User contributions for 67.158.72.135

16 May 2009

• 00:1800:18, 16 May 2009 diff hist −13‎ Zodiac ‎ →‎Precession of the equinoxes: excess verbiage
• 00:1100:11, 16 May 2009 diff hist +443‎ Exotic dancer ‎ Undid revision 290178487 by Altenmann (talk) last change accidentally removed several valuable edits

15 May 2009

• 03:0303:03, 15 May 2009 diff hist 0‎ Exotic dancer ‎ m spelling

14 May 2009

• 12:3412:34, 14 May 2009 diff hist 0‎ Exotic dancer ‎ whether it's "fortunate" or not is POV
• 12:1012:10, 14 May 2009 diff hist −4‎ DVD region code ‎ →‎Region codes and countries: static images on DVDs are almost certainly not actually in PNG format - they're ordinarily MPEG encoded

11 May 2009

• 02:0602:06, 11 May 2009 diff hist −28‎ Dan (rank) ‎ →‎In Japanese arts
• 02:0302:03, 11 May 2009 diff hist +2‎ Dan (rank) ‎ →‎In Japanese arts: comma splice
• 02:0202:02, 11 May 2009 diff hist +1‎ Dan (rank) ‎ →‎Modern usage in Go: comma splice
• 00:5400:54, 11 May 2009 diff hist −2‎ Ganymede (mythology) ‎ →‎Renaissance and Baroque Ganymede: "unidentifiable" would be nonsense - the "un" is clearly an error

10 May 2009

• 15:3815:38, 10 May 2009 diff hist +9‎ Earwax ‎ →‎Ear candling: neither is a reliable reference, and they only refer to one manufacturer anyway
• 15:2615:26, 10 May 2009 diff hist +851‎ Talk:Business card ‎ →‎Card stock section
• 04:4904:49, 10 May 2009 diff hist −6‎ Astrological sign ‎ Undid revision 288075741 by 146.83.212.172 (talk) count 'em, five
• 04:3704:37, 10 May 2009 diff hist −945‎ Betel ‎ →‎Chewing: rm uncited original synthesis. Show a reference of *this claim*, not just examples claimed to be contemptuous themselves, before re-adding
• 04:3504:35, 10 May 2009 diff hist +182‎ Talk:Betel ‎ →‎The part about the colonial Prejudice is not POV
• 04:2604:26, 10 May 2009 diff hist +2‎ Cancer (constellation) ‎ twelve signs, thirteen constellations
• 04:2404:24, 10 May 2009 diff hist +1,115‎ Talk:Aquarius (constellation) ‎ →‎Contradiction: new section
• 04:1504:15, 10 May 2009 diff hist +15‎ Aquarius (constellation) ‎ →‎Astrology: "tropical" astrologers are the ordinary type, and the vast majority at least among English speakers, so what's the basis for saying they disagree with "polled" astrologers?
• 04:1004:10, 10 May 2009 diff hist −22‎ Aquarius (constellation) ‎ there is a separate article for the sign, which is not the same thing as the constellation discussed in this article
• 03:5703:57, 10 May 2009 diff hist +60‎ Template talk:Zodiac ‎ own, clarify
• 03:5403:54, 10 May 2009 diff hist +1,900‎ Template talk:Zodiac ‎ let's try not to re-hash what had already seemed resolved
• 03:3103:31, 10 May 2009 diff hist +838‎ Template:Zodiac ‎ Undid revision 269159267 by Asmeurer (talk) the "ridiculous duplication" is a delicate compromise; discuss on talk before removing
• 03:2603:26, 10 May 2009 diff hist +6‎ Scorpius ‎ the sign is not the same thing as the constellation
• 03:2303:23, 10 May 2009 diff hist −6‎ Cusp (astrology) ‎ Undid revision 288884389 by 65.103.94.96 (talk)

7 May 2009

• 18:0218:02, 7 May 2009 diff hist −15‎ Medically unexplained physical symptoms ‎ no reason for font change

