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10 August 2022

• 09:5309:53, 10 August 2022 diff hist −54‎ Chaos Communication Congress ‎ Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit
• 09:5009:50, 10 August 2022 diff hist −2‎ Black Hat Briefings ‎ →‎History: Fixed typo; suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit

24 July 2022

• 09:3009:30, 24 July 2022 diff hist −83‎ Maila Nurmi ‎ →‎Origin of Vampira: Suggestions for simplicity, style Tag: Visual edit
• 09:2009:20, 24 July 2022 diff hist +3‎ Maila Nurmi ‎ →‎Marriages: Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit
• 09:1809:18, 24 July 2022 diff hist −103‎ Maila Nurmi ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, style (links often obviate commas) Tag: Visual edit

12 July 2022

• 11:5311:53, 12 July 2022 diff hist −204‎ Samuel Barber ‎ Suggestions for simplicity—Barber would've liked that. ;?) Tag: Visual edit
• 11:4111:41, 12 July 2022 diff hist −411‎ Norman Music Festival ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, style. (Proportional fonts have embedded kerning tables for optimal spacing, so manual double-spacing isn't required.) Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2911:29, 12 July 2022 diff hist −57‎ Association of Canadian Women Composers ‎ Suggestions for simplicity. That the society's members are women should be obvious. ;?) Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2711:27, 12 July 2022 diff hist −49‎ Miyamoto (crater) ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, style. (Proportional fonts have embedded kerning tables for optimal spacing, so manual double-spacing of sentences isn't necessary.) Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2411:24, 12 July 2022 diff hist −4‎ Francis Poulenc ‎ →‎Early years: (French place names don't need "The")
• 11:2311:23, 12 July 2022 diff hist −12‎ Francis Poulenc ‎ →‎Early years: Suggestions for reining in WP "the-itis" ;?)

5 June 2022

• 12:0712:07, 5 June 2022 diff hist −30‎ Grace VanderWaal ‎ →‎Reputation and accolades: Suggestions for simplicity, style. • It's not necessary to keep citing the subject's name within the same paragraph, except where it's necessary to avoid ambiguity. • "Accumulated" is usually used to refer to things (e.g. wealth, prizes), not people, for which it sounds somewhat clinical. Cheers! Tag: Visual edit
• 12:0012:00, 5 June 2022 diff hist −5‎ Grace VanderWaal ‎ →‎2016: America's Got Talent: Suggestions for simplicity, style Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 11:5811:58, 5 June 2022 diff hist −41‎ Grace VanderWaal ‎ →‎Family and education: Suggestions for simplicity, style Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 11:5411:54, 5 June 2022 diff hist −7‎ Grace VanderWaal ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, style Tags: Reverted Visual edit

3 June 2022

• 09:3709:37, 3 June 2022 diff hist −52‎ Sky Sharks ‎ →‎Plot: Suggestions for simplicity, grammar Tag: Visual edit
• 08:4608:46, 3 June 2022 diff hist −15‎ Zachary Levi ‎ →‎Early life: Suggestion for WP style (referring to subject by article name) Tag: Visual edit
• 08:4508:45, 3 June 2022 diff hist +258‎ Talk:Zachary Levi ‎ →‎Amazingly good photo!: new section
• 08:4208:42, 3 June 2022 diff hist +8‎ Talk:Zachary Levi ‎ →‎JEWISH roots
• 08:4208:42, 3 June 2022 diff hist +179‎ Talk:Zachary Levi ‎ →‎JEWISH roots: Reply Tag: Reply
• 08:3008:30, 3 June 2022 diff hist +288‎ Talk:Brian and Charles ‎ →‎Trade jargon: new section
• 08:2908:29, 3 June 2022 diff hist −479‎ Brian and Charles ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, omitting redundant detail (in lede) Tags: references removed Visual edit
• 08:1508:15, 3 June 2022 diff hist −6‎ Family Camp ‎ →‎Reception: minor edit Tag: Visual edit
• 07:5907:59, 3 June 2022 diff hist −28‎ Vengeance (2022 film) ‎ →‎Production: Suggestions for simplicity (really, we're still talking about "the film"? LOL), style Tag: Visual edit
• 07:5807:58, 3 June 2022 diff hist −193‎ Vengeance (2022 film) ‎ Suggestions for simplification, omitting redundant detail (in lede) Tag: Visual edit
• 07:5507:55, 3 June 2022 diff hist +52‎ Talk:Lio Tipton ‎ →‎Lio's name change
• 07:5307:53, 3 June 2022 diff hist −271‎ Talk:Lio Tipton ‎ →‎Lio's name change: Indented an entry and deleted indentation request, as specified
• 07:5207:52, 3 June 2022 diff hist +836‎ Talk:Lio Tipton ‎ →‎Lio's name change
• 07:4407:44, 3 June 2022 diff hist +459‎ Talk:Lio Tipton ‎ →‎Jargon clarification?: new section
• 07:2907:29, 3 June 2022 diff hist −81‎ The Forgiven (novel) ‎ →‎Adaptations: Suggestions for simplicity, style. The publishing details ("same imprint", etc.) didn't seem to need to be nearly so complex. Tag: Visual edit
• 06:5506:55, 3 June 2022 diff hist −16‎ Molecular gastronomy ‎ →‎Nicholas Kurti: minor economization Tag: Visual edit

21 April 2022

• 09:0709:07, 21 April 2022 diff hist −12‎ The Great Man's Lady ‎ minor edit Tags: nowiki added Visual edit

26 March 2022

• 09:2709:27, 26 March 2022 diff hist −44‎ The Willoughbys ‎ Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit
• 09:1009:10, 26 March 2022 diff hist −29‎ Day the World Ended ‎ Suggestions for simplicity, clarity. (Other "survivors" were heard on the radio; Rick and Louise remained from the group in the house.) Tag: Visual edit

24 March 2022

• 11:0211:02, 24 March 2022 diff hist −68‎ Moonfall (film) ‎ Suggestions for simplicity. ("Of all time" seems a bit extreme... The future hasn't happened yet.) Tag: Visual edit

9 March 2022

• 05:3205:32, 9 March 2022 diff hist −67‎ The Lady (2011 film) ‎ →‎Plot: Suggestions for simplicity, syntax; fixed typo Tag: Visual edit
• 05:2705:27, 9 March 2022 diff hist −12‎ The Family (2013 film) ‎ minor edit Tag: Visual edit
• 05:1505:15, 9 March 2022 diff hist −145‎ Arthur and the Minimoys (film) ‎ Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit
• 05:0705:07, 9 March 2022 diff hist −64‎ The Messenger: The Story of Joan of Arc ‎ Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit
• 05:0105:01, 9 March 2022 diff hist −6‎ A Bread Factory ‎No edit summary
• 04:5404:54, 9 March 2022 diff hist −357‎ The Marvelous Mrs. Maisel ‎ →‎Season 4 (2022): Suggestions for simplicity & not giving away the whole game. I've suggested removing spoilers from this synopsis. Traditionally, episode synopses present each sub-plot's initiating events, not how they resolve. (I mean, you may as well not see the show, right?)

24 February 2022

• 09:1009:10, 24 February 2022 diff hist −176‎ Shoot 'em up ‎ →‎Origins: Suggestions for simplicity, clarity Tag: Visual edit
• 08:3008:30, 24 February 2022 diff hist −218‎ MAME ‎ →‎History and overview: Suggestions for simplicity; added links Tag: Visual edit

18 February 2022

• 05:3405:34, 18 February 2022 diff hist −63‎ Fan Bingbing ‎ →‎Early life: Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit

16 February 2022

• 12:4112:41, 16 February 2022 diff hist −51‎ Talk:Thompson, Manitoba ‎ →‎Pessimistic Article
• 12:2812:28, 16 February 2022 diff hist +275‎ Talk:Thompson, Manitoba ‎ →‎Pessimistic Article
• 12:2312:23, 16 February 2022 diff hist +1,556‎ Talk:Thompson, Manitoba ‎ →‎Pessimistic Article
• 12:0012:00, 16 February 2022 diff hist −55‎ Thompson, Manitoba ‎ Suggestions for simplicity. (WP readers don't necessarily have amnesia, y'know.) Tag: Visual edit
• 09:4109:41, 16 February 2022 diff hist +6‎ The Rosie Project ‎ →‎Reception: Grammar fixes Tag: Visual edit

23 January 2022

• 08:1908:19, 23 January 2022 diff hist −186‎ Gregg Toland ‎ Suggestions for simplicity Tag: Visual edit