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A user with 173 edits. Account created on 25 February 2006.
17 May 2014
- 03:4303:43, 17 May 2014 diff hist +392 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: returning...this part of the report became a big part of the subsequent discussion as it was not as expected. Certainly not irrelevant. Best to leave in.
14 May 2014
- 04:3304:33, 14 May 2014 diff hist +1 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: this should have had a closed quote indicating a direct quotation from the report which is likely what confused the other editor regarding the source, it's direct from the official report, not a random comment
- 04:3104:31, 14 May 2014 diff hist +183 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting Undid revision 607647487 Undoing...this was based on eyewitness accounts and is in the official investigation report. It's not just a random comment, but part of the state's official conclusion
- 04:2704:27, 14 May 2014 diff hist −343 Video game →Controversy: the way this was worded, I think was meant to have a counter argument, not more news examples.
9 March 2014
- 04:2504:25, 9 March 2014 diff hist +275 User talk:Myrtlegroggins No edit summary
15 February 2014
- 14:0814:08, 15 February 2014 diff hist +117 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: editing for clarity...the police findings did not cause the renewed debate, news rumors did. The final report, if anything, dampened the debate.
28 November 2013
- 18:5418:54, 28 November 2013 diff hist +936 User talk:Ianmacm No edit summary
- 18:4718:47, 28 November 2013 diff hist −2 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: if we're going by the actual investigation report, not the initial rumors, we should be precise...I believe they list twelve games found
- 14:1214:12, 28 November 2013 diff hist +165 User talk:Avalongod →Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting
- 04:2304:23, 28 November 2013 diff hist +766 User talk:Avalongod →Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting
- 04:1904:19, 28 November 2013 diff hist +265 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: editing a bit for a compromise version
- 04:1304:13, 28 November 2013 diff hist +25 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: Looking at the report now, they found 12 games...if priced $60 each that would be $720, not "thousands"...it is correct to differentiate between the initial rumors and the final report.
26 November 2013
- 22:2522:25, 26 November 2013 diff hist +872 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: Adding back in some of the other editor's additions which I thought were very good, I hope that is acceptible.
- 22:2122:21, 26 November 2013 diff hist −336 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting Undid revision 583405947 by Ianmacm (talk) Undoing good-faith edit as some important details were removed, although I did like a lot of what was added so I'll try to make a combined version
- 01:5801:58, 26 November 2013 diff hist +741 Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting →Video games: updating the video game section given the official investigation report release.
23 May 2013
- 17:2117:21, 23 May 2013 diff hist −55 Teenage pregnancy →United States: Removing the "see also" as the direct page is problematic with POV issues.
29 March 2013
- 21:2921:29, 29 March 2013 diff hist +11 Effects of violence in mass media Undid revision 547236781 by 82.128.126.141 (talk) undoing, grammatically incorrect...
13 March 2013
- 18:2718:27, 13 March 2013 diff hist +1,317 Talk:Video game controversies →Publicized incidents#Sandy Hook
9 January 2013
- 21:1521:15, 9 January 2013 diff hist +163 Effects of violence in mass media →Researchers' response to criticisms: I actually liked this old part you took out which is illustrative, although I adjusted it for all media, not just video games.
- 21:1321:13, 9 January 2013 diff hist −542 Effects of violence in mass media →Researchers' response to criticisms: Ok, trying to work with you to edit for no-POV. Keeping it on task too...you tend to have "citation bias" only citing studies you like. but I think your citation about theory is fair enough.
- 21:1121:11, 9 January 2013 diff hist +32 Effects of violence in mass media →Criticisms of media violence research: Good point about the uncited criticism. Now cited. :) Need to add reference later (although you could PsychINFO it)
- 21:0821:08, 9 January 2013 diff hist −192 Effects of violence in mass media Ah, my mistake about the citation removal, fair enough. But you still can't make this "majority" comment as it's not true. Even if it were it would be an "argument to consensus" logical fallacy.
