User contributions for 2604:2000:EFC0:2:4DF6:6328:1154:9482

24 December 2019

• 20:0220:02, 24 December 2019 diff hist −236‎ Adverb ‎ Restored an earlier edit (with the "camel" sentences) that I reverted by mistake.
• 20:0020:00, 24 December 2019 diff hist −270‎ Adverb ‎ Deleted a sentence that served as a poor example. "Only" can be explained much more easily as an adjective modifying "some," as in the sentence, "That is the only one."
• 19:5919:59, 24 December 2019 diff hist −190‎ Adverb ‎ Fixed a sentence in which "even" acted as an adjective (modifying "camels") and changed it into a sentence in which "even" acted as an adverb. Also deleted a sentence that basically demonstrated the same thing.
• 19:0119:01, 24 December 2019 diff hist −23‎ Flat adverb ‎ Fixed a mistaken example (a sentence that did not use the comparative) and a grammatical error (subject-verb agreement).

5 December 2019

• 01:1501:15, 5 December 2019 diff hist −270‎ 1988 Seattle Seahawks season ‎ Fixed several problems, mostly language-related, in the first section.

3 December 2019

• 17:4417:44, 3 December 2019 diff hist −68‎ Heart transplantation ‎ Fixed the first sentence of the "history" section.
• 17:3217:32, 3 December 2019 diff hist +3‎ Heart transplantation ‎ Tried to fix the last sentence of the second paragraph based on what I thought the author's intent was. (It was pretty confusing.)

20 November 2019

• 02:5402:54, 20 November 2019 diff hist −358‎ English determiners ‎ Deleted unsourced nonsense about different pronunciations of "some" in "Some people prefer dry wine" and "I have some money in the bank". The pronunciation is identical and may be stressed or unstressed in either sentence.
• 01:5101:51, 20 November 2019 diff hist −98‎ Content word ‎ Deleted one sentence that was easily provably wrong, and modified another easily provably wrong sentence so that it was no longer absolute.

19 November 2019

• 03:4503:45, 19 November 2019 diff hist −65‎ Content clause ‎ Deleted an incorrect example (I'd prefer (it) if you didn't mention this to anyone). In that sentence, the dependent clause is an adverbial clause, not a noun clase.
• 02:2902:29, 19 November 2019 diff hist +9‎ Adposition ‎ Noted that like "ago", "away" is not normally considered a postposition.
• 01:2301:23, 19 November 2019 diff hist −67‎ Adverbial clause ‎ Deleted some unsupported information. Also changed "subordinate conjunction" to the more commonly accepted "subordinating conjunction."

11 November 2019

• 20:4320:43, 11 November 2019 diff hist −116‎ Sesame Street in the United Kingdom ‎ Fixed many language problems.
• 19:4219:42, 11 November 2019 diff hist −9‎ Nucleoside ‎ Deleted unnecessary bullet points.

9 November 2019

• 23:1423:14, 9 November 2019 diff hist −53‎ 2019 Penn Quakers football team ‎ Fixed some English problems as well as Penn's 2018 league record.

4 November 2019

• 18:0418:04, 4 November 2019 diff hist +16‎ Talk:Guided by Voices ‎ →‎The Band Timeline seems broken or messed up
• 18:0318:03, 4 November 2019 diff hist +391‎ Talk:Guided by Voices ‎ →‎The Band Timeline seems broken or messed up

3 November 2019

• 19:5919:59, 3 November 2019 diff hist −795‎ Titan Rain ‎ Fixed many language problems for both grammar and clarity. Deleted some dubious unsourced information.
• 19:4819:48, 3 November 2019 diff hist −87‎ Titan Rain ‎ Fixed the "Attackers" section to make it much clearer.
• 05:1005:10, 3 November 2019 diff hist −143‎ Littoral combat ship ‎ Fixed several language problems.
• 04:2204:22, 3 November 2019 diff hist +729‎ Talk:Quirky subject ‎ →‎"Gefallen" and quirky subjects: new section
• 03:5503:55, 3 November 2019 diff hist −29‎ Animacy ‎ Deleted an unsourced statement that I believe to be incorrect (that "the face of the clock" is preferred over "the clock's face").

2 November 2019

• 02:4802:48, 2 November 2019 diff hist −354‎ Carlos Beltrán ‎ Deleted a statement that was not supported by its reference. Tag: references removed

31 October 2019

• 02:0502:05, 31 October 2019 diff hist +11‎ The Hunter's Prayer ‎ Added a {{clarify}} incline cleanup tag to a sentence that was so incomprehensible that I couldn't fix it because I couldn't figure out what it was saying.

30 October 2019

• 02:2602:26, 30 October 2019 diff hist +36‎ Murder Party ‎ Inserted inline cleanup tags for poorly sourced information.

