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13:4213:42, 24 September 2011 diff hist +9‎ Daniel Orozco ‎ Improper title format for a publication title; improper title format (unless a terminal comma is part of the title); poorly written and confused; needless proliferation of subordinate clauses; unnecessary prepositions

13:1713:17, 23 September 2011 diff hist +40‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Availability: More poorly constructed sentences confuse the meaning: if it's out of print, how is it available, and how is a VHS/laserdisc release available via iTunes and Amazon Unbox?
13:1513:15, 23 September 2011 diff hist −2‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Availability: A list may not consist of a single bullet point/improper wiki formatting
13:1513:15, 23 September 2011 diff hist −6‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Sequel: Improperly formatted sentence
13:1413:14, 23 September 2011 diff hist +26‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Sequel: Improper title format; improperly formatted sentence
13:1213:12, 23 September 2011 diff hist +37‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Synopsis: Tone
13:1113:11, 23 September 2011 diff hist +62‎ House of Dark Shadows ‎ →‎Synopsis: Clarify: sentence as worded suggests that the wooden shaft runs off with Maggie; opinion
04:2404:24, 23 September 2011 diff hist 0‎ Otherness (F. Paul Wilson) ‎No edit summary

14:2214:22, 22 September 2011 diff hist +3‎ Zocchihedron ‎ Inaccurate terminology: a sphere does not exhibit "width"
14:2014:20, 22 September 2011 diff hist +15‎ Talk:Zocchihedron ‎No edit summary
14:1814:18, 22 September 2011 diff hist +40‎ Zocchihedron ‎ →‎History
14:1714:17, 22 September 2011 diff hist +4‎ Zocchihedron ‎ Number/tense mismatch
14:1514:15, 22 September 2011 diff hist +5‎ Lou Zocchi ‎ Dice are not "printed", they are manufactured
14:1314:13, 22 September 2011 diff hist −9‎ Lou Zocchi ‎ Dice do not have manufacturing processes (manufacturing processes create them); multiple linking of same term
14:1114:11, 22 September 2011 diff hist +6‎ Hardtack (game) ‎No edit summary
14:1114:11, 22 September 2011 diff hist +10‎ Hardtack (game) ‎ Improper title format
14:0214:02, 22 September 2011 diff hist +97‎ Lou Zocchi ‎ Wikify; excessive linking of commonly understood words; ungrammatical sentence fragments or beginning/ending sentences with non-idiomatic prepositions; biased wording and weasels; unclear and poorly written; excessive redlinks
13:3613:36, 22 September 2011 diff hist −36‎ Space Patrol ‎ No piping in disambig items; improper title format

13:1613:16, 19 September 2011 diff hist +38‎ Sword of Stalingrad ‎ →‎Description: Unclear word choice: no one can know what is meant by a blade being "convex"; photo does not show any curvature to the blade. Replacing with relevant terminology but I'm guessing; if incorrect, please change.
13:0813:08, 19 September 2011 diff hist −1‎ Sword of Stalingrad ‎ Inaccurate terminology: does not match the description of a broadsword as given in the linked article, referred to as a longsword later in this article
13:0713:07, 19 September 2011 diff hist −1‎ Sword of Stalingrad ‎ →‎Description