User contributions for 213.127.210.95

28 November 2018

• 15:5315:53, 28 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Simon Kimbangu ‎ Incorrect English 'the Belgium government' corrected to 'the Belgian government'~~~~

26 November 2018

• 16:4616:46, 26 November 2018 diff hist +447‎ Talk:Maghreb ‎ Comment on unidiomatic use of English.~~~~

15 November 2018

• 16:4716:47, 15 November 2018 diff hist +367‎ Talk:Rewi Alley ‎ Attention drawn to lack of place of death in information box~~~~

20 October 2018

• 15:5915:59, 20 October 2018 diff hist −7‎ Talk:Wang Jing (businessman) ‎ Minor typo in my previous edit corrected.~~~~
• 15:5815:58, 20 October 2018 diff hist +753‎ Talk:Wang Jing (businessman) ‎ Attention drawn to unclear use of English.~~~~

17 October 2018

• 15:2715:27, 17 October 2018 diff hist +609‎ Talk:Mouille Point ‎ Attention drawn to misuse of a Swedish word in a South African context, and reply given to question about whether the name is French.~~~~

16 October 2018

• 16:5316:53, 16 October 2018 diff hist +362‎ Talk:Tzeli Hadjidimitriou ‎ Attention drawn to confusing use of the word "Greek".~~~~

9 October 2018

• 15:0415:04, 9 October 2018 diff hist −5‎ Doe Maar ‎ Incorrect English "have been one of the most successful bands" corrected to "were one of the most successful bands", since the band no longer exists - a typical error by Dutch-speakers when writing in English.~~~~
• 12:0712:07, 9 October 2018 diff hist +5‎ Honor killing ‎ Incorrect English "United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees state that" corrected to "The United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees states that"

20 August 2018

• 14:5514:55, 20 August 2018 diff hist +534‎ Talk:Orzo ‎ Attention drawn to lack of an Italian version.~~~~

19 August 2018

• 21:1821:18, 19 August 2018 diff hist +453‎ Talk:Utah v. Lafferty ‎ Attention drawn to what strikes me as incorrect use of English.~~~~
• 14:2614:26, 19 August 2018 diff hist +457‎ Talk:Hawn's Mill massacre ‎ Attention drawn to what strikes me as ambiguous use of English.~~~~

12 August 2018

• 16:5516:55, 12 August 2018 diff hist +611‎ Talk:Happy slapping ‎ Attention drawn to what strikes me as incorrect English.~~~~
• 16:4716:47, 12 August 2018 diff hist −4‎ Happy slapping ‎ Grossly incorrect English "on the prevention of the delinquence" corrected to "on the prevention of delinquency"~~~~

11 August 2018

• 16:1216:12, 11 August 2018 diff hist +1,010‎ Talk:Gynaika Magazine ‎ Attention drawn to Greek version of the article, which is not mentioned in the English one (and vice versa).~~~~

9 August 2018

• 15:4915:49, 9 August 2018 diff hist +631‎ Talk:John Smyth (barrister) ‎ Attention drawn to ungrammatical sentence.~~~~

6 August 2018

• 14:4914:49, 6 August 2018 diff hist +571‎ Talk:Kiwifruit ‎ Suggestion that a Greek version be created.~~~~

1 August 2018

• 16:2316:23, 1 August 2018 diff hist +432‎ Talk:Andrei Tarkovsky ‎ Attention drawn to obscure use of English.~~~~

26 July 2018

• 15:0715:07, 26 July 2018 diff hist +502‎ Talk:Le Perreux-sur-Marne ‎ Suggestion addition, based on the French version of the article.~~~~

12 July 2018

• 16:2416:24, 12 July 2018 diff hist +437‎ Talk:Clangers ‎ Attention drawn to missing link.~~~~

8 July 2018

• 15:2915:29, 8 July 2018 diff hist 0‎ De pictura ‎ The name of the author of the third translation was the wrong way round ("Rocco, Sinisgalli") - in the other names the surname comes first. "Rocco" is a common Italian first name, and "Sinisgalli" cannot be anything but a surname, so I've changed this to "Sinisgalli, Rocco".~~~~

29 June 2018

• 16:4816:48, 29 June 2018 diff hist +375‎ Talk:2018 FIFA World Cup Group F ‎ Attention drawn to incorrect use of English by a clearly non-native user of the language.~~~~

28 June 2018

• 14:5714:57, 28 June 2018 diff hist +963‎ Talk:Hybrid word ‎ Attention drawn to inoperative link due to misspelling of a Greek word.~~~~

27 June 2018

• 14:4914:49, 27 June 2018 diff hist +605‎ Talk:Romanization of Korean ‎ Attention drawn to confusing distinction between two terms, which are then used in the text as if they were identical.~~~~
• 14:1714:17, 27 June 2018 diff hist +744‎ Talk:Willow pattern ‎ Attention drawn to discrepancy between information in the Swedish and English versions of the article.~~~~
• 13:3013:30, 27 June 2018 diff hist +5‎ Talk:Spanish dollar ‎ Minor typo in my previous edit corrected.~~~~
• 13:2813:28, 27 June 2018 diff hist +877‎ Talk:Spanish dollar ‎ Attention drawn to inconsistent English translation of the Spanish Queen Isabel's name.~~~~

