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A user with 27 edits. Account created on 6 February 2024.
2 May 2024
- 15:3515:35, 2 May 2024 diff hist +6 Gender inequality Made title sub-heading. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3415:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1 Gender inequality Added a space. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1515:15, 2 May 2024 diff hist −11 Gender inequality Added reliable secondary source. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0915:09, 2 May 2024 diff hist −33 Gender inequality Got rid of double spaces and added spaces. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0115:01, 2 May 2024 diff hist −3 Gender inequality Deleted double spaces. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:5614:56, 2 May 2024 diff hist +8,127 Gender inequality Added a section about gender inequality because of environmental injustices. I added one paragraph about how gender inequality is worsened by environmental injustices, a paragraph with examples about it in the United States, and a paragraph with examples of it across the world. I also added a paragraph on gender inequality in Indigenous communities. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3614:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Gender inequality Corrected spelling of heading. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3414:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist −1 Gender inequality Corrected spelling and phrasing. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3214:32, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2,446 Gender inequality Expanded on the section of Property Inheritance, and added secondary sources. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2014:20, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1 Gender inequality Added apostrophe. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1814:18, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2,618 Gender inequality Created a section titled, “Change in Gender Equality,” which mentions a brief history of gender roles and equality in America over time. It also talks about ways to advocate for a gender equitable world. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1214:12, 2 May 2024 diff hist +261 Gender inequality Rephrased sentences and provided a citation for a quote that was needed. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0614:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1 Gender inequality Made plural. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0414:04, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Gender inequality Corrected spelling error. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0314:03, 2 May 2024 diff hist +3 Gender inequality Corrected spelling and phrasing errors. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0114:01, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1,241 Gender inequality I clarified information that I felt was incorrectly stated. I rephrased some of that information and added new information. I further elaborated on why occupational segregation is bad overall. I provided evidence and a study to prove my point. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4613:46, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1,361 Gender inequality Clarified information and added more information to section. Tag: Visual edit
30 April 2024
- 22:4122:41, 30 April 2024 diff hist +179 Walailak University Added reliable source from secondary news outlet. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 22:4022:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist +190 Rajendra Institute of Medical Sciences Added reliable source from secondary news outlet. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 22:3622:36, 30 April 2024 diff hist −31 Tribes of Yemen Rewrote run on sentence and combined sentence that was split into two. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3222:32, 30 April 2024 diff hist +10 Tribes of Yemen Rewrote sentence to make more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3022:30, 30 April 2024 diff hist −25 Tribes of Yemen Deleted sentence fragment and added a period to conclude sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2722:27, 30 April 2024 diff hist +5 Tribes of Yemen Rewrote sentence to make more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2422:24, 30 April 2024 diff hist −62 Philadelphia Athletics (NFL) Rewrote paragraph to make more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2022:20, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Philadelphia Athletics (NFL) Added comma to indicate the contrast that is being made. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1822:18, 30 April 2024 diff hist +11 Philadelphia Athletics (NFL) Rewrote sentence to be more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1322:13, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Philadelphia Athletics (NFL) Added a comma because it indicates the contrast that is being made. Tag: Visual edit