3 May 2009

• 19:2319:23, 3 May 2009 diff hist −106‎ Cusp (astrology) ‎ →‎Sources: this link isn't directly relevant, nor is it even potentially correct - the times are different for each year and time zone
• 19:1919:19, 3 May 2009 diff hist +517‎ Cusp (astrology) ‎ clarify: the debate isn't just "how big is the fuzzy zone?" but also "is there a fuzzy zone at all?"
• 19:0019:00, 3 May 2009 diff hist −59‎ Cusp (astrology) ‎ not clear what that was supposed to mean

2 May 2009

• 23:2623:26, 2 May 2009 diff hist −1‎ Watermelon snow ‎ →‎History: "algae" would be plural
• 17:4317:43, 2 May 2009 diff hist −391‎ The Salt Roads ‎ this is the article about the novel, not about the author; and this paragraph fails BLP even for the author's article (which already contains the same information in more encyclopedic form)

27 April 2009

• 13:0413:04, 27 April 2009 diff hist +279‎ Talk:Natural American Spirit ‎ →‎New references
• 12:2612:26, 27 April 2009 diff hist +75‎ Talk:Natural American Spirit ‎ →‎New references: own
• 12:2512:25, 27 April 2009 diff hist +150‎ Talk:Natural American Spirit ‎ →‎New references
• 12:2412:24, 27 April 2009 diff hist −80‎ Natural American Spirit ‎ It is not acceptable to say that the studies are "industry" studies or in any way unobjective, without references for the claim.
• 01:1601:16, 27 April 2009 diff hist −8‎ Maillard reaction ‎ not a cause and effect, so no "since"; also, no need to wikilink amino acid three times.

26 April 2009

• 23:0923:09, 26 April 2009 diff hist −133‎ Astrological sign ‎ Undid revision 284332732 by 71.41.66.254 (talk) this quote is not helpful in the lead
• 23:0423:04, 26 April 2009 diff hist +325‎ Talk:Natural American Spirit ‎ →‎Additive Free
• 22:4522:45, 26 April 2009 diff hist +37‎ Natural American Spirit ‎ it's legitimate to want to know who sponsored the research, but in fact it was government and not the "Health Industry"
• 22:4122:41, 26 April 2009 diff hist +670‎ Talk:Natural American Spirit ‎ →‎New references
• 22:3722:37, 26 April 2009 diff hist −157‎ Natural American Spirit ‎ Undid revision 286314593 by Lostinlodos (talk) These are peer-reviewed scientific journals.
• 03:3103:31, 26 April 2009 diff hist +25‎ Natural American Spirit ‎ tempted to just change the word "hazards" to "benefits", which would be equally true, but this is closer to NPOV.
• 03:0603:06, 26 April 2009 diff hist −31‎ Business card ‎ →‎See also
• 03:0503:05, 26 April 2009 diff hist −124‎ Business card ‎ →‎Special materials: no reason for exotic formatting
• 00:2100:21, 26 April 2009 diff hist −16‎ Ipanema ‎ not a reference
• 00:1900:19, 26 April 2009 diff hist −185‎ Ipanema ‎ →‎Beach: this isn't the article about national drinks of Brazil
• 00:1800:18, 26 April 2009 diff hist −28‎ Ipanema ‎ →‎Character

23 April 2009

• 13:3913:39, 23 April 2009 diff hist +206‎ Talk:Aries (astrology) ‎ →‎Aries (Ram)
• 13:3113:31, 23 April 2009 diff hist +9‎ Zodiac ‎ →‎Zodiacal constellations: consistency with rest of paragraph

20 April 2009

• 22:2722:27, 20 April 2009 diff hist −2‎ Étouffée ‎ →‎Description: we are descriptive, not prescriptive

18 April 2009

• 14:2114:21, 18 April 2009 diff hist 0‎ Zodiac ‎ →‎Precession of the equinoxes: the seasonal cycle *is* the orbital cycle... the distinction is whether the Solar system or a bigger region should be used for reference
• 14:1814:18, 18 April 2009 diff hist +5‎ Zodiac ‎ →‎Precession of the equinoxes: the term is also loaned into other languages