23 June 2018

• 13:4413:44, 23 June 2018 diff hist +637‎ Talk:Glass Plus ‎ Attention drawn to (probably) incorrect use of English.~~~~
• 13:1313:13, 23 June 2018 diff hist +687‎ Talk:Iraq War ‎ Attention drawn to inconsistency between name of link and name of article it refers to.~~~~

22 June 2018

• 15:4615:46, 22 June 2018 diff hist +1,090‎ Talk:Melania Trump ‎ Attention drawn to factual inaccuracy about her name.~~~~

21 June 2018

• 12:5412:54, 21 June 2018 diff hist +411‎ Talk:Silicon Valley ‎ Attention drawn to superfluous word ("For for") in the article that doesn't appear on the "edit" page.~~~~

17 June 2018

• 13:2913:29, 17 June 2018 diff hist +1,074‎ Talk:International Monetary Fund ‎ Suggestion that syntax and punctuation in one paragraph be changed to make the text easier to read.~~~~
• 13:0613:06, 17 June 2018 diff hist −3‎ Citibank ‎ Incorrect English "acquisition spree that it would occur" corrected to "acquisition spree that would occur"~~~~

16 June 2018

• 14:4814:48, 16 June 2018 diff hist +311‎ Talk:Alan Stivell ‎ Attention drawn to meaningless phrase.~~~~
• 14:2214:22, 16 June 2018 diff hist −5‎ Boris Yeltsin ‎ Incorrectly used English "it's" corrected to "its" - 5 times! "it's" only means "it is" or "it has", and can never be a possessive pronoun like "his" or "our" (a common error, but I've never seen it made so many times in a single text!)~~~~
• 13:5713:57, 16 June 2018 diff hist −3‎ Yegor Gaidar ‎ Incorrect English "The par capita calory consumption under Gaidar diminished by 3,5% from 2526,88 kCal to 2438,17 kCal" corrected to "Per capita calorie consumption under Gaidar diminished by 3.5% from 2526.88 kCal to 2438.17 kCal" (not "The par capita consumption" but "Per capita consumption", not "calory" but "calorie", not decimal commas but decimal point).~~~~
• 13:3713:37, 16 June 2018 diff hist −1‎ Laibach ‎ Incorrect English 'have marked' (referring to 12 June 2018, a date that has now passed) and 'to Korean reunification process' (a frequent error in Wikipedia: a link to a title that does not include 'the' is reproduced without 'the' in running text) corrected to 'marked' and 'to the Korean reunification process' - the incorrect sentence was transferred verbatim to the article to the article 'Arirang', so I've corrected it there too.~~~~
• 13:3413:34, 16 June 2018 diff hist 0‎ Arirang ‎ Incorrect English 'have marked' (referring to 12 June 2018, a date that has now passed) and 'to Korean reunification process' (a frequent error in Wikipedia: a link to a title that does not include 'the' is reproduced without 'the' in running text) corrected to 'marked' and 'to the Korean reunification process'~~~~

12 June 2018

• 12:4312:43, 12 June 2018 diff hist +372‎ Talk:Orlando Letelier ‎ Attention drawn to probably incorrect use of English.~~~~

17 April 2018

• 16:0716:07, 17 April 2018 diff hist +324‎ Talk:Jamala ‎ Attention drawn to incorrect use of English ("forcefully" instead of "forcibly").~~~~

15 April 2018

• 13:5313:53, 15 April 2018 diff hist +1,639‎ Talk:Anti-Soviet partisans ‎ Question about whether one of the groups listed in fact belongs here.~~~~

13 April 2018

• 15:2015:20, 13 April 2018 diff hist +1‎ Romanian revolution ‎ Incorrect English "overtaken by the crowd" (photo caption) corrected to "taken over by the crowd" - you can be overtaken by a road vehicle, but a balcony can't be overtaken!~~~~
• 15:1715:17, 13 April 2018 diff hist +1‎ Nicolae Ceaușescu ‎ Incorrect English "the only violent upheaval of a communist government" corrected to "the only violent overthrow of a communist government" - you can't "upheave" a government, but you can "overthrow" it~~~~

8 April 2018

• 18:0418:04, 8 April 2018 diff hist +469‎ Talk:Christopher (singer) ‎ Comment on price of his property.~~~~

1 April 2018

• 14:5514:55, 1 April 2018 diff hist +1,198‎ Talk:Greeter ‎ Question about why the article only deals with tourist greeters and makes no mention of commercial ones.~~~~

31 March 2018

• 15:4715:47, 31 March 2018 diff hist 0‎ Same-sex marriage ‎ Ungrammatical "Belgium ambassador" (photo caption) corrected to "Belgian ambassador" (all the other ambassadors are described with adjectives such as "Danish" - not "Denmark").~~~~

26 March 2018

• 16:4316:43, 26 March 2018 diff hist +264‎ Talk:Japanese space program ‎ Further comments on probable machine translation of a Japanese original.~~~~

23 March 2018

• 23:1123:11, 23 March 2018 diff hist +773‎ Talk:Atomium ‎ Attention drawn to confusing passage in which over-literally translated French is simply left as it stands, with the unhelpful addition "(sic)".~~~~

21 March 2018

• 16:4516:45, 21 March 2018 diff hist +421‎ Talk:Philippe Sands ‎ Comment on "personal life" section

18 March 2018

• 22:3622:36, 18 March 2018 diff hist +244‎ Talk:Underground restaurant ‎ Attention drawn to probable misspelling in Spanish.~~~~