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A user with 48 edits. Account created on 10 September 2019.
27 February 2020
- 23:0723:07, 27 February 2020 diff hist −23 Andrew S. Tanenbaum No edit summary
- 23:0623:06, 27 February 2020 diff hist −2 m Andrew S. Tanenbaum No edit summary
- 23:0523:05, 27 February 2020 diff hist −14 Andrew S. Tanenbaum Fixed silly repetition of subject's full name
- 23:0323:03, 27 February 2020 diff hist −800 Mote con huesillo →Trivia: removed trivia
- 23:0223:02, 27 February 2020 diff hist −66 Jubilee line Removed incorrect and redundant formatting
- 22:5822:58, 27 February 2020 diff hist −4 m Tourette syndrome →Society and culture
- 22:5622:56, 27 February 2020 diff hist −15 Tourette syndrome →Epidemiology: "common" without qualification means absolutely nothing. It is quantified later in the paragraph. And "under-diagnosed" can only ever be a conjecture by definition, so present it as such
- 22:5222:52, 27 February 2020 diff hist −17 Tourette syndrome Technical terms not useful in lead section
7 February 2020
- 14:1914:19, 7 February 2020 diff hist −7 Massif de l'Esterel Grammar
- 13:4113:41, 7 February 2020 diff hist −15 Spanish naming customs The reader does not need a choice of terms. One suffices.
- 12:5712:57, 7 February 2020 diff hist −159 Worcester Park →Worcester (Park) House: removed opinions, improved style
6 February 2020
- 21:2521:25, 6 February 2020 diff hist −3 Tourette syndrome Grammar
- 21:2321:23, 6 February 2020 diff hist +27 Tourette syndrome →Epidemiology: clearer, objective quantification of prevalence instead of relative adjective
- 21:1821:18, 6 February 2020 diff hist −10 Tourette syndrome Again, the reader does not need a choice
- 21:1621:16, 6 February 2020 diff hist −9 Tourette syndrome Don't give the reader a choice of words: write well and use the best one. In the lead section, that would be the common one
- 21:1521:15, 6 February 2020 diff hist −7 Tourette syndrome Meaningless: it's more common than some things, less common than others. Also word is repeated in next sentence which is not good writing
24 December 2019
- 07:5707:57, 24 December 2019 diff hist −21 Kelvin MacKenzie Grammar etc
23 December 2019
- 18:5318:53, 23 December 2019 diff hist −3 Massif de l'Esterel Article should be consistent with article title
- 18:5118:51, 23 December 2019 diff hist −81 Fixed-term Parliaments Act 2011 →See also: not a valid see also item
- 18:5018:50, 23 December 2019 diff hist −4 m Peter principle No edit summary
- 18:5018:50, 23 December 2019 diff hist +16 Peter principle →Summary
- 18:4818:48, 23 December 2019 diff hist −14 Peter principle No edit summary
- 18:4618:46, 23 December 2019 diff hist +14 Scott Adams →Early life and education
- 18:4518:45, 23 December 2019 diff hist −47 Scott Adams →2016 United States presidential election: a section should not have a lone subsection
- 18:4018:40, 23 December 2019 diff hist −38 Spasmodic dysphonia Improved bad writing
- 18:3418:34, 23 December 2019 diff hist −118 Vivian Oparah Improved poor writing, removed uncited claims
- 16:2016:20, 23 December 2019 diff hist −6 Galileo Galilei →Early life and family
- 16:1516:15, 23 December 2019 diff hist −7 Galileo Galilei →Early life and family
- 16:0316:03, 23 December 2019 diff hist −12 Mary Celeste No need to interrupt things here
- 16:0116:01, 23 December 2019 diff hist +7 Maglev →Vancouver, Canada and Hamburg, Germany, 1986–88: fixed totally garbled sentence
- 16:0016:00, 23 December 2019 diff hist −8 Burning of Jaffna Public Library No edit summary
- 15:5915:59, 23 December 2019 diff hist 0 N User talk:Kijatta ←Created blank page current
- 15:5915:59, 23 December 2019 diff hist +2 N User:Kijatta ←Created page with 'Oy' current
- 15:5915:59, 23 December 2019 diff hist −66 Via del Corso Its ancient historical origins are not important enough to interrupt the first sentence for. Also I don't think it got any narrower over time
20 December 2019
- 23:0223:02, 20 December 2019 diff hist +1 Balloon boy hoax →Investigation: ridiculously stupid grammar error
- 23:0123:01, 20 December 2019 diff hist −9 Balloon boy hoax →Investigation
- 23:0023:00, 20 December 2019 diff hist −64 Balloon boy hoax →Investigation
- 22:5622:56, 20 December 2019 diff hist −3 Balloon boy hoax →Investigation
- 22:5422:54, 20 December 2019 diff hist −83 Grizzly bear →Distinguishing grizzlies and black bears: removed redundant text and formatting
- 22:4622:46, 20 December 2019 diff hist −8 Burning of Jaffna Public Library No edit summary
- 22:3622:36, 20 December 2019 diff hist −13 The Happy Wanderer No edit summary
- 22:2522:25, 20 December 2019 diff hist −11 The Happy Wanderer No edit summary
9 December 2019
- 14:0114:01, 9 December 2019 diff hist −341 1988 Portuguese Grand Prix →Qualifying: improved astonishingly poor quality writing
2 December 2019
- 16:1316:13, 2 December 2019 diff hist −13 Even and odd atomic nuclei →Even mass number: no need to say the same thing twice
- 16:1116:11, 2 December 2019 diff hist −12 Even and odd atomic nuclei No edit summary
- 15:5615:56, 2 December 2019 diff hist −189 Marc Veyrat Removed weaselly writing and fixed a foreigner's use of wrong decimal separator Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4815:48, 2 December 2019 diff hist −95 Tulisa More concise Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4515:45, 2 December 2019 diff hist −7 1913 Great Meteor Procession No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit