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18 April 2024

• 19:1219:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +10‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarified conversation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0919:09, 18 April 2024 diff hist −3‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Changed wording to avoid confusing repetition Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0819:08, 18 April 2024 diff hist −9‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Removed unnecessary repetition of name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0619:06, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Oxford comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0619:06, 18 April 2024 diff hist +29‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarified events Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0519:05, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Completed parenthetical commas Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0419:04, 18 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Combined sentences for coherence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0319:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist −7‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Removed extraneous words Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0219:02, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Tense issue Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5618:56, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Oxford comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5318:53, 18 April 2024 diff hist −30‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarifies unspecific grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:4118:41, 18 April 2024 diff hist +10‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Eliminated vague pronoun Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:3618:36, 18 April 2024 diff hist −7‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Removed unneutral word. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:3318:33, 18 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarified who did the giving Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:3118:31, 18 April 2024 diff hist +20‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarified sequence of events Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:2918:29, 18 April 2024 diff hist +21‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Clarified character’s presence in a scene Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:3804:38, 18 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Minor spelling and word choice changes Tag: Visual edit
• 04:2504:25, 18 April 2024 diff hist +19‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot
• 04:2504:25, 18 April 2024 diff hist +5,616‎ Kotch ‎ Undid revision 1219503713 by ClueBot NG (talk) because this is a legitimate attempt at a summary. It is flawed, so adding an excessive detail flag. Tags: Undo reverting anti-vandal bot
• 04:1304:13, 18 April 2024 diff hist +5,616‎ Kotch ‎ →‎Plot: Added detailed plot. Tags: Reverted large plot addition Visual edit

25 March 2024

• 14:2714:27, 25 March 2024 diff hist 0‎ Peterhof (Novgorod) ‎ →‎Life and policy Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 14:2614:26, 25 March 2024 diff hist +19‎ Peterhof (Novgorod) ‎ →‎Life and policy: Clarified the content of the image. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

28 February 2024

• 12:2212:22, 28 February 2024 diff hist −1‎ Synchrony Financial ‎ →‎Recent corporate history: There was a typo in the name of GPShopper, the acquired company. Tag: Visual edit

16 December 2023

• 13:4413:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist +423‎ Smooth infinitesimal analysis ‎ Undid revision 1190090200 by Prodraxis (talk) Terence Tao's blog is a respectable source for mathematics information, and his views on analysis are credible; he has published a leading analysis textbook with Springer, the contents of which are based on lecture notes hosted on the same blog. Tag: Undo

15 December 2023

• 22:0622:06, 15 December 2023 diff hist +62‎ Smooth infinitesimal analysis ‎ Added reference to Calculus Made Easy, a popular introductory calculus book whose theoretical support is found in SIA. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 21:4921:49, 15 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Smooth infinitesimal analysis ‎ Typo Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 21:4821:48, 15 December 2023 diff hist +361‎ Smooth infinitesimal analysis ‎ Added "cheap nonstandard analysis" line so that this page can be found be keyword. Tags: citing a blog or free web host Reverted Visual edit

12 December 2023

• 22:0522:05, 12 December 2023 diff hist +389‎ Dollar sign ‎ Added Towne’s mentioning of the faulty theory in a notable essay Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2023

• 06:5506:55, 9 December 2023 diff hist −13‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Changed word order to clarify a list Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:4406:44, 9 December 2023 diff hist +18‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Further clarified the nightclub scene. Otherwise, Kim’s Bodyguards appear to fire on the FBI for no reason, but it is irrelevant to explain the stray bullet after they engage because a bodyguard sees an agent’s weapon. Still, this is the most confusing part of the movie, and people might be turning to this article for clarification. For this reason, I hold the level of detail I have added is justified. Feel free to be more concise if possible. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3406:34, 9 December 2023 diff hist −44‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Deleted unnecessary phrase Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2806:28, 9 December 2023 diff hist −6‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Removed unnecessary word Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2306:23, 9 December 2023 diff hist +295‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Clarified the nightclub scene. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:4105:41, 9 December 2023 diff hist −6‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Clarified Fanning’s seemingly arbitrary arrival. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:5904:59, 9 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Collateral (film) ‎ Changed ‘but’ to ‘and’ since both statements are bad news for Max. I assume this article’s original author’s intention was to imply that after Vincent escapes Max goes to stop Vincent, but is hindered by the attempted arrest. Since Max’s desire to stop Vincent is not stated in the sentence, ‘and’ is the more fitting conjunction as the article stands. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 November 2023

• 07:3807:38, 7 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Economic history ‎ Clarified meaning which was ambiguous in the context of this article Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3407:34, 7 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ Song dynasty ‎ Grammar Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3207:32, 7 November 2023 diff hist +15‎ Song dynasty ‎ Grammar Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2907:29, 7 November 2023 diff hist +21‎ Song dynasty ‎ Linked to article on obscure field Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2607:26, 7 November 2023 diff hist +381‎ Song dynasty ‎ Added additional viewpoint regarding private industry in the Song Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2107:21, 7 November 2023 diff hist −66‎ Song dynasty ‎ Connected two sentences to show they came from the same source Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:1107:11, 7 November 2023 diff hist +12‎ Song dynasty ‎ Moved a sentence for a more cohesive flow Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:5706:57, 7 November 2023 diff hist +368‎ Song dynasty ‎ Added alternative viewpoint on cause of Song economic strength Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 October 2022

• 20:0320:03, 8 October 2022 diff hist +36‎ Sideways ‎ Labeled section that reads like advertisement Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit