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7 June 2022

• 01:1901:19, 7 June 2022 diff hist +8‎ Jenna Ortega ‎ Currently? FAIL WP:RELTIME Tag: Reverted
• 00:5900:59, 7 June 2022 diff hist −5‎ Dune (1984 film) ‎ WP:SDCONTENT year is already included in page name, so not normally repeated in short description
• 00:5700:57, 7 June 2022 diff hist +829‎ Talk:Top Gun: Maverick ‎ →‎Score box in Reception
• 00:4600:46, 7 June 2022 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Top Gun: Maverick ‎ →‎Problem with: "...then pushes further into high-hypersonic speed, destroying it."
• 00:4600:46, 7 June 2022 diff hist +649‎ Talk:Top Gun: Maverick ‎ →‎Problem with: "...then pushes further into high-hypersonic speed, destroying it.": keep it concise.
• 00:3500:35, 7 June 2022 diff hist +1,417‎ Talk:Top Gun: Maverick ‎ →‎Connely's image in Critical Response section: Keep the image of Connelly but give it a better caption and a better location in the article, please.
• 00:2200:22, 7 June 2022 diff hist −52‎ Top Gun: Maverick ‎ Please explain your changes with an edit summary. The critical response section is not the best place for an image of Connelly. That generic caption is awful. Undid revision 1091884459 by A person in Georgia (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:2000:20, 7 June 2022 diff hist +168‎ Serenity (Firefly episode) ‎ Improve book reference. Add link to the Internet Archive which includes a digital copy of the book in their free lending library. Also tidy.
• 00:1300:13, 7 June 2022 diff hist +388‎ Talk:The Train Job ‎ →‎Plot: Violent fight? A redundant tautology indeed.
• 00:0600:06, 7 June 2022 diff hist −1,021‎ The Train Job ‎ Remove outdated all plot tag. Trim the overlong plot section a little.

6 June 2022

• 23:3523:35, 6 June 2022 diff hist −3‎ Sonic the Hedgehog 2 (film) ‎ Box office gross. Consistency.
• 23:2423:24, 6 June 2022 diff hist −52‎ Top Gun: Maverick ‎ Swap the two images, Cruise already pictured in poster at top of page. Change captions ("love interest" is still an awful caption). Tag: Reverted
• 23:2123:21, 6 June 2022 diff hist +166‎ Top Gun: Maverick ‎ Restore picture, but it definitely needs a better caption, that isn't generic and meaningless. Undid revision 1091881187 by 97.80.116.211 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 23:1923:19, 6 June 2022 diff hist −3‎ Top Gun: Maverick ‎ Box office gross. Consistency.
• 23:1723:17, 6 June 2022 diff hist −3‎ Uncharted (film) ‎ Box office gross. Consistency.
• 22:0122:01, 6 June 2022 diff hist −28‎ Shockwave (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Music: div layout might look okay on other setups but it looks terrible on Microsoft Edge. Remove Div col tags introduced in previous edit.
• 21:5921:59, 6 June 2022 diff hist +22‎ Shockwave (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Music: use table heading row. See Help:List
• 21:4621:46, 6 June 2022 diff hist +235‎ Serenity (Firefly episode) ‎ Reportedly cost $8 million. All the initial setup is going to be expensive.
• 21:4321:43, 6 June 2022 diff hist +728‎ The Train Job ‎ More reviews from tv critics
• 21:4221:42, 6 June 2022 diff hist +683‎ The Train Job ‎ Review from The New York Times.
• 21:1821:18, 6 June 2022 diff hist +145‎ The Train Job ‎ Long plot. MOS:TVPLOT "no more than 500 words".
• 21:1221:12, 6 June 2022 diff hist +1,390‎ The Train Job ‎ →‎Reception: Nielsen ratings, with some context.
• 20:2020:20, 6 June 2022 diff hist +640‎ Shockwave (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ Review from Tor.com Shockwave Part 2
• 19:1019:10, 6 June 2022 diff hist −57‎ The Saint (1997 film) ‎ WP:FILMGENRE try to stick to primary genre. Thriller seems to be the description that recurs consistently across various reviews.
• 19:0519:05, 6 June 2022 diff hist +151‎ The Saint (1997 film) ‎ Besides a book refernece and ISBN I'm not sure what other references could be necessary for a Novelization section.
• 19:0119:01, 6 June 2022 diff hist +29‎ The Saint (1997 film) ‎ Long plot. WP:FILMPLOT recommends 400-700 words.
• 19:0019:00, 6 June 2022 diff hist −47‎ The Saint (1997 film) ‎ Remove WP:ELDUP already included in Reception section.
• 18:5918:59, 6 June 2022 diff hist −61‎ The Saint (1997 film) ‎ Budget removed unsourced figure.
• 18:5418:54, 6 June 2022 diff hist −3‎ Critters (franchise) ‎ MOS:SMALLFONT avoid in Infoboxes
• 18:5018:50, 6 June 2022 diff hist +541‎ Talk:Planet of the Apes ‎ →‎Animal Farm: Comedians in Cars Getting Coffee
• 18:3518:35, 6 June 2022 diff hist +457‎ Talk:Uncharted (film) ‎ →‎Add film's post-credits scene: adequate solution for now
• 18:3118:31, 6 June 2022 diff hist +40‎ Uncharted (film) ‎ Copyedit. Not entirely sure why there's a reference in the middle of the plot section.
• 14:1514:15, 6 June 2022 diff hist +894‎ Talk:Uncharted (film) ‎ WP:FILMPLOT 400-700 words.
• 14:0714:07, 6 June 2022 diff hist −259‎ Uncharted (film) ‎ WP:FILMPLOT should be 400-700 words. If you want to add anything you will need substantially to shorten something else.
• 14:0314:03, 6 June 2022 diff hist +330‎ Star Wars: The Clone Wars (2008 TV series) ‎ mixed-to-positive? pick one. The premiere was panned (and there may have been a lot of fan hate at Ahsoka) but based on reliable sources Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic you cannot say the series was anything less than positively reviewed by mainstream critics.
• 13:5413:54, 6 June 2022 diff hist −37‎ Star Wars: The Clone Wars (2008 TV series) ‎ WP:LEAD Reorder and regroup. Essential description first, setting and time. Lucas called it a continuation of Tartakovsky (not a reboot). Filoni not Tartakovsky. Try to be more concise, none of this runtime detail seems all that important.
• 13:4013:40, 6 June 2022 diff hist +174‎ List of Star Wars: The Clone Wars episodes ‎ Fix dead link.
• 13:3413:34, 6 June 2022 diff hist +30‎ List of Star Wars: The Clone Wars episodes ‎ Claimed? WP:NPOV. Seems as if the show did make over 100 episodes before it was cancelled the first time, and it also seems that this "claim" isn't souced anywhere in this article.

24 May 2013

• 20:4720:47, 24 May 2013 diff hist +82‎ Johnny Doyle (Gaelic footballer) ‎ →‎Inter-county