat ‎ →‎History: Added a reference to an existing page. Why wasn't this already here?

28 August 2018

• 14:2414:24, 28 August 2018 diff hist −769‎ Morale ‎ →‎Military: Nonsense. Management of supply lines, air cover and a clear objective (Officers) DO NOT define morale. Elite units do not inherently have better or worse morale. Whole paragraph nonsense.

22 August 2018

• 07:1607:16, 22 August 2018 diff hist 0‎ Nuclear weapons and Israel ‎ →‎Popular Culture References: Fixed capitalization of title of sect.
• 07:1507:15, 22 August 2018 diff hist +157‎ Nuclear weapons and Israel ‎ Added Pop culture ref section

8 August 2018

• 13:1213:12, 8 August 2018 diff hist −293‎ Louis Farrakhan ‎ Removed biased criticism of previous sentence that had no place in opening paragraph. If disputation by farrakhan himself in citation to said accusations were to be included, it should be included in controversies section or criticism. Either way it is a biased source (subject of article) and should not really be included. Tag: references removed

9 July 2018

• 12:4712:47, 9 July 2018 diff hist −35‎ Nonviolent resistance ‎ removed bias, subjective speculative whateverTF

4 July 2018

• 02:2702:27, 4 July 2018 diff hist −62‎ Conscience ‎ Rewrite of intro. !!!! Tag: references removed

23 May 2018

• 15:2615:26, 23 May 2018 diff hist +1‎ Université du Québec ‎No edit summary
• 14:1914:19, 23 May 2018 diff hist +51‎ Generalized anxiety disorder ‎ →‎Treatment

28 April 2018

• 11:5411:54, 28 April 2018 diff hist −51‎ Broadway Video ‎ →‎Divisions: hyperlink to internet embedded in body of article.

14 January 2018

• 13:4113:41, 14 January 2018 diff hist +38‎ Network of Spiritual Progressives ‎ →‎Changing the Bottom Line in America: unsourced material

1 January 2018

• 12:1412:14, 1 January 2018 diff hist +43‎ Price ‎ added other factors that contribute to price innaccuracy

7 December 2017

• 19:4319:43, 7 December 2017 diff hist −26‎ Monaco ‎ →‎Gambling industry: syntax
• 19:3419:34, 7 December 2017 diff hist +407‎ Monaco ‎ →‎Economy: citation added and improved context

27 November 2017

• 15:5915:59, 27 November 2017 diff hist +7‎ Copyright ‎ Grammar

26 November 2017

• 04:2704:27, 26 November 2017 diff hist −191‎ Social mobility ‎ →‎Typology: Partisan and irrelevant Tag: references removed

22 October 2017

• 13:1513:15, 22 October 2017 diff hist −54‎ Self-love ‎ →‎Modern platforms: Bell campaign was about "talking" not self love. Awareness of mental illness is not self love.
• 00:5400:54, 22 October 2017 diff hist −30‎ Self-love ‎ →‎Promotion: Women's rights movement is not about self-love or psychology it is about civil rights, law.
• 00:5200:52, 22 October 2017 diff hist −116‎ Self-love ‎ →‎Mental health: removed editorializing comment. Redundant; what was demonstrated by the study was already quoted.

23 September 2017

• 19:4019:40, 23 September 2017 diff hist +57‎ Mental breakdown ‎ →‎Causes

15 August 2017

• 18:3418:34, 15 August 2017 diff hist −106‎ Gratification ‎ →‎Instant and delayed gratification: Removed unattributed subjective opinion

12 August 2017

• 23:0523:05, 12 August 2017 diff hist +223‎ ANFO ‎ →‎Malicious use: Added citation and cleaned up.
• 21:3421:34, 12 August 2017 diff hist +74‎ Eruv ‎ Inserted request for citation after unsourced and dubious claim. Could be rephrased as well.

4 August 2017

• 03:4403:44, 4 August 2017 diff hist −1‎ Maasai people ‎ Corrected my own edit.
• 03:4303:43, 4 August 2017 diff hist +21‎ Maasai people ‎ Poorly paraphrased summary of article about Oxfam study (ref#6) edited.

3 August 2017

• 08:3708:37, 3 August 2017 diff hist +7‎ Incitement ‎ →‎Relationship with other offences: Grammar: missing words

1 August 2017

• 01:3301:33, 1 August 2017 diff hist +103‎ Age of Enlightenment ‎ →‎Historiography: Sigh. Corrected incorrect format of a request for citation. Again. Also figured out Preview. Sorry.
• 01:2401:24, 1 August 2017 diff hist +118‎ Age of Enlightenment ‎ →‎Historiography: I'm back and I think I got it this time. Added a request for citation...
• 01:1901:19, 1 August 2017 diff hist −14‎ Age of Enlightenment ‎ →‎Historiography: Once again, I suck
• 01:1801:18, 1 August 2017 diff hist −12‎ Age of Enlightenment ‎ →‎Historiography: Correct an ignorant edit of my own. How do you request a citation? I should learn, sorry Tag: references removed
• 01:1501:15, 1 August 2017 diff hist +26‎ Age of Enlightenment ‎ →‎Historiography: No reference for statement of attribution of opinion. "Detractors"

30 July 2017

• 21:2721:27, 30 July 2017 diff hist +480‎ Talk:Freedom of information ‎ →‎Opening paragraph is a mess: new section

16 July 2017

• 13:5513:55, 16 July 2017 diff hist −16‎ Melodrama ‎ edited anti-colonial vandalism

30 June 2017

• 01:3401:34, 30 June 2017 diff hist +11‎ Agbogbloshie ‎ study was of Nigeria, not mentioned.
• 01:3201:32, 30 June 2017 diff hist −64‎ Agbogbloshie ‎ Innaccurate reference to source. Dude claimed the source said 91% efficiency; The source says 52%.

6 June 2017

• 09:1709:17, 6 June 2017 diff hist 0‎ Live Nation Entertainment ‎ removed commas and replaced with decimals in financials.