- 15:3915:39, 9 January 2013 diff hist +806 Talk:Effects of violence in mass media No edit summary
- 15:3515:35, 9 January 2013 diff hist +514 N User talk:Grcr ←Created page with '==Media Violence== Hi Grcr. We've been going back and forth a bit on media violence. Obvious it's better to work together than undo each other's work. I think...' current
- 15:3215:32, 9 January 2013 diff hist +78 Effects of violence in mass media →Catalyst Model: This was more reasonable I think, just adding some balance.
- 15:2715:27, 9 January 2013 diff hist −416 Effects of violence in mass media Undid revision 532128725 by Grcr (talk) Undoing, your statement isn't true, see the amicus briefs in Brown v EMA and you can't remove sourced material you don't like.
- 15:2415:24, 9 January 2013 diff hist −510 Effects of violence in mass media Undid revision 532125690 by Grcr (talk) Undoing...Grcr, we obviously feel different on some of this...why don't we set up a talk section and see if we can come to a balanced perspective
8 January 2013
- 16:5016:50, 8 January 2013 diff hist +59 Effects of violence in mass media Undid revision 531706949 by Grcr (talk) Undoing good faith but POV edit. There are studies that show exactly this...
- 16:4816:48, 8 January 2013 diff hist −510 Effects of violence in mass media →Researchers' response to criticisms: Undoing good faith by POV edit. Overstates consistency of research evidence, and does not cite both sides inf the debate they reference.
- 16:4416:44, 8 January 2013 diff hist −65 Effects of violence in mass media Undid revision 531717664 by Grcr (talk) Undoing good faith but POV edit. This is not true (even the APA is now reviewing their policy statement on video games) and experts divided evenly in brown v EMA
22 November 2012
- 06:4206:42, 22 November 2012 diff hist +230 User talk:Flyer22 Frozen →Adolescence
- 06:3906:39, 22 November 2012 diff hist +126 Talk:Adolescence →Body image section
- 06:3606:36, 22 November 2012 diff hist +1,206 Talk:Adolescence →Body image section
- 05:1005:10, 22 November 2012 diff hist +766 User talk:Flyer22 Frozen No edit summary
25 April 2012
- 14:2014:20, 25 April 2012 diff hist +300 User talk:Avalongod →Apology
23 April 2012
- 17:0117:01, 23 April 2012 diff hist +471 User talk:Avalongod →Apology
22 April 2012
- 05:4805:48, 22 April 2012 diff hist −2,537 Effects of pornography →Studies and other findings: Removing this POV. Includes self-references and original research on other reported studies. Might be worth adding some findings back in with less POV
- 05:3705:37, 22 April 2012 diff hist +669 Talk:Effects of pornography →The abstract is not very good
- 05:3405:34, 22 April 2012 diff hist +358 Talk:Effects of pornography →JF self-sourced edits
- 05:3205:32, 22 April 2012 diff hist +385 Talk:Effects of pornography →JF self-sourced edits
2 April 2012
- 20:2920:29, 2 April 2012 diff hist +407 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/JetBlue Airways Flight 191 →JetBlue Airways Flight 191
17 March 2012
13 March 2012
12 March 2012
- 17:0417:04, 12 March 2012 diff hist +464 Talk:Adolescent sexuality in the United States →Merge
- 12:5412:54, 12 March 2012 diff hist +96 Talk:Adolescent sexuality in the United States →Merge
- 01:5801:58, 12 March 2012 diff hist +560 Media and American adolescent sexuality →Early sexual activity: adding more citation for balance
- 01:5001:50, 12 March 2012 diff hist +281 Media and American adolescent sexuality →Sexuality in the media: Clarifying with citation
- 01:3901:39, 12 March 2012 diff hist −9,603 Adolescent sexuality in the United States →Media: I think this should do it...redirects to main page, has short but neutral discussion of controversies in this area.
- 01:3301:33, 12 March 2012 diff hist +709 Media and American adolescent sexuality returning this article for balance.
- 01:3101:31, 12 March 2012 diff hist +146 Adolescent sexuality in the United States →Media: well-sourced material critical of "harm" view should not be removed. this is the POV problem with this page.