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13 July 2015
- 22:5322:53, 13 July 2015 diff hist +4 m User talk:Concord hioz →June 2015: Grammar fix.
- 22:5022:50, 13 July 2015 diff hist +1 User talk:Concord hioz →June 2015
- 22:5022:50, 13 July 2015 diff hist +307 User talk:Concord hioz →June 2015
- 22:0922:09, 13 July 2015 diff hist +560 Talk:New Horizons →Current status
- 21:5021:50, 13 July 2015 diff hist 0 New Horizons Countdown manual update.
- 21:2421:24, 13 July 2015 diff hist +31 New Horizons Adding relative measure of distance.
- 21:1221:12, 13 July 2015 diff hist +267 New Horizons Adding current status to the lede. Now there will be two places to do the manual update, but this will obviously be more visible. No need to make most readers hunt for this time-critical info.
- 21:0821:08, 13 July 2015 diff hist +98 New Horizons →Current status: Providing url for future manual updates. - Hidden text.
- 21:0421:04, 13 July 2015 diff hist +168 New Horizons →Current status: Here is a solution to the traffic concern that had been the rationale for deleting the auto-countdown text - we can just update manually. No need for refresh.
- 19:5019:50, 13 July 2015 diff hist +5 Pluto →Mass and size: Switching to a past tense, since it seems clear that the issue has been resolved to a much finer precision given the new data.
- 19:4819:48, 13 July 2015 diff hist −88 Pluto →Mass and size: Deleting statement that is redundantly addressed at the end of this section. Moving reference.
- 19:4619:46, 13 July 2015 diff hist +70 Pluto →Mass and size: Adding surface gravity info.
- 19:2719:27, 13 July 2015 diff hist +123 New Horizons Noting anniversary, a variable that mission planners have control over.
- 17:0417:04, 13 July 2015 diff hist +460 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion
- 16:5816:58, 13 July 2015 diff hist +2 Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: Rewording, as 'major' does not apply to all bodies in this table.
- 16:5516:55, 13 July 2015 diff hist +14 Surface gravity Undid revision 671277313 by Concord hioz (talk) I had misread the statement. Self-reverting.
- 16:5416:54, 13 July 2015 diff hist −14 Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: I cannot think of a single example of a star or planet that has not achieved hydrostatic equilibrium. Considering how this fits into the very definition, then the word 'usually' is inappropriate. Now deleted, and .
- 16:4716:47, 13 July 2015 diff hist +1 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1
- 16:4616:46, 13 July 2015 diff hist +658 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1
- 16:4116:41, 13 July 2015 diff hist −159 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion: Deleting a comment I made in error. I see an elaboration has been posted, and I will read it.
- 16:3916:39, 13 July 2015 diff hist +921 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion
- 16:3016:30, 13 July 2015 diff hist +8 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1: Tweak.
- 16:2916:29, 13 July 2015 diff hist +13 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1: Correction.
- 16:2716:27, 13 July 2015 diff hist +10 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1
- 16:2516:25, 13 July 2015 diff hist +798 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Klimov VK-1
- 16:1716:17, 13 July 2015 diff hist +534 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion: New subsection, seeing as how the VK-1 is now being used as the basis for rebuttal.
- 16:0916:09, 13 July 2015 diff hist +1,765 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion
- 15:5515:55, 13 July 2015 diff hist +742 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Questions, to anyone wanting to revert B-29/Tu-4 inclusion
- 15:3115:31, 13 July 2015 diff hist +8 m Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales explains fact vs opinion: Emphasis.
- 15:2715:27, 13 July 2015 diff hist −2 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales explains fact vs opinion: Tweak.
- 15:2615:26, 13 July 2015 diff hist +484 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales explains fact vs opinion
- 15:2015:20, 13 July 2015 diff hist +268 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales explains fact vs opinion
- 15:1515:15, 13 July 2015 diff hist +176 User talk:Bbb23 →User:Concord hioz
- 15:1315:13, 13 July 2015 diff hist +289 Waveguide Giving the basic explanation up front.
- 15:0615:06, 13 July 2015 diff hist +167 Waveguide Explaining what usually happens without waveguides.
- 15:0015:00, 13 July 2015 diff hist +498 Inverse-square law More richness in the lede is accomplished by contrasting the topic with what the topic is not. In this case, the inverse square law can be better communicated by giving an example of an inverse-power-of-four law, as well as waveguides preserving energy.
- 14:4914:49, 13 July 2015 diff hist +155 Inverse-square law Adding a plain English explanation. The formulas and words like "divergence of a vector field" can severely narrow the audience willing to decipher the actual meaning.
- 14:4514:45, 13 July 2015 diff hist +140 Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: Explaining the fundamental cause of the inverse square law.
- 14:3814:38, 13 July 2015 diff hist +96 m Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: Style edit.
- 14:3514:35, 13 July 2015 diff hist 0 m Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: This looks like a better break point.
- 14:3314:33, 13 July 2015 diff hist −27 Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: "compared with Earth is no longer needed, now that units have been explicitly stated.
- 14:3114:31, 13 July 2015 diff hist +109 Surface gravity →Mass, radius and surface gravity: This table did not state the units being used. Fixed. Units are very important, and we should not be challenging readers to play detective in order to figure it out.
- 12:4312:43, 13 July 2015 diff hist +1,558 Martin Luther King Jr. authorship issues This lede had been written as though NPOV stood for NEUTERED Point Of View. I've given some effort to fix that. Because plagiarism was substantiated, by various methods, the TITLE of this article needs to be changed, as that too has been neutered.
- 01:1301:13, 13 July 2015 diff hist +39 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales explains fact vs opinion: Adding photo to further emphasize where these statements are coming from. Policy words have repeatedly been ignored. Perhaps it will be less easy to ignore a face, particularly this face.
- 00:2100:21, 13 July 2015 diff hist +1 m Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →Jimmy Wales: Wikipedia core value is to accurately reflect what the sources say
- 00:2000:20, 13 July 2015 diff hist +726 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft Another Jimmy Wales quote. This time referring to the accurate reflection of what sources say as a Core Value of Wikipedia.
12 July 2015
- 23:5023:50, 12 July 2015 diff hist +967 User talk:Concord hioz →June 2015
- 23:3723:37, 12 July 2015 diff hist −1 List of most-produced aircraft [dummy edit] Anyone who reverts is going against actual Consensus, and going against how Jimmy Wales clearly tells us this encyclopedia needs to be operated.
- 23:3423:34, 12 July 2015 diff hist +349 List of most-produced aircraft Undid revision 669208736 by Ahunt (talk) Consensus has been established by reliable sources. Hear it straight from Jimmy Wales in latest Talk post.
- 23:2923:29, 12 July 2015 diff hist +2,236 Talk:List of most-produced aircraft →B-29/Tu-4