User contributions for Moaia
A user with 386 edits. Account created on 31 August 2019.
26 February 2020
- 07:5707:57, 26 February 2020 diff hist −15 Sitall fixed childish writing, made other text adjustments
- 07:5407:54, 26 February 2020 diff hist +2 m VLT Survey Telescope →Construction
- 07:5407:54, 26 February 2020 diff hist +4 VLT Survey Telescope →Construction: my earlier edit summary was incorrect, the broken mirror was mentioned here. the damaged mirror cell was not mentioned so mentioned that.
- 07:4707:47, 26 February 2020 diff hist 0 VLT Survey Telescope →Telescope optics: nothing is perfect
- 07:4607:46, 26 February 2020 diff hist +19 VLT Survey Telescope →Telescope optics
25 February 2020
- 23:2523:25, 25 February 2020 diff hist −2 Geoffrey Perry No edit summary
- 22:1022:10, 25 February 2020 diff hist −2 D'Arcy Carden →Career: single sentences do not make paragraphs
- 19:0919:09, 25 February 2020 diff hist −24 VLT Survey Telescope →First images: WP:FLOWERY
- 19:0719:07, 25 February 2020 diff hist −40 VLT Survey Telescope fixed bad formatting and removed redundant text from headings
- 19:0619:06, 25 February 2020 diff hist −9 VLT Survey Telescope first sentence was very poor. improved.
- 19:0619:06, 25 February 2020 diff hist +628 VLT Survey Telescope →Telescope Optics: the original mirror was destroyed in transit. This is obviously quite a notable part of the history of the telescope and I'm amazed it was not mentioned before.
- 12:3412:34, 25 February 2020 diff hist −1 Release of Abdelbaset al-Megrahi MOS and ENGVAR
- 11:1011:10, 25 February 2020 diff hist −133 Knuckle-walking one does not need a "technical" definition in a general encyclopaedia. and lead sections should be 3 or 4 paragraphs, not 5.
- 08:3308:33, 25 February 2020 diff hist −173 Brecon and Radnorshire (UK Parliament constituency) (see previous)
- 08:3308:33, 25 February 2020 diff hist 0 Brecon and Radnorshire (UK Parliament constituency) Different things with the same name do not need to be mentioned. There is a hatnote for this.
- 08:3108:31, 25 February 2020 diff hist −50 Brecon and Radnorshire (UK Parliament constituency) A former name is not a fact so important that it must be mentioned in the lead, and it was wrongly punctuated and formatted anyway
- 08:2708:27, 25 February 2020 diff hist −3 m Fay Jones (politician) →Political career
- 01:3801:38, 25 February 2020 diff hist −3 m Frasier →Awards
- 01:3701:37, 25 February 2020 diff hist −122 Frasier →Future/Revival: improved extremely poor writing
24 February 2020
- 21:2721:27, 24 February 2020 diff hist −400 Papa Bouba Diop fixed grammar and removed trivia from lead
- 17:5417:54, 24 February 2020 diff hist −229 Unsharp masking starting a lead section with a single isolated sentence is very bad writing. also removed decade-old uncited claim, and fixed some formatting problems
- 13:3013:30, 24 February 2020 diff hist −123 The AA →Charitable association: replaced unreliable source, formed fragments into paragraphs
- 13:2313:23, 24 February 2020 diff hist −14 Mikel John Obi →Controversial transfer to England: Section headings don't need labels
- 13:2213:22, 24 February 2020 diff hist −10 m R/place →See also: seems to be no reason for this
- 13:2213:22, 24 February 2020 diff hist −195 R/place →Reception: removed spam links. if there is a reliable source which mentions the clones, it should be cited.
- 13:2013:20, 24 February 2020 diff hist −9 m Low Island (Queensland) No edit summary
- 13:2013:20, 24 February 2020 diff hist −137 Low Island (Queensland) made text more concise, rewrote ungrammatical first sentence
- 13:1713:17, 24 February 2020 diff hist −58 Saudi Arabia →Education: fixed grammar, removed repetition
- 13:1413:14, 24 February 2020 diff hist −15 SS Jeddah rearranged lead, mentioned "Lord Jim" there as it is a major part of the event's notability
- 13:1013:10, 24 February 2020 diff hist −4 m Zarya (ISS module) No edit summary
- 13:1013:10, 24 February 2020 diff hist −65 Two-line element set →History: trimmed verbose text
- 12:4612:46, 24 February 2020 diff hist −207 Newcomb's Tables of the Sun keep it factual
- 12:4512:45, 24 February 2020 diff hist −99 Newcomb's Tables of the Sun first paragraph was very badly formatted. the article is about the work, not the title of the work.
- 12:4112:41, 24 February 2020 diff hist −48 The AA removed sentence from lead, it is not one of the most important aspects of the topic
- 12:4112:41, 24 February 2020 diff hist −38 The AA →Restaurants: improved neutrality
- 12:3712:37, 24 February 2020 diff hist +91 Consequences of the attack on Pearl Harbor rewrote lead to be less vague, also removing non-sentence at end which made no sense.
- 11:2811:28, 24 February 2020 diff hist −252 Clever Hans Undid revision 942327012 by EEng (talk) try reading the article. Stumpf is indeed barely mentioned. The sentences in the lead do not even make basic sense anyway. if you think he is of importance to the topic, you'd want to add text to the article about him Tag: Undo
- 11:2611:26, 24 February 2020 diff hist +36 Dust storm →Causes: ungrammatical parenthesis did not illuminate the situation
- 11:2411:24, 24 February 2020 diff hist −1 Dust storm rm whitespace
- 00:2400:24, 24 February 2020 diff hist −98 Guantanamo military commission →International: improved neutrality
- 00:2300:23, 24 February 2020 diff hist −28 Pandit removed weird clause, redundant with the citation
- 00:2200:22, 24 February 2020 diff hist −3 Pandit consecutive parentheses is not good style
- 00:2000:20, 24 February 2020 diff hist +18 Franklin D. Roosevelt →Paralytic illness and political comeback (1921–1928): reflecting a neutral point of view
- 00:1700:17, 24 February 2020 diff hist −4 m Locked-in syndrome →Similar conditions
- 00:1700:17, 24 February 2020 diff hist −2 m Locked-in syndrome →Causes
- 00:1700:17, 24 February 2020 diff hist −3 Locked-in syndrome don't use undefined acronyms
- 00:1400:14, 24 February 2020 diff hist +38 Pygmalion effect put full names of researchers in lead
- 00:1200:12, 24 February 2020 diff hist −19 Pygmalion effect There is no less specific thing to contrast with
- 00:1100:11, 24 February 2020 diff hist −252 Clever Hans Stumpf is barely even mentioned in the article, so cannot be worth mentioning in the lead
- 00:0600:06, 24 February 2020 diff hist −56 Emotion in animals →Cognitive bias test: removed absurd description, redundant with the one simple word that is already given.
