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20 May 2024

• 22:2922:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12‎ Mike Sillinger ‎ →‎Playing career: Removed the word “immediately,” which made no sense given that he was traded mid-season - there was nothing “immediate” about the trade other than the fact that he “immediately” became a member of his new team upon completion of the trade. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 February 2024

• 18:2118:21, 27 February 2024 diff hist −62‎ James O. Page ‎ Removed the final 12 words from the following sentence: “ The character of Johnny Gage […] was considered to have been named in honor of Page, although the name had been changed, so as to keep in context.” The “so as to keep in context” portion simply makes no sense; the “although the name had been changed” portion is unnecessary, as it is implied by the fact that the character’s name is different from the subject’s. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2207:22, 27 February 2024 diff hist +1‎ D-Generation X ‎ Changed “who” to “that.” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 February 2024

• 08:5508:55, 26 February 2024 diff hist +31‎ Spinning wheel ‎ →‎Function: Cleaned up phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 February 2024

• 17:1717:17, 21 February 2024 diff hist −4‎ Ronald Acuña Jr. ‎ →‎Batting style: removed superfluous “and” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 February 2024

• 22:0522:05, 16 February 2024 diff hist −25‎ Embrittlement ‎ →‎475 °C embrittlement: 1. Changed “the industry” to simply “industry,” as no specific industry is cited. 2. Added comma between “it is widely used in industry because it possesses excellent oxidation resistance” and “but it can have limited toughness,” to clarify that having limited toughness is not a part of why it is widely used in industry. 3. Removed the highly confusing - and seemingly nonsensical(?) - clause “[…],and it has hardened,[…]” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 January 2024

• 03:2203:22, 25 January 2024 diff hist −29‎ Eucharistic miracle of Santarém ‎ The term “scientifically analyzed” is ambiguous in meaning, especially in this context, and it seems likely that its inclusion was intended to add an implied sense of authenticity to the story. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 October 2023

• 14:0314:03, 4 October 2023 diff hist +10‎ Brinicle ‎ Fixed one more sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:5913:59, 4 October 2023 diff hist +21‎ Brinicle ‎ Cleaned up some of the wording in the caption for the first image, although the whole thing really should be rewritten entirely. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 September 2023

• 01:4001:40, 11 September 2023 diff hist +24‎ Streetball ‎ →‎Variations: Fixed a typo and added the additional name “taps” for the so-called “tips” rule (in fact I’ve only ever heard it called “taps” before; never “tips”). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 September 2023

• 15:2715:27, 5 September 2023 diff hist +19‎ Black Star Line ‎ →‎In popular culture: Improved wording of a bulleted example. The term “rap group” is equivalent to the term “sing group” - which is to say that it doesn’t really make sense. Usage of this misnomer is simply an extension of the widespread tendency to conflate “hip-hop,” which describes a genre of music, with “rap,” which describes rhythmic chanting (contrast this with “sing,” which describes melodic chanting). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 September 2023

• 03:2303:23, 1 September 2023 diff hist −31‎ Sharan Patil ‎ →‎Lakshmi Tatma - A Surgery which brought global attention on India: Removed an unnecessary comma as well as a vague & speculative assertion. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 June 2023

• 15:4015:40, 5 June 2023 diff hist +9‎ Crazy Eddie ‎ →‎Advertising: Minor correction & clean-up of phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 April 2023

• 13:5213:52, 18 April 2023 diff hist 0‎ Vitruvian Man ‎ Changed “by” to “of” for readability (and aesthetics). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1904:19, 18 April 2023 diff hist −2‎ Pneumoencephalography ‎ →‎Procedure: Removed multiple unnecessary commas. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:0001:00, 18 April 2023 diff hist −15‎ Mental illness in media ‎ →‎Celebrity suicides: Cleaned up a couple grammatical errors and removed a frivolous reference to an occurrence being “pretty recent.” This section is still quite poorly written, however. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 April 2023

• 15:3215:32, 13 April 2023 diff hist +255‎ Talk:Limited company ‎ →‎Phrasing of “limited by guarantee” explanation: Added copy of sentence in question. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:2915:29, 13 April 2023 diff hist +528‎ Talk:Limited company ‎ →‎Phrasing of “limited by guarantee” explanation: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

8 April 2023

• 09:5309:53, 8 April 2023 diff hist −142‎ Canada convoy protest ‎ →‎Protest goals: Removed a sentence which was clearly neither factual nor objective. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 March 2023

• 14:4614:46, 13 March 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ledger line ‎ Fixed typo. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 September 2022

• 19:4019:40, 6 September 2022 diff hist −535‎ Immigration policy of Donald Trump ‎ Removed two sentences, one of which was irrelevant to the article and the other clearly a statement of opinion.

5 July 2022

• 17:3017:30, 5 July 2022 diff hist −25‎ Ophiocordyceps unilateralis ‎ →‎Natural products: Cleaned up a few instances of poor phrasing and/or word choice. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit