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at the end of the fifth paragraph of the section "netanyahu I; Barak," the sentence "since 2013 it has been a permanent member of the group" is repeated twice. Chairibum (talk) 20:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
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History Of Israel, Its Not Palestine[edit]
The opening line: "The history of Israel covers an area of the Southern Levant also known as Canaan, Palestine or the Holy Land, which is the geographical location of the modern states of Israel and Palestine." - The early sentence reference to "Palestine" here is incorrect. It was NOT called Palestine when it was known as Canaan or The Holy Land. Also, Palestine is not recognized as a country, or a state.
"The word Palestine derives from Philistia, the name given by Greek writers to the land of the Philistines, who in the 12th century BCE occupied a small pocket of land on the southern coast, between modern Tel Aviv–Yafo and Gaza."
"This country received the name of Palestine, from the Philistines, who dwelt on the sea coast: it was called Judea, from Judah: and is termed the Holy Land, being the country where Jesus Christ was born, preached his holy doctrines, confirmed them by miracles, and laid down his life for mankind."
"While the State of Israel was established on 15 May 1948 and admitted to the United Nations, a Palestinian State was not established. The remaining territories of pre-1948 Palestine, the West Bank - including East Jerusalem- and Gaza Strip, were administered from 1948 till 1967 by Jordan and Egypt, respectively."
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Please fix this issue, in any way you see fit, and don't be pressured by political biases on a supposedly FACTUAL website.
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change "The result of the 29 August 1967 Arab League summit was the Khartoum Resolution, which according to Abd al Azim Ramadan, left only one option -a war with Israel." to "The result of the 29 August 1967 Arab League summit was the Khartoum Resolution, which according to Abd al Azim Ramadan, left only one option – a war with Israel." Imginarypart (talk) 09:18, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
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change "Increased Soviet antisemitism and enthusiasm generated by the 1967 victory led to a wave of Soviet Jews applying to emigrate to Israel. ." to "Increased Soviet antisemitism and enthusiasm generated by the 1967 victory led to a wave of Soviet Jews applying to emigrate to Israel." Imginarypart (talk) 09:21, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
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Near the end of second lead paragraph it says "...., until Saladin’s Ayyubids finally expelled Christian rule late in the 12th century." Although Saladin conquered Jerusalem and most of the Christian kingdom, the Crusaders retreated to Acre and mantained their rule near the coast. It was only a century later that the remaining Crusader kingdom fell completely at the hands of the Mamluks. I think it would be more accurate if the sentence read "From the 11th century to the 13th century, the Land of Israel became the centre for intermittent religious wars between European Christian and Muslim armies as part of the Crusades, with the Kingdom of Jerusalem being almost entirely overrun by Saladin's Ayyubids late in the 12th century, although the remaining Crusader outposts would last for another century."
Further modifications are welcome. Thanks in advance.--2800:2503:121:F0F:1:0:3E80:E756 (talk) 01:32, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
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