User contributions for 67.169.126.106

20 May 2008

• 01:0401:04, 20 May 2008 diff hist −27‎ Rasool Shahwali Zair Mohammed Mohammed ‎ Undoes possible vandalism (using "asool" for "Rasool"). Removes qualification the "trailer was the size of a large RV". Is a trailer bigger or smaller? An attempt to imply inhumane conditions?
• 00:4800:48, 20 May 2008 diff hist +295‎ Talk:Recorder (musical instrument) ‎ Larger photos
• 00:3900:39, 20 May 2008 diff hist +55‎ Hecate ‎ Changes my earlier edit. This article makes the connection to witchcraft clear enough. But not to wicca. That wicca has appropriated something hardly makes it notable, especially barring citation.
• 00:3200:32, 20 May 2008 diff hist −70‎ Hecate ‎ Neither wicca nor witchcraft article mention Hecate. Even if they did, the question is whether wicca or witchcraft is important to Hecate, which they are not. Sentence removed.

19 May 2008

• 23:2223:22, 19 May 2008 diff hist +36‎ Nerful ‎ Advertising. Article should not focus on sales situation, but on the nerfuls, themselves.
• 23:1123:11, 19 May 2008 diff hist +42‎ Alamo Quarry Market ‎ So much peacock, sometimes it's barely readable!!!!! What is a "lifestyle center"? What does "dominating the oldest building" mean? Fix this, please!
• 22:5622:56, 19 May 2008 diff hist +1,452‎ User talk:Thedance123 ‎ Fandom vs. encyclopedic content.
• 22:4122:41, 19 May 2008 diff hist +69‎ Talk:Disintegrator ray ‎ →‎Article rewrite
• 22:3322:33, 19 May 2008 diff hist +1,004‎ N Talk:Disintegrator ray ‎ Rewrite description.
• 22:2522:25, 19 May 2008 diff hist −517‎ Disintegrator ray ‎ Rewrite. See discussion.
• 22:1922:19, 19 May 2008 diff hist −18‎ Erythrinidae ‎ Changed misstatement that implied fish could not both be predators and breath air.
• 22:0322:03, 19 May 2008 diff hist +1,278‎ Talk:Closing credits ‎ Rewrite required.
• 21:5121:51, 19 May 2008 diff hist +27‎ Closing credits ‎ Far too much hand-waving, and uncited material. Probably untrue claim that credits can run so fast slow motion cannot make them visible.
• 21:4421:44, 19 May 2008 diff hist +657‎ Talk:Crimewatch/Archive 1 ‎ Citations much needed.
• 21:3721:37, 19 May 2008 diff hist +70‎ Crimewatch ‎ This needs a great deal of citation. See discussion.
• 21:3221:32, 19 May 2008 diff hist +33‎ KXOL-FM ‎ Article makes several statements needing citation "wasn't without convtroversy", "violated a transmitter lease agreement", "forcing KKBT", "the only station in L.A"
• 21:2921:29, 19 May 2008 diff hist +6‎ KXOL-FM ‎ Removes peacock language "fair amount of" success. Sentence still absolutely needs a citation.
• 21:2321:23, 19 May 2008 diff hist +406‎ User talk:Jrcla2 ‎ Reveley
• 21:2021:20, 19 May 2008 diff hist +30‎ W. Taylor Reveley, III ‎ This reads like personal advertising. Also, quotation should be considerably shortened to avoid what is now a definite copyright violation.
• 21:1621:16, 19 May 2008 diff hist +45‎ Béla III High School ‎ Avoid using language unprovable phrases such as "very effective". Also It would be nice if a school teaching English represented itself with better quality writing!
• 21:1021:10, 19 May 2008 diff hist +410‎ Talk:Bulbul tarang ‎ Removes self advertising
• 21:0221:02, 19 May 2008 diff hist −644‎ Bulbul tarang ‎ Removes section claimin Imtiaz Hussain is best known article. Gets no Google hits with instrument name. Makes several claims sounding like fluff and self-advertising.