29 October 2019

• 06:0006:00, 29 October 2019 diff hist −298‎ Tablets of Stone ‎ Deleted a sentence that was not supported by its Biblical references. Tag: references removed
• 02:3002:30, 29 October 2019 diff hist +683‎ Talk:Irrational number ‎ →‎Unclear terminology: new section

24 October 2019

• 23:3423:34, 24 October 2019 diff hist −57‎ Kursk (film) ‎ Fixed many language problems.

19 October 2019

• 17:1117:11, 19 October 2019 diff hist +558‎ Talk:Nasal congestion ‎ →‎Liquid, too!: new section

4 October 2019

• 20:0420:04, 4 October 2019 diff hist −16‎ Fernando Balda ‎ Fixed several language issues.
• 19:5019:50, 4 October 2019 diff hist −9‎ Lenín Moreno ‎ Fixed several language problems. Also moved the link to Assange's Wikipedia article to the first mention of Assange.
• 19:4419:44, 4 October 2019 diff hist −452‎ Lenín Moreno ‎ Added Guillermo Lasso's first name and deleted an insignificant sentence about congratulating Jair Bolsonaro. Tag: references removed

3 October 2019

• 02:2702:27, 3 October 2019 diff hist +431‎ Talk:Syd Barrett ‎ →‎Semantic error / correction
• 02:2502:25, 3 October 2019 diff hist +186‎ Talk:Syd Barrett ‎ →‎"Tortuous"?
• 02:2402:24, 3 October 2019 diff hist +213‎ Talk:Syd Barrett ‎ →‎"Tortuous"?: new section

23 September 2019

• 03:2803:28, 23 September 2019 diff hist −286‎ Orders of magnitude (numbers) ‎ Deleted the entry for zero, since the beginning of the article explicitly states, "This list contains selected positive numbers in increasing order."
• 02:5402:54, 23 September 2019 diff hist +11‎ Fairy ring ‎ Added a "clarify" inline cleanup tag on the word "devic," which does not seem to be used correctly here.

19 September 2019

• 18:0018:00, 19 September 2019 diff hist −514‎ Red pill and blue pill ‎ Deleted a false statement, as Alice never had "to choose between colored potions to either enable her adventure to continue or go back home." Tag: references removed

29 August 2019

• 15:0515:05, 29 August 2019 diff hist −61‎ Mark Esper ‎ Deleted a statement saying that Esper was "an American corporate executive" (redundant) and "military veteran" (presumably he still is).
• 04:2604:26, 29 August 2019 diff hist −34‎ General Dynamics F-16 Fighting Falcon ‎ Deleted a statement indicating erroneously that General Dynamics was "now part of Lockheed Martin." As stated later, only part of GD was transferred to LM.

21 August 2019

• 10:3910:39, 21 August 2019 diff hist −33‎ The Rover (play) ‎ Fixed an awkward sentence that included the passive voice and an inappropriate verb (one does not "conduct" criticism).

16 August 2019

• 00:0900:09, 16 August 2019 diff hist −65‎ Tiffany & Co. ‎ Deleted an irrelevant phrase about an unrelated company employing an unrelated person.

4 August 2019

• 04:2204:22, 4 August 2019 diff hist −2,282‎ Valency (linguistics) ‎ Deleted a section ("In various languages") that didn't seem to have anything to do with the topic of this article (valency). Tag: section blanking

30 July 2019

• 02:5102:51, 30 July 2019 diff hist −480‎ Dunedin sound ‎ Fixed several problems, such as unnecessary links to Wikipedia pages of regular English words like "drum" and "guitar" and multiple grammar errors. Tag: references removed

27 July 2019

• 20:4120:41, 27 July 2019 diff hist −52‎ F/A-XX program ‎ Fixed some language issues and consolidated some information in a new section ("Program Timeline").

25 July 2019

• 07:0407:04, 25 July 2019 diff hist −279‎ Alcor Life Extension Foundation ‎ Deleted sentence calling cryonics "pseudoscience." (The source was from 2002 and did not call it pseudoscience but quoted one person saying it was "generally viewed" that way.) Tag: references removed

19 July 2019

• 12:1912:19, 19 July 2019 diff hist −1,970‎ Korean Jindo ‎ Moved "temparament" section to "character" section. Got rid of several unsourced statements that sounded opinionated.
• 03:2903:29, 19 July 2019 diff hist −17‎ Large extra dimensions ‎ Fixed language problems in the opening paragraphs.

18 July 2019

• 21:2421:24, 18 July 2019 diff hist 0‎ With the People from the Bridge ‎ Changed publication date from 2018 to 2014, as given at http://www.lyacos.net/books/english/with-the-people-from-the-bridge

11 July 2019

• 04:1004:10, 11 July 2019 diff hist +492‎ Talk:French Parliament ‎ →‎Date discrepancy: new section