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22 August 2024
- 20:5420:54, 22 August 2024 diff hist +119 Plywood Further cleaned up the opening statement; moved the information regarding perpendicular stacking to a more logical place; added clarification to the sentence stating that an odd number of layers provides balance, due to the fact that this sounds illogical on its face. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2520:25, 22 August 2024 diff hist +8 Plywood Clarified the wording of the opening sentence without removing any information. However, the final bit after the comma (the bit regarding the perpendicular stacking pattern) is almost certainly an unnecessary inclusion, given that an opening statement is simply meant to provide a top-level summary of the subject. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 July 2024
- 17:1717:17, 14 July 2024 diff hist +1 Bone pain Changed “cause” to “source,” as the periosteal tissue is not the cause of the pain, but rather the sensor of pain. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 May 2024
- 22:2922:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12 Mike Sillinger →Playing career: Removed the word “immediately,” which made no sense given that he was traded mid-season - there was nothing “immediate” about the trade other than the fact that he “immediately” became a member of his new team upon completion of the trade. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 February 2024
- 18:2118:21, 27 February 2024 diff hist −62 James O. Page Removed the final 12 words from the following sentence: “ The character of Johnny Gage […] was considered to have been named in honor of Page, although the name had been changed, so as to keep in context.” The “so as to keep in context” portion simply makes no sense; the “although the name had been changed” portion is unnecessary, as it is implied by the fact that the character’s name is different from the subject’s. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:2207:22, 27 February 2024 diff hist +1 D-Generation X Changed “who” to “that.” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 February 2024
- 08:5508:55, 26 February 2024 diff hist +31 Spinning wheel →Function: Cleaned up phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 February 2024
- 17:1717:17, 21 February 2024 diff hist −4 Ronald Acuña Jr. →Batting style: removed superfluous “and” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 February 2024
- 22:0522:05, 16 February 2024 diff hist −25 Embrittlement →475 °C embrittlement: 1. Changed “the industry” to simply “industry,” as no specific industry is cited. 2. Added comma between “it is widely used in industry because it possesses excellent oxidation resistance” and “but it can have limited toughness,” to clarify that having limited toughness is not a part of why it is widely used in industry. 3. Removed the highly confusing - and seemingly nonsensical(?) - clause “[…],and it has hardened,[…]” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 January 2024
- 03:2203:22, 25 January 2024 diff hist −29 Eucharistic miracle of Santarém The term “scientifically analyzed” is ambiguous in meaning, especially in this context, and it seems likely that its inclusion was intended to add an implied sense of authenticity to the story. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 October 2023
- 14:0314:03, 4 October 2023 diff hist +10 Brinicle Fixed one more sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:5913:59, 4 October 2023 diff hist +21 Brinicle Cleaned up some of the wording in the caption for the first image, although the whole thing really should be rewritten entirely. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 September 2023
- 01:4001:40, 11 September 2023 diff hist +24 Streetball →Variations: Fixed a typo and added the additional name “taps” for the so-called “tips” rule (in fact I’ve only ever heard it called “taps” before; never “tips”). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 September 2023
- 15:2715:27, 5 September 2023 diff hist +19 Black Star Line →In popular culture: Improved wording of a bulleted example. The term “rap group” is equivalent to the term “sing group” - which is to say that it doesn’t really make sense. Usage of this misnomer is simply an extension of the widespread tendency to conflate “hip-hop,” which describes a genre of music, with “rap,” which describes rhythmic chanting (contrast this with “sing,” which describes melodic chanting). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 September 2023
- 03:2303:23, 1 September 2023 diff hist −31 Sharan Patil →Lakshmi Tatma - A Surgery which brought global attention on India: Removed an unnecessary comma as well as a vague & speculative assertion. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 June 2023
- 15:4015:40, 5 June 2023 diff hist +9 Crazy Eddie →Advertising: Minor correction & clean-up of phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 April 2023
- 13:5213:52, 18 April 2023 diff hist 0 Vitruvian Man Changed “by” to “of” for readability (and aesthetics). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1904:19, 18 April 2023 diff hist −2 Pneumoencephalography →Procedure: Removed multiple unnecessary commas. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0001:00, 18 April 2023 diff hist −15 Mental illness in media →Celebrity suicides: Cleaned up a couple grammatical errors and removed a frivolous reference to an occurrence being “pretty recent.” This section is still quite poorly written, however. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 April 2023
- 15:3215:32, 13 April 2023 diff hist +255 Talk:Limited company →Phrasing of “limited by guarantee” explanation: Added copy of sentence in question. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2915:29, 13 April 2023 diff hist +528 Talk:Limited company →Phrasing of “limited by guarantee” explanation: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
8 April 2023
- 09:5309:53, 8 April 2023 diff hist −142 Canada convoy protest →Protest goals: Removed a sentence which was clearly neither factual nor objective. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 March 2023
- 14:4614:46, 13 March 2023 diff hist 0 Ledger line Fixed typo. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 September 2022
- 19:4019:40, 6 September 2022 diff hist −535 Immigration policy of Donald Trump Removed two sentences, one of which was irrelevant to the article and the other clearly a statement of opinion.
5 July 2022
- 17:3017:30, 5 July 2022 diff hist −25 Ophiocordyceps unilateralis →Natural products: Cleaned up a few instances of poor phrasing and/or word choice. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit